Twilight goes on a vacation that goes horribly wrong. Starting with a plane crash and ending....wherever.
Just a short thing I'm throwing together. Enjoy!
Written by Troy of Overdonefictions
Hmm. Not sure where this is going. I guess I'll track it.
Dig the Family Guy reference.
"Are you an arsonist?" I lol'd
Well, this story seems interes-OH SWEET CELESTIA, THEY DIED?!?
Also, a teensy bit too much foreshadowing
>>335371335371 I appreciate the input
>>346020346020 LOST numbers
>>346166346166 Oh, sorry. I don't watch LOST. This fic isn't gonna be related (Theoretically), anything that is related is purely coincidence. Sorry.
YES! Finally a fic where PINKIE dies!
I loved it, I just wish it weren't so short.
>>354050354050 It was kind of a side project for me. I could only stretch it so far anyways.
rainbow had a gash in her forehead and a piece of plane jammed in her shoulder. Twilight brought out the guaze and began wrapping it around the debris. hate to do this but you don't wrap wrap a wound before cleaning it out (hence the debris) the only exception i can think of is if it is in their heart like Steve and you spelt gauze wrong and for next time you write a story like this you might want to go into their emotions a bit more sure rarity was a ****** but she was still a friend and earlier they thought all of them died which would really have started the water works so go more in depth now i shall continue reviewing this story that i have no idea how old it is (but really don't wrap a wound like that we don't want you dead now do we)
P.S. you asked for this by going to my page when people do i review with a vengeance
im just screwing with you i review everyone like that not really im just bored and i saw this and thought old meat lets do it sorry im on a caffeine rush right now
>>529598529598I can kinda tell. Thanks anyway! I really do appreciate any feedback and take it all into consideration. Except for "Fucking kill yourself." Luckily, I haven't received anything like that yet.
>>529607529607well well we cant have that now FUCKING KILL YOURSELF
>>529626529626Not happening. Hate to disappoint.
YAY MY LEAST FAVORITE CHARACTER WAS KILLED AND PINKIE WELL SHES PINKIE