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    Twilight goes on a vacation that goes horribly wrong. Starting with a plane crash and ending....wherever.

    Just a short thing I'm throwing together. Enjoy!

    Written by Troy of Overdonefictions

    First Published
    17th Mar 2012
    Last Modified
    22nd Mar 2012

    Comments ( 17 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 61w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Hmm.  Not sure where this is going.  I guess I'll track it.

    Dig the Family Guy reference.

    "Are you an arsonist?"  I lol'd

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 61w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Well, this story seems interes-OH SWEET CELESTIA, THEY DIED?!?

    Also, a teensy bit too much foreshadowing

    PS: SECOND!

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 61w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>335371 I appreciate the input:twilightsmile:

    #4 · Chapter 3 · 61w, 8h ago · · ·
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    #5 · Chapter 3 · 60w, 6d ago · · ·
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    #6 · Chapter 3 · 60w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>346020 LOST numbers

    #7 · Chapter 3 · 60w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>346166 Oh, sorry. I don't watch LOST. This fic isn't gonna be related (Theoretically), anything that is related is purely coincidence. Sorry.

    #8 · Chapter 4 · 60w, 4d ago · · ·
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    YES! Finally a fic where PINKIE dies! :trixieshiftleft:

    I loved it, I just wish it weren't so short.

    #9 · Chapter 4 · 60w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>354050 It was kind of a side project for me. I could only stretch it so far anyways.

    #10 · Chapter 2 · 54w, 6d ago · · ·
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    rainbow had a gash in her forehead and a piece of plane jammed in her shoulder. Twilight brought out the guaze and began wrapping it around the debris. hate to do this but  you don't wrap wrap a wound before cleaning it out (hence the debris) the only exception i can think of is if it is in their heart like Steve and you spelt gauze wrong and for next time you write a story like this you might want to go into their emotions a bit more sure rarity was a ****** but she was still a friend and earlier they thought all of them died which would really have started the water works so go more in depth now i shall continue reviewing this story that i have no idea how old it is (but really don't wrap a wound like that we don't want you dead now do we)

    P.S. you asked for this by going to my page when people do i review with a vengeance

    #11 · Chapter 4 · 54w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>529576Umm...Thanks?

    #12 · Chapter 4 · 54w, 6d ago · · ·
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    :rainbowlaugh: im just screwing with you i review everyone like that not really im just bored and i saw this and thought old meat lets do it:pinkiecrazy: sorry im on a caffeine rush right now

    #13 · Chapter 4 · 54w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>529598I can kinda tell. Thanks anyway! I really do appreciate any feedback and take it all into consideration. Except for "Fucking kill yourself." Luckily, I haven't received anything like that yet.

    #14 · Chapter 4 · 54w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>529607well well we cant have that now FUCKING KILL YOURSELF

    #15 · Chapter 4 · 54w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>529626Not happening. Hate to disappoint.:pinkiehappy:

    #16 · Chapter 4 · 54w, 6d ago · · ·
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    :fluttercry:

    #17 · Chapter 4 · 54w, 6d ago · · ·
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    YAY MY LEAST FAVORITE CHARACTER WAS KILLED AND PINKIE WELL SHES PINKIE

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