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Although her most feral instincts are gone, Fluttershy still must contend with transforming into a bat-pony hybrid every now and then. And that's fine; she's happy to adapt! Now, if only she could convince Twilight to give up on her increasingly hare-brained 'remedies', everything would be just perfect...

Written for the 'Bats!' short story prompt on Equestria Daily.

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Comments ( 15 )

“The doctor said I needed more Vitamin C!”

The Doctor would never have recommended pears... :trollestia:

‘Electing to bat’, indeed! I couldn’t even toss a coin for a week after that!

The darn zebras would probably screw up the coin toss anyway.

I heard that Flutterbat was wandering around Ponyville when she suddenly collapsed from exhaustion. They were calling it the Fall of the Roamin' Vampire.

Ok, I admit, I came here for the .bat pun

Alright, I enjoyed this. Hope you win.

3711067 That's exactly what I'm talking about :rainbowwild:


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I heard that Flutterbat was wandering around Ponyville when she suddenly collapsed from exhaustion. They were calling it the Fall of the Roamin' Vampire.

You are a beautiful human being for coming up with this pun. I mean that sincerely.

3713826 Hey, who didn't?

3714788 Thank you!

3723049 well, I work in IT, and once I spent an entire day looking at a server readout that said "running the .bat script" as soon as I thought about Adam west I spent several minutes laughing

Reading this has me now wanting to write my own little bat fic. Gosh this is so damn cute! I love Flutterbat. <3
But, ehh, ya know. It was good quality writing. Surprised it ain't more popular. I loved the throwing darts at random pages line, that made me grin like a stupid. Stupid something... Uhm... Stupid...

Mmm, it's late at night and I can't think of much else to say. Simply put I love how Fluttershy just sort of deals with her bat issues. It'd be so lovely to see more fics like this. :3

Spidermare, Spidermare, she does whatever a spider can!

4810325 hell no futterbat is better than spidermare

I could totally see twilight doing that!

shhhhk-unk-unk-UNK-ffffff

Very colorful imagery you've got there. :rainbowlaugh:

KILL IT WITH FIRE

“I have just been arranging books on random pages and throwing darts at them recently…”

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Cute fic!

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