It started with a kiss. And you know how the rest of that cliché goes...
Then a date. Then a few more dates that where more just hanging out really, but still definately dates!
And now somehow Dashie's in love with Pinkie Pie. Too bad Rainbow Dash so afraid as being thought of as a filly-fooler that she'll throw away what she has with Pinkie out of fear.
This story focuses heavily on Rainbow Dash over Pinkie Pie. Just letting you know.
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Title inspired by the movie World's End in that it has nothing to do with the end of the world, and is actually just the name of a place.
Extended and reworked version of a flashback chapter from Happy Anniversary Sug and was originally written back before season 3 had come out.
This story was heavily inspired by Where Your Heart Is, one of the very first fics I ever read. This is sorta the other side of Pinkie's story finding Dash up in 'World's End'. With a few creative liberties of course but I really feel this is a touching story none the less.
i'll keep an eye on it.
Like how season four has been nothing but focusing on dash and less on pinkie. Either way why does this have downvotes?
I like this start but you need to be careful about your grammar/sentence structure. For example...
"Pinkie had gone her job making sure everyone, including her self and generous amount of cake, had had a good. "
You probably mean to say " Pinkie had done her job making sure everyone, including herself, a generous amount of cake and a good time" Or something like that since that sentence is a little bit hard to follow.
Still I like where this could go and it feels like it could be sweeter than where it originally came from.
3804176 Fixed now. That was actually a typo and a missing word. 'gone' was meant to be 'done' and I forgot 'a'. The double 'had' is possibly an Australian way of saying things and thought it sounds perfectly normal to me apparently it confuses people.
I don't want to spoil anything for you [and any others who read original] so read this next part at own risk. Highlight to read: The first few chapters have been heavily re-written but the last three chapters are basically the same.
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It must be an Australian thing because I have no concept of what you are saying with "had had". Ironically I forgot a had in my sentence too...
I actually like the interplay between Dash and Pinkie here. It actually has a very show like quality to it. Except for the "transition" part though I did find it funny (that is more a fan work thing than a show thing but it is still funny).
Great work, keep t up :D
Hey she is thinking of Pinkie so that is what is important.
Keep it up
I think that's Friendship is Witchcraft you're referring to...
3984462 No, it's Mentally Abridged. FiW's thing is she says Rainbow Dash a lot.
I had to Google what a hippogryth was due to me thinking it was a hippo/lion thing. Nice to know the Greek word for Horse is Hippo now...
You used where for were. However, this is a really nice story. I love stories where Dash and Pinkie play pranks.
I love this logic. Great story btw
Yay!