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Mayclore 6458

Joined January 2012
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    Mayclore's Stories (6)

    • En Fuego
      A conversation with Applejack spurs Fluttershy to check up on Twilight's mental well-being. Twilight's reaction to her encouragement, however, is probably not what she had in mind...

      9,090 words · 3,843 views · 328 likes · 4 dislikes
    • Two and Two and Two
      And it added up to silly.
      2,778 words · 12,094 views · 898 likes · 18 dislikes
    • Contents Under Pressure
      Caution: pony may explode with happiness.
      2,009 words · 1,476 views · 192 likes · 5 dislikes
    • So Sweet and Tasty
      Cupcakes...cupcakes, cupcakes, cupcakes!
      2,187 words · 844 views · 49 likes · 4 dislikes
    • White
      67,503 words · 252 views · 23 likes · 2 dislikes
    • Gray
      64,365 words · 129 views · 17 likes · 10 dislikes

    Twilight and friends learn that prolonged exposure to the power of Pinkie Pie can cause some rather interesting side effects.  An unbearably silly idea that wouldn't go away until I wrote it down.

    First Published
    16th Mar 2012
    Last Modified
    16th Mar 2012

    Comments ( 149 )

    #1 · 62w, 1h ago · · ·
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    Read this on fanfiction.net and cracked up:rainbowlaugh: Great story!

    #2 · 62w, 1h ago · 1 · ·
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    Oh wow. This made me laugh so hard. It was silly, yes, but it was well written so before I knew it I was reading it again :rainbowlaugh: well done.

    #3 · 62w, 1h ago · · ·
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    I <3 this.

    #4 · 62w, 29m ago · 1 · ·
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    I put two and two and two together, and it still didn't make any sense! until I noticed the hooves.... THE HOOVES! :derpyderp2::derpyderp1:

    I need to go lay down now. :facehoof:

    #5 · 62w, 25m ago · · ·
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    i liked it...i liked it alot! :twilightsmile:

    #6 · 62w, 16m ago · · ·
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    Honest to goodness, one of the best comedic fanfics i've come across.

    Keep it comin, partner.

    :ajsmug:

    Midnight Ryder

    #7 · 62w, 16m ago · · ·
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    :rainbowlaugh:

    You made me laugh. I`m impressed.

    #8 · 62w, 6m ago · · ·
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    :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

    #9 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    OH BOY !!!

    DAT ENDING IS GOLD !

    #11 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Really fun short, can't deny I wish there was more though. :rainbowwild:

    Like maybe about the other five discovering similar reality warping powers as Pinkie Pie.:pinkiehappy:

    Just a thought. Great story either way. :twilightsmile:

    #12 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    That was a good story. five mustaches for you.:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache: Toolkit

    #13 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    The concept is so crazy it just...

    might...

    work...

    But, a fantastic read. You get a free thumb!

    #14 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Brilliant

    #15 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Hilarious, though slightly disappointing that we didn't get any explanation. Oh well, all is good and so is the joke! ^^

    #16 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>330573

    I think it is to late for that.

    #17 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Three letters:

    L

    O

    L

    #18 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: I was laughing and giggling thoughout the whole chapter:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

    #19 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Lololol :rainbowlaugh::twilightsheepish:

    #20 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I'm Kayeka, and I approve of this fanfic.

    I may not be Chuck Norris, but I sure know what I do or don't like.

    #21 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Pinkie Pie Radiation is a serious threat and should never be taken lightly. Please report to your local Pinkie-Proof Bunker... Of which there is no such thing.

    She's everywhere. :pinkiecrazy:

    #22 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    How you don't have more followers is beyond me. This is hilarious.

    #23 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Send this in to EqD. Now.

    #24 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>330835  I actually have, just for the hell of it.

