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  • 50w, 3h
    Shutting it down.

    I will no longer be posting work on this website.  Sorry.

    I mean, it's not like anyone here really read any of it, to be honest.  No, I'm not giving up writing - not at all.  I'm just not putting any more of it up here.

    If by some miracle you are one of my two or three readers, you may find my stuff at the following links:

    And I post frequent updates about the status of my work here:

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  • 57w, 5d

    I think I might need a new cover artist due to time constraints (my previous one might be getting his doctorate), but I've no idea where to ask.

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  • 58w, 2d

    So you're wondering where I went and where Black went.

    Well, I've been writing it, but the way this site's formatting works drives me up the wall so bad I put off posting it here.  Continuously.  And then I just forgot.  If you've been following along with my tumblr, you've seen the chapters come out.  Anyway, there are eight in the pile (and nine is under construction) that I will put up here once a day until everyone is caught up.

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  • 67w, 4d
    Guys, I'm sorry.

    I have to rewrite Black.  This neuroplasty thing is making me think more clearly and I just had far, far better ideas about how to get the plot down and I’d better do it now while it’s only 8,000 words because that’s nothing for me to re-do.

    1 comments · 101 views
  • 69w, 1d
    For those who may still care:

    I am halfway done, after about two rewrites, with the first official chapter of Black.  It is entitled The Tangled Web.

    As for what I've been doing in the interim, drop by my account and look at all that Gravity Falls stuff I wrote.  I mean, wow.

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  • ...

Twilight and friends learn that prolonged exposure to the power of Pinkie Pie can cause some rather interesting side effects.  An unbearably silly idea that wouldn't go away until I wrote it down.

First Published
16th Mar 2012
Last Modified
16th Mar 2012
#1 · 140w, 7h ago · · ·

Read this on and cracked up:rainbowlaugh: Great story!

#2 · 140w, 7h ago · 1 · ·

Oh wow. This made me laugh so hard. It was silly, yes, but it was well written so before I knew it I was reading it again :rainbowlaugh: well done.

#3 · 140w, 7h ago · · ·

I <3 this.

#4 · 140w, 6h ago · 1 · ·

I put two and two and two together, and it still didn't make any sense! until I noticed the hooves.... THE HOOVES! :derpyderp2::derpyderp1:

I need to go lay down now. :facehoof:

#5 · 140w, 6h ago · · ·

i liked it...i liked it alot! :twilightsmile:

#6 · 140w, 6h ago · · ·

Honest to goodness, one of the best comedic fanfics i've come across.

Keep it comin, partner.


Midnight Ryder

#7 · 140w, 6h ago · · ·


You made me laugh. I`m impressed.

#9 · 140w, 5h ago · · ·

OH BOY !!!


#11 · 140w, 5h ago · · ·

Really fun short, can't deny I wish there was more though. :rainbowwild:

Like maybe about the other five discovering similar reality warping powers as Pinkie Pie.:pinkiehappy:

Just a thought. Great story either way. :twilightsmile:

#12 · 140w, 5h ago · · ·

That was a good story. five mustaches for you.:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache: Toolkit

#13 · 140w, 5h ago · · ·

The concept is so crazy it just...



But, a fantastic read. You get a free thumb!

#14 · 140w, 5h ago · · ·


#15 · 140w, 4h ago · · ·

Hilarious, though slightly disappointing that we didn't get any explanation. Oh well, all is good and so is the joke! ^^

#16 · 140w, 4h ago · · ·


I think it is to late for that.

#17 · 140w, 4h ago · · ·

Three letters:




#18 · 140w, 4h ago · · ·

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: I was laughing and giggling thoughout the whole chapter:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

#19 · 140w, 4h ago · · ·

Lololol :rainbowlaugh::twilightsheepish:

#20 · 140w, 4h ago · · ·

I'm Kayeka, and I approve of this fanfic.

I may not be Chuck Norris, but I sure know what I do or don't like.

