The Slendermane is a ruthless creature, so many secrets of it have been undiscovered, but the Cutie mark crusaders will find out very soon.......VERY soon
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So far. So good.
Ugh. The spelling and capitalization errors in this first part alone. It bother's me soooooo much!
OK. I can't help it. It's "Scootaloo", not "Scootalo". That's one thing out. (I'm a major grammar nazi. I need writing correct or else I flip out like someone with major OCD issues.) Other than the grammar, this is going great so far. 
3717376 It's ok i can quickly change it
3717376 don't you mean CDO issues?
Well that's just fantastic!! Just what they needed to see. Everything's just HUNKY DORY for them tonight, huh?!
On the other hand, WHY?!?! :apple cry:
On the other other hand, wow Apple Bloom. We need to get the soap and brush.
And on the last other hand, um… I got nothing.
3870645 I was just improvising
mostly
3870558 OH NO WHY?! WHY MUST YOU WRITE CDO?! I DON'T KNOW IF YOU'RE TRYING TO MAKE ME FLIP OUT BUT YOU DID IT!
3870663 Im not trying anything, this is my first Fan fic and it's not easy,
3870670 I know that feel bro. It's not easy but, BUT, you can overcome it.
I have faith in you. 
On the other hand (yes I'm doing this again), not to be rude, but um… how do I put this in the nicest terms possible? Oh man this is hard.
OK I'm going to be flat out with this, but that CDO comment wasn't meant towards you. It was meant towards THAT GUY! 3870558 
3870703 it Ok, and thanks for having faith in me
I normally don't complain about grammer but i could barely understand what's going on please fix this.(note the only other fic i have made this complaint about is "fluttercited" a origin story for fluttershy.)
Not bad i noticed as they acquire more pages your grammar improves does this mean that by stories end we will have perfect understanding?
Better short and sweet than long and stale.
3870718 how could you kill twilight now everybodies gonna go to pinkie pie for answers and celestia knows what's gonna happen if the cmc survive all i am gonna say is this....TO THE MOON!
3870959 ...its a fan fic you can do what ever you want
3870964 really even if that's to destroy slendermane by saying his name backwards enamrednels yay i beat herobaine!
3871091 What?
3871101 i won that means i get a free wish from shenron now i can enjoy my muffin button without worry!
3871234
3871566 oooooh cupcakes! I like chocolate flavored ones. do you like cupcakes? There good but i prefer donuts personally. when i said his name backwards i unmade him. do you think that timey-whimy is a made up science like ectopsycology or nutmeg? How much wood can a woodchuck chuck? i bet fluttershy knows! You know you're being very rude not contributing to the conversation. ICE CREAM YAY!
3871821
again
3885670 yay i randomed you into submitting now i get a cookie a caramel coconut chocolate covered cookie the cookie of king for he who eats this cookie shall have his power!!!
3886319 ....You've broken me
3886340 yay now I'm a god of chaos lets celebrate sing it if ya know it chocolate rain!
3886382 ...
Great Story so far i like it but at the end of Chapter 5 is the part that i don't like that much but still its very interesting i can't wait to read more of it.
4024344 :)