    #25 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Oh god. This is hilarious. Cartoon physics are terrifying if you are unaware you're a cartoon. Reminds me of that scene from Bruce Almighty:

    #26 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    great fic friend

    you got my thumb now

    take care of it

    #27 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    :applejackconfused::fluttershbad::rainbowderp::raritydespair::twilightoops::pinkiegasp:

    Those 6 other scrolls were JUST the thing! :twilightsmile:

    You've been trolled, You've been trolled, You have probably been told :trollestia:

    This was WONDERFUL!

    I actually clapped all 6 of my hooves together laughing at this wonde.... Ummm... :facehoof:

    #28 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    You've LIED!!! I couldn't get the extra two!

    #29 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I say it's Discord. Or maybe being extra harmonious gets you extra chaos magic for balance.

    Although by that interpretation Discord would secretly have massive OCD (actual OCD, what people normally think of is obsessive compulsive personality disorder, which is different and less severe) to compensate for the chaos magic.

    #30 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I need to find more nonsensical-premise stories. Random humor is kind of my thing, and this is more than a little brilliant.

    #31 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    umm, kay... that was odd... seems like it's just a kind of perk... it doesn't look like the extras are much use for anything but counting... and it also seems that it's not just the elements... yeah... this was a weird story... I LIKE IT!!!!!!!!!!

    #32 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Please tell me there's another chapter to this story :D

    #33 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    :rainbowlaugh: You reminded me of Ten shin han from Dragon Ball

    #34 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Wonderful!  6 Staches out of 5!

    :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

    #35 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Epic

    :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::twilightblush:

    That's too funny

    #36 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Awesome, hilarious, and a great way to poke fun at cartoonism! I wish we had seen Pinkie too confronted by the mane group. And the finale was kinda sloppy for me, but a gerat fic overall :)

    #37 · 61w, 6d ago · 1 · ·
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    Six elements, six hooves. Makes perfect sense to me. Plus, now they can brohoof each other all at once, and still each have a hoof left over to stand on. (Although the exact mechanics of that one are left as an exercise to an experienced topologist.)

    #38 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I give this three thumbs up!

    Hang on, what? THE FOURTH WALL'S BEEN BREACHED!

    #39 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>331012 Yes. Yes! A thousand times yes! :raritydespair:

    #40 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>331353

    You forget, Celestia was one of the previous bearers of the Elements of Harmony. This meant Luna can do it too.

    #41 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    So what happens if you put two and two and two and two and two and two and two and two and two and two together?

    #42 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I put two and two together and got a sandwich. I... am a little concerned.

    I was a little disappointed to see no Pinkie Pie, but what we do have is most wonderful.

    #44 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    all I have to say about this is....

    DAT ENDING!!!!!:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

    #45 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>330340 Your avatar is Francis, you can't "love this" You're only permitted to "don't hate"

    #46 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >PHYSICS FAILIURE DETECTED

    >LOGIC FAILIURE DETECTED

    >RESTART PHYSICS/LOGIC Y/N?

    #47 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Critics rate this story 11 thumbs up and 6 thumbs down out of five

    #48 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    That was a blast to read. Had me laughing almost the whole time. Good job sir. :moustache:

    #49 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    This was a great story! The ending was very well done and wrapped it up very nicely.

    #51 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    OWWW. My fourth wall. It was bad enough when:pinkiehappy: was doing it, but now everypony is. All jokeing aside it was a vary funny story and I thoroughly enjoyed it.

    DF
    #52 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Alright Mayclore, you've got 171 extra thumbs, what are you going to do with them?

    Also, my neighbors might think I'm insane for laughing like a lunatic at 6:30 AM. Though that might be the booze.

    #54 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>332499 I suspect I may have a lot more soon, as Equestria Daily just accepted it for posting.

    #55 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    That was great! Nice story!

    #56 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    The joke was pretty funny. The first time. But then you did it again. And again. And again. I feel that this fic got tired far before in ended. Your writing's pretty good. A little unpolished here and there, but generally good. What I think is missing here is content. You've got one odd occurence, each of the mane 6 reacting to it in an ordinary, quickly resolved way, and then the same with Princess Celestia. You never even explain what causes it, or explore Pinkie's view of things.

