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Dante has been given a job to help his shop get into business. But what happens if something went wrong during his job and he winds up in Equestria. At the same time a hidden and ancient evil before Celestia's Parents were born, starts to seethe back into Equestria, How will Equestria handle this new evil, How will Equestria handle Dante, and how will Dante handle Equestria and its citizens? Read to find out.
Well got two of the chapters, Mission 4 and The Prologue Mission were in their and saved, but when I found out I didn't save them 
So Many facehooves and facedesk came lol.
Positive: I get re work them a little, but some of the old lines gone, remember most but not all but I can still get their.
Negative: Gonna be awhile before I get caught up.
And I left an apology on my blog containing a link...Check it out or not, I don't mind
okay, this in not in order sooo:
remember the event where Dante hung up the pony bullies?
then there was the one about Dante fighting Celestia. i think you put it down as bossbattle 1?
then there was the one about Trixie getting her plot handed to her by a peeved Dante.
the visit to canterlot and the villain poisoning the mane six, the secret missions between Luna and Virgil and what else...
whoops! sorry! went into nerd mode there, the info is still a bit messy but as of now its all i gots
>>334146 yeah i am bit of a fanboy so i will be a big stickler for things like i dont know... Bringing Vergil back and he is normal... so sorry to say but unless this took place BEFORE three then it could happen... but it aint... also will equestria F with his Devil Triger?
This is between the events of DMC 3 and DMC 1. No one knows what happened between those timelines, even though the novels explain, no one knows. And to the DT thing, the only thing that screwed with his DT but kept him in it was the Neo Haywire generator in DMC 3.
Gotta let the story unfold first.
the destroyed ballroom was now destroyed, the once pristine ballroom that was in exceptional condition, was now destroyed
Maybe you should take a second look at this sentence (Among others too). You also seem to have a recurring theme of accidently placing the quotation mark at the wrong side of the space -> he smirked," Well now." (this is just an example)
Otherwise this seems quite nice, I'll be sure to read the rest.
this got Twilight's attention and she started to get excited, the only sentient species were Dragons, Griffons, and River Serpents
I know there are some minor mistakes but this one is pretty glaring; there are MUCH more sentient species than those. There are Cows, Sheep, Buffalo, Minotaur(s), Mules, Donkeys and maybe some others I forgot, but definetly not just those three.
I found quite a few smaller errors, but otherwise I really like how this is going. Please continue, I got a kick and a laugh out of this
It seems you replace "there" with "their" ALOT. If you ever go back through and edit this story you should keep your eye out for that.
" Isn't it rude to give your name first before you ask someone theirs?"
You should probably add the "not" inbetween to and give so that people won't be confused.
Everything seemed really cool and I really am looking forward to this being continued, cheers and good luck!
Negative.
Majority think Vergil finally did it with a woman before DMC 3.
I think Nero just a reincarnation of Sparda, but that my opinion.
Because Berial says this when Nero beats him:
You are just Like he was!
and besides I could tell ya, but then it would ruin the story now would it?
lol
Your asking an impossible thing 
I know he ain't invincible, if I wanted him like that it would be DMC 2 Dante.
Plus I know he was beaten four times.
Vergil: Manga, DMC 3(First fight), and DMC 1(First fight).
Nero: DMC 4(Even though Dante wasn't trying.)
I would have added Gliver(Aka Vergil still) but I don't know the exact details of the fight.
>>369495 Sorry, that comment was supposed to be a placeholder until the next say due to being in a state of "ready to fall asleep at the keyboard". I WAS supposed to get back to you before the hectic thing known as life caused me to forget, luckily your story update reminded me.
Anyways, to better explain : I don't have a problem with Dante being able to easily beat the princess and the mane 6,, it's just the way it was done that was bad. It just felt like you were rushing through it, trying to get each obstacle out of the way as fast as possible so you could get to the next opponent and defeat that one as well to showcase Dante's power. It's very reminiscent of a bad self-insert power trip (I felt it was very ridiculous in this aspect when you brought in the elements of harmony completely out of left field and made them come and go almost as soon as they had arrived.).
Also, you may want to go fix up the triple manticore/Dante fight. I don't know if it was due to my already-half-asleep state, but I remember hardly knowing what was going on in that fight.
And yes, DMC 2 Dante is best Dante. You just CAN'T beat that collar! It also helps that Desperate Devil Trigger was the awesomest thing to happen to me during the last boss (it was actually the thing that allowed me to beat him during the fight! How awesome is that?).
I like to explain away his personality as him being stuck in a Groundhog Day Loop, forcing him to repeat the events of the game over and over again until he finds the way to do things that lets him break away from the loop. It actually explains way too much than it should, such as Dante's distant personality (What's the use in talking and Making friends when everything's jus gonna start over again?), his lack of love for fighting (you try playing the game and fighting the same demons more than 1,000+ times, see if it doesn't curb your enthusiasm a little), and tossing the coin to decide unbelievably important things ( which, yes, it was revealed to be a double-sided coin in a cameo crossover, but it would make just as much sense if it wasn't: if you can't find the way out yourself, why not let fate decide your actions for you, effectively throwing stuff at the wall and seeing what sticks.).
/fangasm , sorry about that.
And besides the fact he did take on both Demon swordsman( Baul and Modeus, Agni and Rudra) and if you want to add Chen, then the manticore fight was like a walk in the park, and yes, Baul, Modeus, and Chen way later. And yes I love the fights in DMC 2 with Argosax and Bolverk, to freaking awesome 
And yes I know about the fight between Celestia being rushed, I literally was falling asleep at the keyboard and due to the fact I had school, and trying to remember what I wrote last time,takes it out of me lol, and to the fact I was going through the Bloody Palace on DMC 4 and had to stop at Stage 65 got confused and also due to the fact DMC 1, 2, and 3 don't work on my PS 2 anymore
I lost the muse .lol. 
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The best I could do is rewrite it alittle the best I can and explain how the elements of harmony are brought out. make the fight a little a teeney bit longer.
and like I said to Gypsy, I asked I was expecting No when I first asked the question. I didn't expect Yes, I wanted to see if it would. and Like I said I was expecting No.
To be honest I was with you guys before I asked, but I wanted to see, but now. 
majority want and I don't mind doing it. ( But your gonna have to trust me)
Why I was wonder was this story wasn't update after such a long time oh well guess I will have to retard it all when update. Please more careful next time also I can't wait till this story get back on track. Oh well off to play the devil may cry hd collection.
Eeyup.
But they didn't specify between when he got laid, they didn't say If Vergil did it before DMC 3 or when he was Gliver:
Let me get this straight...you some how deleted this story by accident and you redoing some of them while playing DMC HD on the Ps3? No wonder this wasn't in my favorites for some reason, thought you deleted it on purpose...and you really need a proof reader.
keep it up bro!
Im lacking in updates because these past few weeks I was in Mexico with my future wife and 3 days ago we had our engagement party and then a day after it was her older sisters wedding and now in 2-6 months I'm going to have a wedding. Lulz I'm going to need $12,000.
Guess spell checking and near 1 o clock pacific dont mix well lol
I aint the saint of spelling and grammar though lol but i'll try to fix them soon as I can.
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how did you delete this by accident?! lulz 
good luck having Dante explain to his"associates" why he has candy colored pony friends and why his brother is like in a relationship with Luna
no VirLuna?
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