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Oh wow. This made me laugh so hard. It was silly, yes, but it was well written so before I knew it I was reading it again
well done.
I put two and two and two together, and it still didn't make any sense! until I noticed the hooves.... THE HOOVES! ![]()
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I need to go lay down now. ![]()
Honest to goodness, one of the best comedic fanfics i've come across.
Keep it comin, partner.
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Midnight Ryder
Really fun short, can't deny I wish there was more though. ![]()
Like maybe about the other five discovering similar reality warping powers as Pinkie Pie.![]()
Just a thought. Great story either way. ![]()
The concept is so crazy it just...
might...
work...
But, a fantastic read. You get a free thumb!
Hilarious, though slightly disappointing that we didn't get any explanation. Oh well, all is good and so is the joke! ^^
I'm Kayeka, and I approve of this fanfic.
I may not be Chuck Norris, but I sure know what I do or don't like.
Pinkie Pie Radiation is a serious threat and should never be taken lightly. Please report to your local Pinkie-Proof Bunker... Of which there is no such thing.
She's everywhere. ![]()
Oh god. This is hilarious. Cartoon physics are terrifying if you are unaware you're a cartoon. Reminds me of that scene from Bruce Almighty:
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Those 6 other scrolls were JUST the thing! ![]()
You've been trolled, You've been trolled, You have probably been told ![]()
This was WONDERFUL!
I actually clapped all 6 of my hooves together laughing at this wonde.... Ummm... ![]()
I say it's Discord. Or maybe being extra harmonious gets you extra chaos magic for balance.
Although by that interpretation Discord would secretly have massive OCD (actual OCD, what people normally think of is obsessive compulsive personality disorder, which is different and less severe) to compensate for the chaos magic.
I need to find more nonsensical-premise stories. Random humor is kind of my thing, and this is more than a little brilliant.
umm, kay... that was odd... seems like it's just a kind of perk... it doesn't look like the extras are much use for anything but counting... and it also seems that it's not just the elements... yeah... this was a weird story... I LIKE IT!!!!!!!!!!
Awesome, hilarious, and a great way to poke fun at cartoonism! I wish we had seen Pinkie too confronted by the mane group. And the finale was kinda sloppy for me, but a gerat fic overall :)
Six elements, six hooves. Makes perfect sense to me. Plus, now they can brohoof each other all at once, and still each have a hoof left over to stand on. (Although the exact mechanics of that one are left as an exercise to an experienced topologist.)
So what happens if you put two and two and two and two and two and two and two and two and two and two together?
I put two and two together and got a sandwich. I... am a little concerned.
I was a little disappointed to see no Pinkie Pie, but what we do have is most wonderful.
>PHYSICS FAILIURE DETECTED
>LOGIC FAILIURE DETECTED
>RESTART PHYSICS/LOGIC Y/N?
That was a blast to read. Had me laughing almost the whole time. Good job sir. ![]()
This was a great story! The ending was very well done and wrapped it up very nicely.
OWWW. My fourth wall. It was bad enough when
was doing it, but now everypony is. All jokeing aside it was a vary funny story and I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Alright Mayclore, you've got 171 extra thumbs, what are you going to do with them?
Also, my neighbors might think I'm insane for laughing like a lunatic at 6:30 AM. Though that might be the booze.
The joke was pretty funny. The first time. But then you did it again. And again. And again. I feel that this fic got tired far before in ended. Your writing's pretty good. A little unpolished here and there, but generally good. What I think is missing here is content. You've got one odd occurence, each of the mane 6 reacting to it in an ordinary, quickly resolved way, and then the same with Princess Celestia. You never even explain what causes it, or explore Pinkie's view of things.
I encourage you to write more fics, but keep in mind that a single joke does not make a comedy fic.
I wonder what happens when they try to count 8 things... ![]()
On an unrelated note, what does it say about me that this made me wonder why ponies use a decimal number system? ![]()
Please make this into a series about the rest of the mane six plus Princess celestia and Luna discovering that they also have the Pinkie Powers
Hrrrm. I think just counting Two and Two would give them the extra limbs. 'cause if they're counting Twos holding their Hooves up, Then what are they standing with? Do they roll on their backs to count? Also, I am remembered of Sleipnir, the 8 legged Horse, Spawn of Loki, The trickster god. I am imagining them all Practising their multi-Limbuing Powers too. Twilight setting up experiments and allthatjazz, Rarity Sewing, AJ Bucking all of Sweet Apple Acres Simultaneously, RD doing an impressive Arial Display wherein she's Fivemiles long with about 8kajillion Legs, Flutsy hiding under a table pretending nothings happened. And when they eventually confront Pinkie Pie, it turns out she was using a pair of fake legs and She had No idea any of that was possible and is upset with all of them for not telling her
A cute (and very random) little story. My pet theory is that the Element of Laughter gives Pinkie Pie a limited ability to manipulate toon physics. ![]()
Oh Pinkie Pie and your shattering of all of the rules of logic and order that you friends hold dear and true to their sanity. You crack me up.
Greatly amusing. Kudos.![]()
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At first, I was expecting only Pinkie Pie to be capable of it, since the Element of Laughter seems most likely to provide sight gags. Still, I was not disappointed by the execution. It would've been nice if the girls confronted Pinkie about it, but this was still an enjoyable read.
My comment appears to have disappeared. Anyway, I don't think this has anything to do with the Elements, I think it's just their nature as cartoon characters. The reason Pinkie can do all those things is that she fully realizes what she is and the true nature of her reality. That would tend to make anypony loopy.![]()
This is a story worth continuing for a few more chapters, if only to drive Twilight temporarily mad, have Pinkie be the sanest pony around if but for a moment and shake out the final two and two and two laughs in the concept.
I think everypony needs a vacation after reading this Celestia......![]()
Interesting little story. You have earned this:
So, thank you for sharing this story with us.
Nice. Consider this tracked. But one thing bugs me. How did Celestia get overexposure to Pinkie? Hmmm?![]()
MOAR!
the need to seek the advice of the great madame pinkie and learn ALL of the skills that are required for breaking the 4th wall!!!![]()
Well, this was awkward... but fun ![]()
Cartoon physics, on of the things you should never try to fight. Seriously, it just brings more and more trouble everytime you think about it.
Somewhere Pinkie's just testing how far it'll go
: "two, and two, and two, and two, and two, and two, and two, and two, and two..."
What... did I just read?
xD Brilliant idea, loled so much.
Pinkie Pie is insane, and of course, she can break the fourth wall... why can't she put two and two and two toget--
...Danged cartoon physics.
I was laughing the whole way through
I only wish there was an explanation to the hooves thing.
great job
What is this I dont even........
So, what in the name of magic could possibly cause this problem?
I can has sequel? I'd love to see what kind of nutty adventure this discovery spawns!
Does two and two and two add up to a sequel? I mean, Apple Bloom needs her lemonade!
LOVE IT! I love the humor too! I get crazy ideas, but i never thought of actually writing them down! Thanks for letting me know that's possible!
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