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Arwhale


All my stories end with the word "gullible." No really, check them out!

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Let's see if the hype pays off!

I'll read it throughout the night and give my opinion in the morning.

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Okey doke!

I really hope it doesn't disappoint...

Still in the process of reading it, but I must say, I love how well the very sensual descriptions of the genitalia fits the asthetic of this fic. Usually, clopfics need lots of cocks'n pussy vernacular, but the delicate flowers and members fits this so well.

And damn, it's hot.

Just found it and read it! :rainbowkiss: Great job! Maybe I can actually get the courage to make a clopfic someday. :moustache:

Wow... this must be the most sir clopfic I have ever read. Like, favourite, and follow mate.

Mmm! Was very good for your first time! Good,clean, almost feral married sex. Fantastic :rainbowkiss:

Well damn, my man. First time writing a sex scene, and you hit it out of the park. Wonderful characterization, sweet and sensual romance and a hefty word count to back it all up. Very, very good.

I do apologies. But I must! :raritystarry:

FIRST!

Good story so far, hope the next chapter is just as good!

Also when might the next chapter of hoof covers briuse come? Your cliff hangers re killing me! :twilightblush:

Wow...
You must have really studied for this! Great work!

Noticed one thing though.

Fancy smiled. "And do you remember that night when we ate that restaurant?

Overall though, marvelous work!

3864887 Clearly they were hungry.

Somehow, I unpublished the second chapter by mistake. I have no idea what happened, but the problem has been fixed.

I'm beginning to wonder how long it was like that. :twilightoops: What in the world...

I was listening to this while I was reading the sex scene. :rainbowlaugh:

I really enjoyed this. Both ponies were in character, the emotions were heartfelt, and the sex was sensual and well-written. RariPants isn't one of my preferred ships, but this fic showed how they can work. Have a fave! :twilightsmile:

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Thanks, Bad! I'm glad you enjoyed my first (last?) attempt at writing a sex scene of any sort. I felt super awkward when I was writing it, as you can probably imagine, but I'm glad people seem to think it turned out alright. This was a ship I don't see as often and I wanted to try my hand at it.

Seems like you're making the rounds with a bunch of my stories, lately. Hmm... :twilightsmile:

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You're welcome! And yup! :twilightsmile:

Note to self:
Discard all other Rarity ships, RariPants is the best.

Best pony deserved this. :raritywink:

This isn't normally my cup of tea but you pulled it off really well. The only thing I might have added is a more direct reference to Rarity feeling that she hasn't lived up to her status as the element of generosity, at least where Fancy is concerned.

I've wanted so long to find some awesome Fancity clop. And now that I have done, I lack the words to describe it. :derpyderp1:

Truthfully, I lack words pretty much all the time anyway so I can't actually think what to say for this. :twilightblush:

Just so damn good! :pinkiehappy::rainbowkiss::twilightsmile::yay::eeyup::raritystarry::derpytongue2:

Feigning indignancy,

I believe the proper term is 'indignation'.

I enjoyed reading, thumbs up!

Very enjoyable and sensual. I do love the lesson Rarity learned, that sometimes happiness can be found not in material things but the comforts of love and family. :heart:

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