dude this is darkly hililarious...

A rag-tag group of Harmony wannabes? Count me in!

LOVE the idea of a new 6 EOH. (elements of harmony) This is without a doubt, LIKE A BAU5

This has been brilliant so far, keep it up. I look forward to reading more

I planned on doing something like this, aw poop

Ohwell, first come first server and all that jazz

You know, if there's one thing I hate in fanfics, it' the Tyrant Celestia thing.

nstinctive First Thought:

IN BED WITH FEMALE...

Reaction:

”YYYYEEEEEHAWWWWWW AH SCORED!!!!!!”

Second Thought:

“OH MA GAWD SHE'S AN ALLICORN!!! A.. A.. A.. A.. PRINCESS!!!”

Reaction:

“AH SCORED A PRINCESS!!!”

Realisation:

“WAIT, ONLY TWO PRINCESSES IN EQUESTRIA, ONE NICE, ONE NOT SO NICE... ”.

Greatest lines I read in awhile

Daemon? Don't you mean demon?

Also, there are a few capitalization, grammar, and punctuation (Twilights friends?) problems, but it's a wonderful story nevertheless.

ok im at a lost what just happned there, and since when was trixe the 2nd best unicorn in equestria????... this makes me head hurt.

dude this shit is funny i am loving where this is going hehe. and th quote thechosenpony greatest lines ever man. way to go. i am anxioulsy awaitng the next installment of this fic.

First I'd like to thank all the fellow Bronies who have been so kind to me so far in the comments, I've always been a writer but thanks to self confidence (or lack of ) its taken me this long to put something out there and let others read it and it took magical ponies and the bronyverse to show me anypony can do it .

I admit there's a bit of a problem with grammar and punctuation spelling etc , this is primarily down to an outdated word processor and the rather large set of differences between US English and English English spelling which is frustrating, I'm no Hugh Grant with the Queens English, I'm working class and as rough as old boots but the differences are there and not always easy to spot.

Again thank you all for reading my work and I hope it continues to entertain as much as its been fun to write.

Replies to comments:

Darkwing: I planned on doing something like this.

Answer: Do it and Do it your way, and don't forget to send me a copy.

Nihilistic One "You know, if there's one thing I hate in fanfics, it' the Tyrant Celestia thing.

Answer: I didn't intentionally write her as a Tyrant I made the suggestion that was how others saw her, as a Tyrant or as Molestia, its a play on how Bronies view her .

Thanks one and all and goodnight,

A fun fic so far. Do watch the punctuation in the run-on sentences, but apart from that seems fine. So long as you use a consistent set of spellings (Brit or American) I doubt anyone'll mind.

good story so far

This story continues to be pure awesome. Great story, I look forward to part 6

Beer explosion! I was worried that would only happen in that one Simpsons episode. Great chapter, really enjoyable and funny .

Oh God, Vinyl. I can imagine it right now... why imagine here's a visual aid

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"And i said: OATMEAL?!? Are you CRAZY?!?"

Mother of celestia, i feel bad for the royal canterlot guard

Trixie X Spit is a hilarious ship! this is by far my favorite fic!!

That was a great chapter. Liked seeing Trixie doing some good, wonder if Rainbow Dash would stand in for Spitfire as captain of the Wonderbolts... going to say yes ^_^.

Trixie x Spit:

Either equals the mother of all angry sex clopfics.

Or something the author can exploit to all hell to hilarious effect.

Either way,

My reaction is still this:

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I dunno why, I just expect this scene at some point XD.

Excellent chapter, really enjoyable. Good humour throughout it, I look forward to chapter 11.

I'm going to put you on my watch list. This fic will be stalked. But there better be an OFFICIAL TrixieXSpitfire pairing where they actually DO kiss or more, or I probably won't continue to read. Please update soon.

And remember, Trixfire pairing, or one less viewer. I'll be severely disappinted if there is no Trxfire.

Very good Trixfire there at the ending. I expect to see more. Disappointed at the lack of understanding of what Spitfire's "true feelings" of Trixie really are, so I think you need to clarify that in the next chapter. Maybe a scene where Spitfire wakes up with a hangover and no memory and Trixie is the only one up, so she asks what happened and Trixie tells her all that she said. Just an idea, though.

I humbly ask for more Trixfire. Make it happen

They're going to fight death. (Can barely contain his excitement.) Looking forward to the next chapter, nop matter what you decide to do. Also, nice backstory and explanation for Berry's Drinking.

And just what could Trixie promise Death in order to return her soul to her body. take over from him once she does die maybe?

Good chapter

Uhmm...Uuuhhhh.. what am I reading??

>>12479311247931

Is that a good '?' or a bad '?'

>>12479641247964 a lil of both. All I can say is that the look on my face was that of the one applejack had in the cutie pox episode when she went into appleblooms room. the one in my next post.

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Lol... That's good enough for me... Stick with it and I promise the pay off will be worth it.

Or try some of my other works and see if they suit you better...

Hahahahahahahaha... Love the clip.

Braeburn's part in the story is resolved (Yay!). The Party Political Party (PPP) has gone on for so long Celestia is actually thinking of joining them , maybe you could have Cadance join the PPP They are spreading love, happiness and PARTIES! Loved Vinyl's maniacal laughter as she points at Canterlot Castle.

Can just imagine a scene with gate guards trying to hold the gates. Something like one guard saying "Mistress Celestia, the gates can't hold, their Wubs are too strong!"

I'm pumped for the next chapter, the stage is set, tension's is relatively high and the stakes are high as well. Looking forward to Part Seventeen eagerly.

So Luna Caused the A-team huh... Seems Legit.

........AAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!  

You can't leave us hanging!!!