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In the dark days that follow, Fluttershy finds herself dealing with the many ramifications of the spell cast on her by Twilight Sparkle.

Tempted by desire, Fluttershy's transformation into a bat pony seems to be only the beginning.

First Published
31st Dec 2013
Last Modified
11th Jan 2014

That was awesome :twilightsmile: I especially loved how you implemented discord into the story :yay:

@Wonderbolt_Dashie Thanks, there is quite a bit more coming once I have a little time to continue.

A little straightforward, but not bad.  There were a few grammatical errors here and there that need to be ironed out, but I guess that's inevitable given the time constraints.  If there's a deeper story percolating inside that head of yours, then I hope you can get down sugarcube :ajsmug:

Looking forward to a conclusion/continuation. This is good, but it definitely feels like it's just the beginning.

Righting her chain

You mean her chair?

@Milk Experiment Thank you for pointing out that error. I am currently working on chapter two should be up some time tomorrow.

#6 · 45w, 10h ago · · · The Ritual ·

O___O what:heart::derpytongue2:

#7 · 42w, 6d ago · · · The Ritual ·

Discord, how dare you harm Butter- er, Shutter- Ah, to Tartarus with it, BOOO!:flutterrage:

This is certainly different from what I expected, Keep up the good work :raritywink:

#8 · 42w, 4d ago · · · The Ritual ·

@BlackBloodProject Thanks for the comment, I will be continuing. Life has sidetracked me lately.

#9 · 29w, 5d ago · · · The Ritual ·

WHY U NO CONTIUNES?!!!!!!?!!?!!?,!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!???!!??!:fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry:

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