20-something amateur writer and all around sarcastic wit. My mom says I'm cool.
Since the vampire bat incident, Sweet Apple Acres has been plagued by a thief who steals apples, but strangely leaves money for them. Determined to find out who - or what - the thief is, Applejack makes a surprising discovery...
Written for Equestria Daily's Writer's Training Grounds #001: 'Bats!'
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This was a cute little story and I enjoyed it. Props to you.
You've earned a favorite/upvote/follow from me.
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Thanks! Didn't feel as though it's my best work, although honestly I never feel like anything I write is nearly as good as it could be. The 1,500 word limit is a challenge, I had to cut a lot out. Though I suppose brevity is rarely a bad thing.
It was really enjoyable story :) Nice.
Normally when a story is written so short like this, I end up down voting it, but the premise of the story was pretty good so I'll give an up vote.
I shall be honest, at first Flutter's seeming to WANT to be Flutterbat, made me think cool. But the ending seemed forced, and her attitude seemed to change on a dime.
I was started looking for the second chapter.
This one-shot was enjoyable and I would have kept reading.
A neat addition to the Bookshelf
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Kinda feels like that's the point, the transformation changed her mark so it changed how she thinks, so when she changed back she realized she didn't want this.