#21 · 140w, 4h ago · · ·

Pinkie Pie Radiation is a serious threat and should never be taken lightly. Please report to your local Pinkie-Proof Bunker... Of which there is no such thing.

She's everywhere. :pinkiecrazy:

#22 · 140w, 4h ago · · ·

How you don't have more followers is beyond me. This is hilarious.

#23 · 140w, 4h ago · · ·

Send this in to EqD. Now.

#24 · 140w, 4h ago · · ·

>>330835  I actually have, just for the hell of it.

#25 · 140w, 3h ago · · ·

Oh god. This is hilarious. Cartoon physics are terrifying if you are unaware you're a cartoon. Reminds me of that scene from Bruce Almighty:

#26 · 140w, 3h ago · · ·

great fic friend

you got my thumb now

take care of it

#27 · 140w, 3h ago · · ·


Those 6 other scrolls were JUST the thing! :twilightsmile:

You've been trolled, You've been trolled, You have probably been told :trollestia:


I actually clapped all 6 of my hooves together laughing at this wonde.... Ummm... :facehoof:

#28 · 140w, 3h ago · · ·

You've LIED!!! I couldn't get the extra two!

#29 · 140w, 2h ago · · ·

I say it's Discord. Or maybe being extra harmonious gets you extra chaos magic for balance.

Although by that interpretation Discord would secretly have massive OCD (actual OCD, what people normally think of is obsessive compulsive personality disorder, which is different and less severe) to compensate for the chaos magic.

#30 · 140w, 2h ago · · ·

I need to find more nonsensical-premise stories. Random humor is kind of my thing, and this is more than a little brilliant.

#31 · 140w, 2h ago · · ·

umm, kay... that was odd... seems like it's just a kind of perk... it doesn't look like the extras are much use for anything but counting... and it also seems that it's not just the elements... yeah... this was a weird story... I LIKE IT!!!!!!!!!!

#32 · 140w, 1h ago · · ·

Please tell me there's another chapter to this story :D

#33 · 140w, 1h ago · · ·

:rainbowlaugh: You reminded me of Ten shin han from Dragon Ball

#34 · 140w, 1h ago · · ·

Wonderful!  6 Staches out of 5!


#35 · 140w, 1h ago · · ·



That's too funny

#36 · 140w, 1h ago · · ·

Awesome, hilarious, and a great way to poke fun at cartoonism! I wish we had seen Pinkie too confronted by the mane group. And the finale was kinda sloppy for me, but a gerat fic overall :)

#37 · 140w, 56m ago · 1 · ·

Six elements, six hooves. Makes perfect sense to me. Plus, now they can brohoof each other all at once, and still each have a hoof left over to stand on. (Although the exact mechanics of that one are left as an exercise to an experienced topologist.)

#38 · 140w, 51m ago · · ·

I give this three thumbs up!


#39 · 140w, 23m ago · · ·

>>331012 Yes. Yes! A thousand times yes! :raritydespair:

#40 · 139w, 6d ago · · ·


You forget, Celestia was one of the previous bearers of the Elements of Harmony. This meant Luna can do it too.

#41 · 139w, 6d ago · · ·

So what happens if you put two and two and two and two and two and two and two and two and two and two together?

#42 · 139w, 6d ago · · ·

I put two and two together and got a sandwich. I... am a little concerned.

I was a little disappointed to see no Pinkie Pie, but what we do have is most wonderful.

#44 · 139w, 6d ago · · ·

all I have to say about this is....

DAT ENDING!!!!!:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

#45 · 139w, 6d ago · · ·

>>330340 Your avatar is Francis, you can't "love this" You're only permitted to "don't hate"

#46 · 139w, 6d ago · · ·




#47 · 139w, 6d ago · · ·

Critics rate this story 11 thumbs up and 6 thumbs down out of five

#48 · 139w, 6d ago · · ·

That was a blast to read. Had me laughing almost the whole time. Good job sir. :moustache:

#49 · 139w, 6d ago · · ·

This was a great story! The ending was very well done and wrapped it up very nicely.

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