• Member Since 3rd Jan, 2014
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Dolphy Blue Drake


I used to not watch MLP much, but after reading fics on this site, I had to write my own. Today, I'm a passionate fan with few complete fics, but a firm desire to finish all of my fics.

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Eight years ago, sixteen souls suddenly appeared in a world of blocks. Now, only one remains to look after the children of the entire group, and he's in dire need of help.

Meanwhile, there have been a series of dimensional distortions around Ponyville, and it's up to the Mane 6 to fix that!

A Minecraft/MLP crossover with a few twists! First, I'm invoking quite a few mods I'm particularly fond of. I'll try to put explanations here and there, but I might forget some times, so I have a list of the mods I'll be representing at the end of the description. I'm also bending Minecraft physics a bit to fit my needs, but other than that, everything shouldn't be too difficult to understand.

List of represented mods:

More Player Models 2
Jammy Furniture
Mr. Crayfish's Furniture Mod
Natura
BuildCraft (w/ Additional Pipes)
RailCraft
TrainCraft
Forestry
Better Furnaces
Slabcraft
Staircraft
More Enchantments
Better Anvil
Magical Crops
Multi Page Chest
Biomes O' Plenty
Craft Guide

Chapters (16)
Comments ( 63 )

If there's something you don't understand, be sure to comment on it, and I'll explain!

Two chapters in one day. Well, I have a few pre-written, but I'm going to release them only one at a time from now on so that I can stay a few chapters ahead.

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I said I don't watch it very often. There's a difference.

3724036 Neither did I. I was making a correction, that's all.

I couldn't contain my excitement, so I've decided to release this and Chapter 4 today as well! I'm keeping Chapter 5 for later, though. I need to be at least one chapter ahead just in case!

And here's Chapter 4! I'll have to show some restraint now, since I'm really fighting the urge to post the last chapter I've currently written! Chapter 5 should be here soon, though!

And here's Chapter 5! My creativity's slowing down a little bit, but I should still be producing these at an acceptable pace. Look forward to seeing Chapter 6 soon!

I finished Chapter 7, so I'm now releasing Chapter 6! As soon as Chapter 8 is done, the seventh chapter will be posted as well!

And here's Chapter 7! Sorry for the cliffhanger, but if all goes well, Chapter 8 should be here quite soon.

Chapter 8 is now out! I probably won't be releasing any chapters tomorrow, but I'll try to get right back to it on Monday!

3733708 I have to say, the speed at which you output chapters is very nice. :moustache:

3733737 Thanks. I try my best. It also helped that I didn't have school getting in the way. That changes on Monday, though.

3733764 Ah I have an alike problem, though I am also lazy...

Well, here's another chapter! Chapter 10 should be here soon!

"Oh Notch!"

That reaction is just classic! keep up the good work!

Chapter 10 is now here! Chapter 11 should be here soon, too!

Ah, so that's the chocolate cake. And a shotgun or rocket launcher or something. Yikes.

But of course I did. You took two of my favorite things and splashed them together.

3757906 Well, Chapter 11's finished, but I'm waiting for my editor to get back to me before I post it. If all goes well, I'll be posting it soon! Also, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

First Herobrine shows great promise, but the next day, he proves to be too dangerous. That's the most unique backstory to Herobrine yet! Keep up the good work!

Chapter 11 is now posted! I hope you all enjoy it, and I promise that Chapter 12 will be here soon enough!

And now we have Chapter 12! I hope it's to your liking. Chapter 13 should be here soon, as well.

Here's Chapter 13! I hope you all enjoy this one! Chapter 14 should be here soon, too!

Here's Chapter 14! I hope you all like this one. Chapter 15 should be here soon, too!

Sorry for the wait! Here's Chapter 15. I hope you all like it!

Better Anvil
Much maor anvil
Anvil bedderrrr
So cool anvil
Wow

3811439 I love that mod so much. It makes stacking lots of enchantments a lot easier, because it removes the anvil level cost cap.

Sorry for taking so long again! I'm trying to keep up in school right now, so I'm having trouble with keeping my updates steady. I'll keep trying, though. I'm not calling it quits.

3906856 I'm working on it. I'm dealing with writer's block at the moment, and I also have to juggle college and homework. I'm glad you like the story, though. I'll try really hard to get out another chapter soon.

3909576 Oh, the story is far from over. I'm not rushing the ending. This is only a little past the first half. I've got quite a bit planned still. I just need to figure out how I'm going to get to that point.

3909593 You need some bigger interludes and to slow down enough for some basic character development.

Action is nice and all, but you haven't taken the opportunity to flesh out your world properly. The occasional snippet is just not enough.

3909609 I just didn't want to sound too much like a "lemony narrator". I guess I went too far in the opposite direction.

3909693 Yeah, definitely. Need some breathing room. Wish I found this story earlier so I could have pointed this out to you then.

Perhaps you could look into some more interludes with the ponies back at the town. Make a chapter of it and put it out as a sort of breather in between the more serious chapters of the main story. I'd suggest using these interludes to further build upon your world and inject a little comedy as well. It should help slow the story down a little without sacrificing the action/drama of the main story following the ones that are out fighting Herobrine and his forces.

3909888 I had a Chapter 17 already written, but I think I'll bump that one to be Chapter 18 and take your advice. The new Chapter 17 will be a whole chapter interlude, like you suggested.

and the raving madman who thought squids were evil and thought gold was edible.
SkyDoesMinecraft!!!:pinkiegasp:

4061880 Ding ding ding! You win the prize! One thousand Blocks of Emerald!

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Woot!!!???..... Yeah.... 1000 blocks..... of... emerald.... KILL ME....:pinkiecrazy:
Prizes dont phase(faze?) me son!!..:scootangel:

4062358 Are you sure? Think of all the stuff you could buy with that many Emeralds! Especially if you have access to MrCrayfish's Furniture mod! You can order all sorts of crap on Minebay!

Well, if that's not good enough, how about... A 64 stack of Diamond Seeds? You could grow all the Diamonds you want!

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Ohhh!!! Tempting.... Very tempting.... diamonds....:raritystarry: growing diamonds..... I'll install that mod as soon as I get my computer up and running...... And I'm using my samsung tab!..... Wait, what?:rainbowhuh: My computer is broken.... DAMMIT!:twilightangry2:

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And Minebay.... I give people 1 diamond for 2... such as the way of misleading...:scootangel:

4062413 Well, for future reference, the diamond seeds are from the Magical Crops mod. It takes a lot of magic essence to make two diamond seeds, but once you've made your first seeds, they work like wheat. They'll occasionally drop two seeds from one plant, so your ore garden can only get larger from there!

Not bad. Although, I recommend Rail of War instead of TrainCraft. It has broader curves, and SCALE locomotives. It is still indev, though, so it only works in creative.

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