In alternate universe, Twilight Sparkle never became Princess Celestia's prized student.
Now villainous Twilight Sparkle seeks revenge on Princess Celestia, but first she needs to get friends assemble a team and something unusual to give her edge for her little devious campaign...
Mass destruction of property and shenanigans ensue!
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Hmm... that was a bad idea Tia.
Why do I get the feeling things are only gonna get funnier.
Good. Good. Potential. I wait for more. What of the others do they get revenge for something as well or just twilight and rainbow?
well, it definitely has potential. but i would seriously consider getting an editor.
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Is my English that bad?
To be precise, I would be happy to hear which areas I have to improve on.
4768850 it wasn't bad, but a lot of it was choppy or incomplete. missing words that needed to be there, and stuff like that. the whole thing was also a little to straight forward. it's hard to explain.
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Thank you!
English is not my home language, hence I have got such kind of errors.
I will be happy if you will point out my mistakes in future.
4768942 not a problem. although (and i don't mean to sound rude) i was serious about you getting an editor. i believe there's a group dedicated to editors, but i don't know what it's called.