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Alchemystudent


Loves to read and write, I decided to try writing fanfiction after a long hiatus thanks to ponies

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It's easy being a princess, right? The whole job is just tea parties, playing with friends, and watching others do your work for you, right? Well, Twilight knows better, after all, she is a princess and she has had plenty of duties and knows how hard Celestia works as a leader and a symbol to the ponies. After about six months of being the new princess and having to deal with-fruit bats, plunder seeds, and dimension hopping, its about time for Twilight to sit down and have a little 'Twilight Time' to herself and her favorite pasttime- reading.

She has earned a break after all...it is just a shame that all of Ponyville has better ideas for her to do than allow her time to read.

(Based on the lone episode title for episode 15 and what I think is going to happen. Cover art belongs to Joakaha)

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Now it's time to wait and see how much of this story becomes canon when the episode airs.

Probably not much, I know :ajsleepy: But hey, wouldn't it be funny if you had actually written here at least half of the actual script?
:rainbowlaugh:

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Are you kidding? If I had even come close to this, I'll be laughing my butt off.

The name of a future episode...well played.

3876656 I'm crazy.

Cute Starbucks and Barnes & Noble puns. :twilightsmile:

I did see:

“Thus, with the power invested in by the Princess Celestia herself, I hereby bless this little filly in the hopes of a long and happy life. May he have a fantastic future ahead of him,

Fillies are female -- unless you're suggesting Twilight is really, really naive about some "mature" subjects.

I really liked the use of the CMC off-screen to set up AJ's trip. And Twilight's internal dialog, especially regarding Fluttershy -- not too much, not too little. :twilightsmile:

My favorite part was the ending, though -- it's nice to see Twilight's friendship so well justified. :yay:

If you found any of this review worthwile (I saw the story in a comment exchange group), maybe take a look at my short story The Cutie Mark Crusaders Use Their Brainsssss .

3770030 saw the episode and pfff haha the mob of foals shouting twilight time so funny but i think urs is better

Omg that was HILARIOUS :rainbowlaugh:! And it be named after the 'by the time of the post uneird '
episode Twilight Time was awesome :trollestia:!

Hilarious but Hearthwarming

Twilight sighed, it had been years since her great-great-great grandpa, Captain Golden Horn, had handled the threats of chupacabra;however, she had read enough of his fighting tactics to know how to handle them, “All right, Fluttershy, I’ll help you. I mean, how long can it take?”

I, um, sort of want to read about Captain Golden Horn now.

This was lovely. Some exciting parts, but mostly heartwarming and funny.

Slightly late, apologies, but a quick review for you. A lot happens in the fic, maybe a bit too much for 3k words, but it's quite amusing reading nevertheless.

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