    I encourage you to write more fics, but keep in mind that a single joke does not make a comedy fic.

    #57 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I wonder what happens when they try to count 8 things... :twilightoops:

    On an unrelated note, what does it say about me that this made me wonder why ponies use a decimal number system? :rainbowhuh:

    #58 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Wait, so.........

    2, 2, and t.......oh boy.

    #59 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>332089 THATS HOW MUCH I LOVE IT.

    #60 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Please make this into a series about the rest of the mane six plus Princess celestia and Luna discovering that they also have the Pinkie Powers

    #61 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    That "Random" tag has NEVER been more applicable... :twilightoops:

    #62 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    This is why you don't try to explain Looney Tunes logic!

    #63 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Hrrrm. I think just counting Two and Two would give them the extra limbs. 'cause if they're counting Twos holding their Hooves up, Then what are they standing with? Do they roll on their backs to count? Also, I am remembered of Sleipnir, the 8 legged Horse, Spawn of Loki, The trickster god. I am imagining them all Practising their multi-Limbuing Powers too. Twilight setting up experiments and allthatjazz, Rarity Sewing, AJ Bucking all of Sweet Apple Acres Simultaneously, RD doing an impressive Arial Display wherein she's Fivemiles long with about 8kajillion Legs, Flutsy hiding under a table pretending nothings happened. And when they eventually confront Pinkie Pie, it turns out she was using a pair of fake legs and She had No idea any of that was possible and is upset with all of them for not telling her

    #64 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    A cute (and very random) little story. My pet theory is that the Element of Laughter gives Pinkie Pie a limited ability to manipulate toon physics. :pinkiehappy:

    #65 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    One smiley.

    :rainbowlaugh:

    Lols were had.

    #66 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I like it.

    #67 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>332589 I don't think I can agree that an explanation is required, as far too often that ends up killing the joke.

    #68 · 61w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Oh Pinkie Pie and your shattering of all of the rules of logic and order that you friends hold dear and true to their sanity. You crack me up.

    Greatly amusing. Kudos.:moustache:

    #69 · 61w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Ladies, gentlemen, folks in between, let me ask you something: If you were given a chance to give Derpy her name and voice back, would you take it? For those who said yes, in my blog I have a theory that might prove to be the key to her rescue. With enough attention, we might be able to convince Hasbro to give Derpy her name and voice back. For those of you who don't find the importance in this, remember the Crucible. Why do I insist on saving Derpy? BECAUSE IT IS HER NAME! Because she doesn't have another one like it. You may find her attitude strange, her eyes a bit weird, but for Celestia's sake, let her keep her name. Hasbro removed her name in fear of haters, not offended ones, anti-bronies. Give my theory a chance, should any questions, concerns or doubts plague your mind, seek me out, for I have utmost confidence in this theory. Those who think this whole "save Derpy" thing is done, they only act with the bandwagon, however, if the bandwagon still insists on saving Derpy, well, you do the math. Everyone assumed it ended when Mrs. Rogers made her statement, however, when I presented her my theory, she couldn't dispel it, she didn't want to. Let us lift the sorrow she feels off her shoulders and let us fill this void in everybrony's hearts. Go to my blog and give my theory a read.Together we made Derpy and together we can save Derpy.

    #70 · 61w, 5d ago · · ·
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    At first, I was expecting only Pinkie Pie to be capable of it, since the Element of Laughter seems most likely to provide sight gags. Still, I was not disappointed by the execution. It would've been nice if the girls confronted Pinkie about it, but this was still an enjoyable read.

