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Jordan179


I'm a long time science fiction and animation fan who stumbled into My Little Pony fandom and got caught -- I guess I'm a Brony Forever now.

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Lt. Dusk Skyshine, fighter-bomber pilot, and the crucial attack on the Bridges at To-ki-rin that helped stop the final Nork offensive.

Ponies! Glory! Battle! Death! Exploding airplanes! A mash-up of MLP G2 and James A. Michener!

Takes place in the Age of Wonders, 1956 YOM, roughly 4070 years before Luna's return from the Moon.

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Hmm. Dash, when someone asks you how bad you've been hit, you include the part where the bullet went through your chest.

An interesting short glance into this incarnation of Twilight and Rainbow Dash, as well as this part of the Age of Wonders.

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Yep ... I wrote this basically as an elaboration of Luna's memories of her old friend "Dashie" from Nightmares Are Tragic I'm glad you liked it ... I think it's one of my weaker works, but it was fun to write. :twilightsmile:

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Yeah, it's not a very big look at what happened, and I suppose it doesn't really add anything that hadn't already been said. But it still reads nice.

It let's us get to see who Dusk and Dash were, rather than just hearing Luna tell us about them.

Was this where Dusk and Dash were killed? I know it said that they were expected to live, but... stuff happens? Did they live or die?

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Nope, they both live. Dashie is more severely wounded than is Dusk, but they both live.

4447945 Good. Have you written about when they died? How did they die?

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Luna tells Twilight how Dusk died in A Meeting by Moonlight. Though not the whole story.

4447976 I should go reread that one. I'll do it in a minute.

Why does this have a gore tag, but not a dark tag?

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Maybe I should mark it "Dark" as well -- there's definite Gore (look at the description of Dusk strafing the gun pits) but I didn't think it was Dark because both main characters survive and Moondreamer isn't widowed.

Short but it's alright 7/10.

I think you mean The F 86 Sabre P stands for Propeller version F stands for Jets

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