In the dark days that follow, Fluttershy finds herself dealing with the many ramifications of the spell cast on her by Twilight Sparkle.
Tempted by desire, Fluttershy's transformation into a bat pony seems to be only the beginning.
That was awesome I especially loved how you implemented discord into the story
@Wonderbolt_Dashie Thanks, there is quite a bit more coming once I have a little time to continue.
A little straightforward, but not bad. There were a few grammatical errors here and there that need to be ironed out, but I guess that's inevitable given the time constraints. If there's a deeper story percolating inside that head of yours, then I hope you can get down sugarcube
Looking forward to a conclusion/continuation. This is good, but it definitely feels like it's just the beginning.
Righting her chain
You mean her chair?
@Milk Experiment Thank you for pointing out that error. I am currently working on chapter two should be up some time tomorrow.
Discord, how dare you harm Butter- er, Shutter- Ah, to Tartarus with it, BOOO!
This is certainly different from what I expected, Keep up the good work
@BlackBloodProject Thanks for the comment, I will be continuing. Life has sidetracked me lately.
WHY U NO CONTIUNES?!!!!!!?!!?!!?,!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!???!!??!