Everyone knows what happens to your favorite ponies when they're on screen, but what are they doing behind the scenes?
A retelling of what happens off screen during every episode.
Teen for suggestions of drinking and possibly drugs. Also very random: you have been warned.
I don't condone most of the behavior in this story, it's just for some laughs.
I'm sure lots of us have thought of doing this at some point. Kudos to you for following through with it. Keep up the good work.
Poor rubble . . .
I get the reference, unfortunately. I never liked that show, though, so I'm not going to dignify it with an identification. Plus, its wording fits a bit awkwardly, so even if I did like it, I don't think it would work.
The problem with this story is that it doesn't go far enough. This is the kind of story that really needs to go overboard in order to work. You have a "Random" tag, so make it random! Mix things up a bit more, and add more variety to your jokes. For example, you have Celestia making her best decisions while drunk. That's fine, I guess. When that gets old, then what? Will you stop using Celestia? Running gags don't work too well in the long run without plenty of other gags in between uses. Otherwise, it's just the same thing over and over again.
It's still early enough in the story to prevent these issues before they become problems, though.
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Thanks for the advice, I'll make sure it doesn't become overused.
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Thanks I'm glad you're enjoying the story!
BANISHMENT SPELL!
nice. I like this.
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Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying this
sombody make drunk celestia a thing in this fandom like molestia
... Despicable Me 2 reference
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Write more, sweet one...
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Ha, that would be kind of funny
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Yup, I couldn't pass up the opportunity
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Don't worry, there will be more. I'm almost done with the next chapter! Just you wait, it's going to get pretty random
I like this. A lot.
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Thanks, I'm glad
Im liking this so far. Cant wait to read next chapter
Best. Typo. Ever.
Also, nice Despicible 2 reference.
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Now the question is do I change it or leave it as bean...?
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Thanks!
... well shit.
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Yes, and that war would go down in history
From a newspaper.
Eh, seems legit
This was awesome!
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Thank you so much I'll try to not have a 4 month wait for the next one
I really like Rainbow Dash's Diary! And Celestia swooping in and ransacking the dragon's hoard was also cool.
Funniest thing I've read today's So far.
Big mac's dream made me almost die of laughter.
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Glad you're enjoying it
You're dethpicable. All my yes.
Do Both! Start a seperate thing for the newer episode, but keep going in order with this one
Poor Jeremy!
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True, once had the thought of making a story liek this, sort of. althoug was more pony actors taking the place of the real character inthe show somehwo thank to discord.
Umm, what is "C.R.A.B.S"? And what is the "smoke"?