God has blessed the world with three things: Pizza, Internet, and Ponies. It has been scientifically proven that, without these things, life would cease to exists, for sure.
Foxfire is... different, to say the least. What she had gone through has scarred her for life, and the way she has been treated by other ponies has pushed her onto the brinks of depression.
Nopony loves her. She is an outcast. How does she deal with not having any friends when she needs them more than ever. She is alone... right?
Notes: Special thanks to Florarena Crimsonflame for lending me the OC for this story. Did I word that right? I don't know.
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This is good so far
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Now that that's out of the way, time for a review. Normally, I would go through a huge grading system using a modified version of the way my school grades things, but all you were concerned about is whether or not you were using the OC well. If Foxfire is a well-known OC, I have never heard of her, so I don't know what her personality is when written by the creator. However, the character seemed well done to me.
However, there is one major problem; according to your Author's Note, you are taking people's OCs and using them, without asking permission. Please ask first; if you took mine without request, I'd be pretty angry.
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Did I say WITHOUT permission?
I meant with. I definitely asked the OCs owner first. I agree, I'd be pretty mad as well.
And no, she isn't a well know OC. I think the point of what I' doing is to get people's OCs out there, if only to give them some more attention.
I'm assuming you liked it?
3734271 I am not typically interested in sadfics, but this was well-written, as far as they go. Now, I shall restate what I said on my page: GET OUT.