    #71 · 61w, 5d ago · · ·
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    My comment appears to have disappeared. Anyway, I don't think this has anything to do with the Elements, I think it's just their nature as cartoon characters. The reason Pinkie can do all those things is that she fully realizes what she is and the true nature of her reality. That would tend to make anypony loopy.:pinkiecrazy:

    #72 · 61w, 5d ago · · ·
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    :yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay:yay:yay::trollestia::heart::heart::heart::heart::derpyderp1:

    #73 · 61w, 5d ago · · ·
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    This is a story worth continuing for a few more chapters, if only to drive Twilight temporarily mad, have Pinkie be the sanest pony around if but for a moment and shake out the final two and two and two laughs in the concept.

    #74 · 61w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Very Douglas Adams. Loved every word.

    #75 · 61w, 5d ago · · ·
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    #76 · 61w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I think everypony needs a vacation after reading this Celestia......:applejackconfused:

    Interesting little story.  You have earned this:

    So, thank you for sharing this story with us.

    #77 · 61w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Nice. Consider this tracked. But one thing bugs me. How did Celestia get overexposure to Pinkie? Hmmm?:trixieshiftright:

    #78 · 61w, 5d ago · · ·
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    MOAR!:raritystarry: the need to seek the advice of the great madame pinkie and learn ALL of the skills that are required for breaking the 4th wall!!!:pinkiehappy:

    #79 · 61w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Well, this was awkward... but fun :twistnerd:

    Cartoon physics, on of the things you should never try to fight. Seriously, it just brings more and more trouble everytime you think about it.

    #80 · 61w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Somewhere Pinkie's just testing how far it'll go

    :pinkiesmile: : "two, and two, and two, and two, and two, and two, and two, and two, and two..."

    #81 · 61w, 5d ago · · ·
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    What... did I just read? :facehoof: xD Brilliant idea, loled so much. :rainbowlaugh:

    Pinkie Pie is insane, and of course, she can break the fourth wall... why can't she put two and two and two toget--

    ...Danged cartoon physics.

    #82 · 61w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Reminds me of when i had 8 fingers.....I blamed pinkie

    #83 · 61w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I was laughing the whole way through :rainbowlaugh:

    I only wish there was an explanation to the hooves thing.

    great job

    #84 · 61w, 5d ago · · ·
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    ...okay...

    two :twilightsmile:

    two :twilightsheepish:

    two :twilightoops: OH GOD

    im insane:facehoof:

    #85 · 61w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Poor Applebloom... just wanted two bits to go buy lemonade...

    #86 · 61w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>336310  I was wondering when someone would notice that line.

    #87 · 61w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>333815

    Even if they ask Pinkie for an explaination, all they would get is

    "I don't know!" :pinkiehappy:

    #88 · 61w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>336317

    It's a good thing she didn't want to buy lemonade for her friends, because then she would have needed two for herself, and two for Scoots, and two for Sweetie Pie...

    Noooooo! :applecry:

    #89 · 61w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I thought ponies had hooves, not feet.... :rainbowhuh:

    #90 · 61w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>335875 Pinkie Pie doesn't need to. She can multiply herself an infinite number of times it seems... therefore, she can multiply her limbs as many times as she wants as well. :pinkiehappy: She just accepts that she can do it, and does it anytime she wants

    #91 · 61w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Congrats on getting featured in EQD!!

    #92 · 61w, 5d ago · · ·
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    #93 · 61w, 5d ago · · ·
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    What is this I dont even........

    So, what in the name of magic could possibly cause this problem?

    #94 · 61w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I can has sequel? I'd love to see what kind of nutty adventure this discovery spawns!

    #95 · 61w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Does two and two and two add up to a sequel? I mean, Apple Bloom needs her lemonade!

    #96 · 61w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I gotta say, this is actually a good read!

    I approve of this!:pinkiehappy:

    #97 · 61w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I love crazy stories like this.

    #98 · 61w, 4d ago · · ·
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    LOVE IT! I love the humor too! I get crazy ideas, but i never thought of actually writing them down! Thanks for letting me know that's possible! :heart: :rainbowwild:

    #99 · 61w, 4d ago · · ·
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    omg great new favrite

    #100 · 61w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Funniest story I've read for a while.:heart:

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