Aspiring writer and avid consumer of many venues of literature.
A birthday present for EpicLuna
Twilight Sparkle is an intelligent pony, normally well-composed, and blissfully unaware of the state of her plot. But when she overhears a few words not meant for her ears, how will she handle the revelations and the endlessly complex task of determining the condition of her derrière?
Many thanks to Aeteros, DethByGaming, and "Twi" for their help with various parts of the story.
WARNING: Spoilers in the comments
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Let me guess... Twilight has bad plot and vampires Sparkle?
Good job spinning a pun into a story...
Loved it!! Too bad there was no TwiLuna, lol. This had me laughing the whole time.
This story was indeed great. I am disappointed that there was not more TwiLuna.
The second 'no' should be capitalised.
Overall, I LOVED this story, I just wish there had been more TwiLuna!
3808365 Thanks for catching that. I had three people go through it (not including myself) and none of them caught any errors.
As for all the people lamenting the lack of shipping, I really shouldn't be surprised. I have to stifle your desires, unfortunately: although I could have spun this into a longer tale, I don't have interest in writing a drawn out shipping/comedy TwiLuna. There are (probably literally) thousands of TwiLuna fics. That's not to say I haven't enjoyed a fair number of them; some are rather spectacular. I'd rather be doing my own thing most of the time, with ideas that allow a broader range of originality. To each their own, but I'll stick with what I've already conceived... for now.
I knew it was the Twilight series... I just knew it
Her plot thickens
Okay, that was amusing.
Have a mustache
YEEEAAAAHH!!!
I laughed so hard reading this! So funny, such a good read.
This was a good joke. The rest, not so much. It feels like an awful long way to go for "Twilight was bad". Though, I suppose this counts as still a better love story...
*Snerk* Nicely done. Bit odd in spots but very cute fun.