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After an urgent call to the castle, a snafu leads to a missing Celestia, and Twilight and Rainbow Dash caught (literally) red-hoofed in her royal chambers by the guards!
What do you do when the world is convinced that you've assassinated Princess Celestia?
You run! That's what you do.
You run your flank off!
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I've been waiting on a new one from you! :DDDDDDDDDD Happy Day!
4152696 Two more chapters coming out. One later today, and the other tomorrow.
4152701 You're faster at writing than I am. So, even more reason to be happy!
wow
4152749 Care to elaborate? If I know what it is about my story that made you
, I could see to doing it more in the future.
4152758 I am a big fan of Romance/Comedy and the plot itself is not one that you would think had that potential.
(It feels more like a thriller when you ignore the tags and just read the description.
) Yet, you have somehow managed to make this work 
so far as an R/C, so my hats off to you my good sir.
4152783 Thank you. I appreciate your feedback.
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Always gotta love a good UHF reference.
Rainbow Sanic Dash.
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Please, put an extra line between paragraphs in the description. It will look so much tidier. Other than that, I am liking it so far. Upvote for you!
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NEED TO OBTAIN SPEED.
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way to be subtle zecora
You know, its rather nice to see a fic take into account Dash's skill in hoof to hoof combat. Also, Dash was rather Badass here. I'm already interested. Good show author.
Nice Venture Brothers ref there :)
*considers shipping Dash and Brock*
So wait, is Dash actually killing the guards, or was that a joke? If it's the former, I may have to doubt their innocence a little.
Read later!
I know its suspense, but I really wish you'd explain what happened. The first chapter it was ok that you didn't, but when Twilight explains it to her mom we don't get anything? Hoping that I'm satisfied when all is revealed.
Enjoying the story otherwise. Keep it up.
4154464 Yeah, maybe there's been a misunderstanding about the regicide, but now if they're guilty of multiple murders...
Not exactly how one goes about this sort of 'innocent' thing...
>>>"If we're going to be on the lamb, we should really eat something good first.">>>
Maybe they can eat the lamb while they're on the lam.
I have questions, the answers of which are crucial to unraveling this mystery.
If there's no body, why do they think Celestia's dead?
And why would they blame Twilight and Rainbow Dash, two Element Bearers, one Celestia's Faithful Student and now Princess, both of whom have saved Equestria thrice (NMM, Discord, Discord's Plunder Vines), tried to stop Chrysalis, and helped save the Crystal Empire...
Something ain't kosher...
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This is a big question for me as well. It kinda breaks the "innocent" part of the story if you go around killing people.
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No. For the record, she is not actually killing anypony.
The hay just hit the fan!
SUPPLIES MOTHERBUCKER !
I really enjoyed this, but I have a few...problems. One, why is Shining Armor in Canterlot with the guards instead of in the crystal empire.
Two, it seems really out of place for everyone to just assume Twi and Dash committed the crime if there is no body, and given their history. There is probably a reasonable explanation but because this story starts in medias res we don't get to see it.
Three, Luna. I know we haven't really seen her yet, but the actions of hers that we have seen paint a picture that I find hard to believe. I mean, what we see seems to imply that she really believes Twi and Dash did it (with, as far as I can tell not a lot of evidence) and is gunning for them pretty strongly. I could understand if she'd taken a more or less backseat to the whole thing since she now has to run a country solo and in the meantime the less than efficient guard jumped to conclusions and what not, but there is just something about Luna, who at the very least knows Twilight fairly well, being able to just assume they did it that just bugs me.
4156055 Well you see, the reason is:
What if Celestia exploded?
Poor Spike.
was funny, but more tahn a little stupid too in some cases. shrugs.
You had me until Celestia showed up. Started losing interest rapidly there, and the "deal with it" comment...
Sorry, not my cup of tea.
.................I....both hate you.......and love you........
Who else feels like Rage Quitting life right now?
This ending was so completely, totally, ultimately random.
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What has been read cannot be unread.
However, that last pic hit me in the feels.
Also, methinks the random tag would be appropriate here.
The entire story was kind of out there to begin with and the last chapter definitely took a trip into Pinkie's mind during a sugar rush. That said it was still better than the others I have read.
Have a no rating.
Okay.. So. To be clear.
Celestia fed them a love potion, framed them for regicide, went on vacation while numerous ponies were nearly killed, let an innocent child be imprisoned, psychologically traumatized her family, friends and the entire nation..
Because she wanted to play match maker. And it was necessary to use mind altering chemicals to create the attraction. Then she basically points and laughs at everyone, including the sister who has been grieving her death.
What.
The.
Fuck.
Yup. Totally needs a random tag. A little too out there for my tastes.
Bro you gotta wait a few more days for jokes
Overall, I liked this story, but it would have benefited from being longer and not having such a random OOC ending
celestia is kind of a dick
You had me until the pop culture references started showing...especially that last one with Celestia.
I thought that it was a great premise, but it could have been more of an adventure. And it seemed like Dash's feelings came out of nowhere. No self-questioning, no nothing, really. So essentially what I'm saying is that while overall, the ideas were good, but it could have been extended, and had more character development. I was expecting Twilight to somehow manage to get them out of there, albeit at the loss of the note. To me, it seemed like you just wanted to be done with it, so you decided to make it a quick ending. And I'm sorry if I seem blunt, but I have trouble 'sugarcoating' things. It's either I'm blunt, or I don't say anything. But I digress. Good story, just too quick and sudden of an ending.
You get a fave for that last line and pic