Whenever Twilight Sparkle was with her marefriend, she couldn't help but notice little spots here and there. She thought nothing of it. She didn't know what it was, and she was afraid to ask.
...and for Rarity, she kept a secret to herself. One sort of secret that she knew she couldn't control.
This was something I wrote for the Twarity prompt collab. A stand-alone oneshot for a bit of my own venting in it. Not one of my best pieces, but I thought it should get published, because why not?
Chapters (1)
My favorite Princess has written a story? Time to read!
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3750462 Words cannot describe my reaction right now, so here's some emotes explaining them.
I think I might've enjoyed this more if you had given more focus on why Rarity was hurting herself (I assume.)
Wow PR, when you you write a prompt off personal history, you lay in the feels. I'm happy to hear that this is something limited to your past, and I hope that those who suffer from those same kinds of thoughts can find an ally in you. Keep it up amiga.
I like it, except for the dialogue.
I have a lot of cutter friends, and I know from experience that they will not answer yes to "What's wrong?"
Though, eventually you would have found a way to extend it towards her saying yes, you kept it short and sweet. I shall ignore all I have against the dialogue for that very reason.
Great Story.
3750754 Like I said, perhaps I will write a Chapter Two - anything's possible.
*raises hooves to cover my mouth, tears starting to fall*
Oh, Rarity.....
You know how to work the feels, Princess.
Nice!
Well, her work bleeds her dry in more ways than one. So sad. What if poor Sweetie Belle found out?
I'd kind of like to see this resolved.
It took a lot of effort for me not to cry at this
So beautiful as always.
Hmm interesting very nice detail
omg legend, this demands another chapter.
10/10 u whore
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i would like to hear more of this subject.
What's here is pretty good. I think this story is a starting point that has a lot of room for expansion and filling in with explorations of the why aspect to cutting and self-harm.