Hey folks. JusSonic here, finally sending fics here. While I was worried about coming here for some time now, I decided to give this place a shot...as long as you be fair, 'kay?
It is another Hearth's Warming Celebration, but this time, the celebration gets crashed by the ghosts of Princess Platinum, Commander Hurricane and Chancellor Puddinghead. Even with the help of the spirits of Clover the Clever, Smart Cookie and Private Pansy, can the Mane Six stop the three feuding ghosts from ruining the holidays?
(Yes, I know the holidays are over but I was following the schedule for when I worked on these stories. Besides, better late than never, right?)
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Awesome start
In my headcanon, Pinkie Pie is a direct descendant of Chancellor Puddinghead.
Fluttershy is a direct descendant of Private Pansy
Rainbow Dash is a direct descendant of Commander Hurricane
Twilight Sparkle is a direct descendant of Clover the Clever
Rarity is a direct descendant of Princess Platinum
Applejack is a direct descendant of Smart Cookie
I don't know what to rate it. It has a good story line but would be much better if you used appropriate punctuation like exclaimation marks. Also work on your grammar. Don't tell the reader what's happening, show it. Like
It was a snow storm! No :(
Snow pelted down harder than any blizzard before! Yes :)
See how much better the second one was? Keep working,
Hugey ;)
what if the leaders( Chancellor Puddinghead, Commander Hurricane, Princess Platinum) witnessed the ascension of the founders( Clover the Clever, Smart Cookie, And Private Pansy) to alicornhood by the magic of Friendship between( Clover, Cookie, and Pansy) them and the Elements of Harmony as a catalyst.
it reminds me of what she said to Twilight when a stampede of bunnies devoured her flower garden.
I think this story need a "Dark tag"
3752772 it's a story where a bunch of ghost ponies are trying to start a race war by just being jerks.. to be dark this need to be taken somewhat seriously.