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Zanem-Ji


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Rainbow Dash finds out that Applejack, the bearer of the Element of Honesty has not been so "honest" with her, and when she finds out just how far the secrets have gone, Rainbow Dash throws the magic of friendship out the window. (Adult Language is involved)

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Ugh, RariDash. I thought this was an AppleDash story for sure. :ajbemused:
Uh-oh, shipping getting the best of me... Again. :facehoof:

Comment posted by Zanem-Ji deleted Dec 31st, 2013

>>RainbowJack2000

Lol Sorry. Eventually every shipping you can blend the Mane Six into will be up here. It'll just take some time.

>>NinjaDash

Uh....good wow? Bad Wow?
Thank you? Sorry if it wasn't that great?
I'm not sure which answer to give you. Lol.

Though I may have reservations about the shippings, I find your writing to be quite wonderful! Keep up the good work!

Squeeze. Choke. Kill. Destroy.

XD for some reason i like that line. and keep up the good work.

3712177 Crush. Kill. Destroy. Swag, Crush. Kill. Destroy. Swag, Crush. Kill. Destroy. Swag, Crush. Kill. Destroy. Swag

Just for your information:
If you want to reply to someone like this: 3711071, there is a reply button on the right side of the bar that also holds comments up- and downvotes. It links to the comment number, not the person.

Also, you might want to join some groups like Raridash and add your story to them.

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So...like this??

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Ah. Very well then. Thanks!

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As of right now, no. But when I come around to making that RariJack story, it might be the sequel.

That was amazing, I can't believe it, but I cried during it.:fluttercry::raritycry:

Holy crap that was intense I really hope there is more coming because this was just way too powerful to just end

this better have a fucking sequel! this is to good to just fucking end with such a cliff-hanger!

It`s in character for Dash to be so rash... but it`s out of character for Applejack to be discreet about it. She`d be much more likely to call Dash out on it all before things got serious to decide who gets what.

4294357 That's true. This was my first story posted and I want them to be a little out of character in it. Fluttershy definitely wouldn't be the type to knock ponies out, but you know, it was just for story writing purposes.

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That much is debatable. It`s not out of character for Fluttershy to knock a pony out, if she can be certain it`s for their own good.

4295226 Yes but we've never seen her do it. We've seen her get verbal when it's necessary, but aside Discord corrupting her, she's not one to get violent.

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We`ve never seen any of the Mane 6 in the homosexual relationship either. Or heterosexual, for that matter. If :"never saw it in canon" is a legitimate rebuff, then 99% of stories out here need to be purged immediately.

4297855 Valid Point Good Sir. Valid Point. Very well then.

4298812 :twilightoops: I AM SO SORRY!! Uh...Valid point, FAIR LADY.Valid Point.

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That`s better.

On a separate note, one has to wonder as to how the affair between Applejack and Rarity became a thing... and how exactly did it happen Rainbow Dash married Rarity either.

4301511 Hmmm...I guess I could make this a threequel story...

4301511 I have another story that I'm focusing on right now, but if I managed to get enough of a plot going, I will definitely attempt to add more to this story.

Oh my god
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Oh my god you win you can have the world...

You had the intensity right. Buuuut... I was disappointed to have it end without closure...
Over all though I actually read it all the way through... which I rarely do so. :yay:

I'm reading your stories in the order that they've been posted, and I'm curious:
Have you done a sequel to this already, and if not, will you ever do one?

5767978 I've actually got an idea for this one, and I'm leaning more towards a prequel than a sequel for it.

5904533 All right.
Can't wait to see it, if/when you post it.

5904533 I'd do both.

I know Pinkie and Fluttershy are both trying to push Rainbow to forgive them, but how about making it clear to both of them that they have to earn it first? That it's on them, not her, to fix what they have done.

Really wish there was a sequel of some sort to this!

“I wonder what you would do if you saw somepony in bed with Fluttershy. Especially if it was one of us fucking her. Would you be all giddy and fucking excited about it? Throw a fucking party over it?” Rainbow rubbed her wrists, “Hell no. you’d break their fucking neck. Probably cut them up and turn them into a fucking cupcake or some shit like that.”

For all the random things Pinkie Pie can do, along with a certain Grimdark story I read...I wouldn’t put it past her to do just that:twilightoops:.

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