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Kyoko's Stories (5)

Tea Lessons (Derpy's Date)
Octavia is teaching Derpy proper tea etiquette... But then Trixie comes along and tries to help.
1,030 words · 307 views · 10 likes · 1 dislikes
Sen and the Fountain
A short story about a Gambler, a Mirage, a Mathmatician and a Librarian on a quest.
2,043 words · 84 views · 3 likes · 0 dislikes
The Element of Shipping: Trixie, Fluttershy and Applejack
Trixie returns to Ponyville and is helped by a kind pegasus, but not everypony supports her return.
1,399 words · 457 views · 9 likes · 4 dislikes
Miss Octavia Ravenclaw
A dark story of betrayal, hatred and lost dreams.
1,421 words · 230 views · 7 likes · 3 dislikes
Sen-Zen Shipping
3,308 words · 86 views · 0 likes · 0 dislikes

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Sen and the Fountain by Kyoko

Comedy Random Adventure

Sen is an illusion, a mirage. She appears before a traveller, who decides to help her realise her destiny.

After meeting up with Chocolate Pi and Twilight Sparkle, the four of them undergo a quest to free Sen from her current state.

Stars 3 OC ponies and one Canon one.

Basically used as an introduction to Sen and Fortune.

First Published
2nd May 2012

Last Modified
2nd May 2012

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Shukin

#1 · 54w, 2d ago ·

I suppose this was an one-shot? Sen wasn't that much developed, so her fears in drinking from the fountain was unjustified until that point, as she was just that "mysterious and wise" spirit. And, exactly for the same reason, they shouldn't be so close out of basically nowhere. I suggest you to not fragment the paragraphs like you did, as it worsens the overall quality of the writing.

Well, it was a good pastime, at least.

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