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yes! This was what I've been waiting for.:pinkiehappy:

.........oddly enough ponies would probably be the perfect way to kill off titans. titans never attack anything else but humans; ponies are not human.
rarity would be able to kill off legions of them alone. just give her two spinning blades and an umbrella and the titans shall fall.

YES YES YES YES YES! I've been waiting forever for this!!!!!!! Are you the prey no we are the hunters!!!!! :pinkiehappy:

You know, a couple of hours ago, I offhandedly wondered if there were any Attack on Titan crossovers...

3898515 That's too bad, because all of the titans are dead, so your original post is irrelevant.

We are the hunters and they are the titans!

Bout fucking time I saw an Attack on Titan crossover. :rainbowdetermined2:

3898663 How the hell did you miss the last two?

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Why the fuck don't people tell me these things anymore? :rainbowhuh:

So I'm assuming that Sunset killed everyone in the other world. Now the question is, when did she allied herself with Chrysalis, how did she aquire an equestrian 3D maneuver gear and what was she offered to betray her 'friends' if you can call them that. Also, 30 moons is about 2 years and a half, not one.

And what is it with you and having equestrian characters playing as villains needing to be so cold killers? I know it's related to Attack on Titan, but come on. First the dragon, which I can't really argue as it was your plot device for the origin of the titans. Then Flash Sentry, as an assassin, (which I still feel was unnecessary towards the guy, he already has enough misdirected hate on him, there was no need to add a new one.) And now we have Chrysalis and Sunset Shimmer, I can expect death like no tomorrow on these I can guaranty you. It just makes me feel uneasy at the prospect that every character from Equestria in this series is confound to be a killer to some degree.

So let's see how evily unnecessary will you make Sunset. What? I can expect the ruthless killing from Chrysalis, she looks the part. Sunset...She is more of a bully like she was shown, even character wise as she didn't hint any strong dark emotions. Then again, EQG had a lack of character development. Clearly seen from EQG Flash Sentry, that's the guy I hate, not the pony one, who you killed.

Which brings my next question. Will Lion Hearted be hinted in this story? Or is Annie just going to participate but the events of the other story will not present themselves?

3898819 It's funny how you're assuming that EqG is canon in this story considering that

A.) Flash Sentry was stationed in Canterlot and not the Crystal Empire like he is in canon.
B.) Twilight's reaction to Flash in Lion Hearted clearly shows that they never met nor have any feelings towards each other (minus Flash, of course (unless it was still part of his facade.).)
C.) Flash Sentry probably wasn't a spy for an elite group of assassins.

You should probably expect me to take Equestria Girls and all the bullshit it created with a grain of salt.

32 views and featured:pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp:
:trixieshiftright: I may need to look into this..
:unsuresweetie: But I've seen so little of the sho-
:flutterrage:JUST READ THE STORY!!
:applecry: O..Okay..
:yay:

Attack on Titties.

Count me in.

Alright, I loved your attack on titan stories before this. Unfortunately, this one hasn't appealed the same way.

The use of sunset shimmer seems too forced, especially with everything with her. 30 moons is much more than a year, which she said was the last time she was there. She is now a cold blooded murderer who killed the others at her school? And why in the world does she have 3d maneuver gear? How and why is she with chrysalis? Why is she still a human?

So far I am unimpressed with this. But I have seen your work and believe you will explain it well. I will continue to read in good hope

3899303 Nothing in Equestria Girls made any sense, so I'm essentially rewriting it so it makes more sense for both it and my story. I'll actually even give a backstory to the mirror portal like EqG never did.

Why include Sunset Shimmer is there a reason? Is it because she is forever forgotten now? Why not Sombra? I have so many questions!!! :pinkiehappy:

You're saying you're studying to make movies, do you? When you finish, you have to make this fanfiction
A MOVIE

3900781 I wish it were that simple. Even the crappy films I made last semester took a lot of work and effort to make.

ugh such a badass cover art, I know I have the first story on my Read later list but damn it now Im gonna read it. ><

3900882 Well, if you really care about it, you will do a great work

Sorry, but did Petra lose her left or right hand because you said she was missing her left. The later she grabs the back WITH her left... just saying

3902273 Thought I said the right, but I'll change it. Probably a typo.

EREN JAEGERMANJENSEN!!!
HE WAS #1!

3898971 You act like I hate what you have done. When in reality I love it, in a really dark way. I just need to adjust to the changes that's all. Aaaaaaaaaaand...Done.

Dayum, a sequel, now I really gotta finish the first story.

The amount of diabetes in this chapter is too much. I NEED SOME INSULIN NOW!

Don’t be,” the pony responded, accepting the help and letting Rarity pull her back to her hooves.

don't you mean Sasha ?:rainbowhuh:

Pinkie Pie burst inside Sweet Apple Acres, a burst of confetti blasting from behind her seemingly out of nowhere.

you mean Sugar cube corner right ? :pinkiehappy:

Rarity reached for the teapot in between her and Coco, pouring herself another cup.

