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Baby-girl-annie


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Wow ok, this was a pretty 'interesting' start.

Wow...this is getting pretty weird now.

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you clicked on a story called "sissy spike" and a chapter called "spike's first dress"....weirdness was to be expected =P

technically sound but not my cup of tea have an upvote anyway

if I didn't have a passionate hatred for the concept, I'd say it was an alright story

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I like it...dont really care much for the gay sex but I still like it!:derpytongue2:

I'm looking forward to reading this, even though the only gay (male) ship I ever did was Sweepy Belle:unsuresweetie: X Silver Ladle in the Cutimark Cavaliers blog.:twilightsheepish:

I'm in the process of proof reading for you baby girl. I'll try to catch any spelling errors and break up your paragraphs.

whoo hoo I'm 10 on the like list!:yay:

this was really hawt. i love it. But I thought you hated Tarnished Silver by ham Gravy? :twilightoops:

cause essentially you have written a watered down version of her. Still a sadistic pedophile but now she has a kink for colts in dresses. We'll see how cruel she is :duck:

I was pretty shocked though when she black mailed him.:raritydespair:

but loving the ball gagged maid in drag angle.:raritywink:

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I didn't like all the torture and sadistic pain in tarnished silver. So this is a very watered down version that's more to my liking. I've always seen rarity as a dominatrix type, just not to the extent tarnished silver took it.

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I agree.. your story did what his didn't do much of.. it aroused me!:twilightblush:

This chapter was even HOTTER then the first! i like, sooooooo wana be in Spike's skin right about now!

anychance for Silver Spoon to join the fun as maybe an apprentice mistress to Rarity? Still a slave but to miss Rarity alone. she would have authority over Spike, Pip, and Featherweight.

just a suggestion.

since she probably isn't their now, she could come over to the boutique, after school, to train with her mistress. maybe because Diamond is a submissive in private and Silver wants to please her own slave pet! :raritywink::trixieshiftright:

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mom...you just gave me the idea for a new chapter. :pinkiehappy:
or if not a whole chapter, an addition to chapter 4

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oi...momma, i appreciate all these spell checks and edits you're doing for me, but my laptop is way too slow to make all these changes :applecry:

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Silver Spoon (like Tarnished Silver) should have the honor of referring to her as "Miss Rarity" and not mistress to set her apart as the alfa slave.:raritywink:

I'll leave it to you how emotionally invested in Silver Spoon you want Rarity to be. But a cruel thing it would be to have Spike tied up and forced to watch Silver and Rarity make sweet passionate love as equals in Rarity's bed.:duck:

i am such a baaad.. dirty little mud pony! :ajsmug:

ServingSpoon (editor/publisher): I am in the midst of editing the spacing and tabs. you can delete this message "baby-girl" but i thought you and the readers needed to know i am still working on it. :facehoof:

It will take a while to space and tab properly sense the format did not transfer.

please bare with me every pony :twilightsheepish:

ServingSpoon (editor/publisher): Chapter 1 is complete. Now over 1000 words. a very decent beginning.

ServingSpoon: Okay sorry I got side tracked. back to editing right after I nuke my burrito a third time, and actually eat it.:twilightoops:

ServingSpoon: YES I have successfully revised the chapters for you and both are now well over 1000 words!

signing off now. Glad to have been a part of this and look forward to editing more stories for my "baby-girl":twilightsmile:

Hope you all enjoy reading as much as I did editing. Diamond Tiara like, eat your heart out, honey.:duck:

Sincerely, Silver "Serving" Spoon Editor and Publisher.

favorited but down voted
lol....

really looking forward to where this story will go

Wow nice hot femdom/petplay story with one of my favorite pairs cdn.broni.es/images/emotes/mlp-rcomfortkiss.png
though the 'feelings from for a colt' part puts a worry in my sparity feels
upvoted and a read later for more :pinkiehappy:
Also suggestions/tips are rattling in my too-afraid-to-write-story-and-post-himself-brain if you're interested

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PM them to me and I'll see what I think.

Comment posted by Jman796 deleted Feb 24th, 2014

I'm sorry for such a long wait for chapter three...writer's block sucks >.<

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I will, I will, but chapter three is tricky to write...

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My editor is currently a sleep, so you'll have to wait for that.

And some of that stuff will be coming later.

LOL I love this.. "Silver Spoon?" DUN DUN DUN. Okay I'll get to work editing as best I can.

oh and to Marnssj, it is most likely that Rarity does not let her "girls" play with each other without her permission.:raritywink:

Hu what the black mail

Would like too see more sissy stories and this one could go into more depth:unsuresweetie:, but other than that a nice story with strong concept.:scootangel:

I Wonder what will happen when twilight comes back

I love the story! Any idea of the next chapters release date?

So... er... is this ever going to continue?

Gonna guess this fic is dead.

You going to continue this?

5839323 I wouldn't be surprised if it is. Last updated was a year ago and the author hasn't even logged on for weeks now. From experience I advise you not to read any stories that's incomplete/hiatus it'll only lead to disappointment.

Will chapter 4 ever come out?
If not can someone at least make a story similar to this one

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