Don't you mean Sasha reached for the teapot ?:derpytongue2:

3916983 Yeah, I had somewhere to be and really rushed through the editing of this chapter. I've even been fixing the mistakes on my phone in my spare time, and I guess I missed those.

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Comment posted by Great Noun Plural deleted Feb 22nd, 2015

Wait flash sentry was the assassin.......so flash sentry can go back in time.........well I'm gong to read that part with the assassin and hunter and luna

Ok just read the part with the assassin and he has:dark blue coat and black mane

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I was horrified by that. :raritycry:
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So evil critters have escaped from a book...
[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QE0BgpVJl8Q[/youtube]
*Edit*
And with that, I'm all caught up, and await eagerly the next installment!

Interesting, Just started watching the anime, So far it pretty good, keep it up. Now time to read :flutterrage:MOAR:flutterrage: Um... if that's alright with you :fluttershysad:

ErwinXCelestia OTP

no seriously love Erwin and looking forward to this sequel.

........What did you do with Derpy? :ajbemused: Seriously, why are you always taking the more cheery and enjoyable characters and giving them a dark demeanor which seems really plausible for us humans? This is what I sometimes hate of your stories, you make the ponies behave way too much like a human would. It is a unique way to portrait characters I suppose, but it can really....put off? Others who are use to a fix mindset about how they see the characters of the world behave.

I'm not asking you to change it, just wanted to let you know I, and some others, think when they see this kind of character portraying. I'll just assume that you have always watched the show as a ponyfied interpretation of the human world, with the differences of culture and physics (both physical and biological) to fit into a fantasy world.

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........What did you do with Derpy?

I attempted to make her a more interesting character than how the fandom almost always portrays her.

Seriously, why are you always taking the more cheery and enjoyable characters and giving them a dark demeanor which seems really plausible for us humans?

See first part of my response.

This is what I sometimes hate of your stories, you make the ponies behave way too much like a human would.

What, you mean multidimensional? Like a fully-fleshed out character? Please explain to me why any of these things is a bad thing.

It is a unique way to portrait characters I suppose, but it can really....put off? Others who are use to a fix mindset about how they see the characters of the world behave.

Describe to me this "fixed mindset."

Oh look, Derpy Hooves is eating a muffin! Good old Derpy! Look she's delivering mail, just like Derpy Hooves always would!

I'm sick and tired of seeing people in this fandom taking background characters and taking their characterization only as far as their overblown and ridiculous fan-made tropes allow them. God forbid that I try to give something else to one of them that would justify their existence as a supporting character in a story and make it *gasp* interesting.

As far as I'm concerned, to anyone who gets their panties in a bunch over me not portraying their precious Derpy Hooves merely as a muffin-eating mail-pony, which clearly hasn't gotten old at this point:

I'm not asking you to change it

Good. Because I'm not.

just wanted to let you know I, and some others, think when they see this kind of character portraying.

That's too bad. If I lose their favorite, the only loss will be their's and their's alone.

I'll just assume that you have always watched the show as a ponyfied interpretation of the human world, with the differences of culture and physics (both physical and biological) to fit into a fantasy world.

That literally makes no sense at all. Just because I give darker personalities and motives to the characters in my story, that somehow means I have a warped, twisted view of the show itself? I may have a warped, twisted mind myself, but don't for one second insinuate that my mindset is projected into how I view the show.

Part of being a writer (especially in fanfiction (which is, by default, not canon)) is expounding upon an already created world in your own creative way. It's the same kind of depravity and deviance that created things like Fallout: Equestria or Turnabout Storm (easily becoming two of the fandom's most successful and acclaimed creations). Putting a darker spin on the world of a children's show is merely a writer's way of making said world more interesting for its readers.

Is it so wrong that I can have the same liberties?

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That was beautiful.

I get the same crap in my dark stories simply because I didn't make the character do one thing EXACTLY like the show because of the intense situation at hand.

(Still curious how the hell sunset got maneuver gear let alone can use it)

3983883 I know it sounds cheesy (because every bad writer has said it), but you just have to keep reading. I will explain it.

3983897 Hey, don't portray me as the bad guy here. I'm just one guy that has an opinion about a story and how is written. I never write to make a writer feel bad or to demand change, I only write to get my mind across. I've always been that type of guy that likes to put what they think when they read something. Normally a good story.

Hmm, now that I read what I already put down, I can say that I was brash about it. It really does sound like I'm giving a critisisim rather than just putting my mind. I guess I'm only said that because how you made Derpy sound, it felt like she would harm Eren physically, rather than just having an argument which would seem as what a character like the Derpy you're portraying would do.

So I can say an apology is in order from me. I'm just so use to one way of character portraying that when I see someone altering a character that I know about, it puts me off. This is generally why I avoid troll fics.

So please, I didn't want to sound like an asshole, all I thought I was doing was putting my personal thoughts into words. I really do like your stories, I've sticking all the way from the first arch of this series, and I have enjoyed them all the while. So again, sorry man, I'll try to think before I comment on a anything that has this kind of development.

Twilight chuckled, putting Twilight even more at ease

Armin

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