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What if Twilight's counterspell did nothing to Fluttershy?
An extended/alternative ending to Bats! based on an idea that was just floating around in my head.
This is intended to be my entry into the EQD writer grounds prompt.
Warning: Contains spoilers from Bats!. Also contains author's headcannon/ stupid ideas/ interpretations of the episode and the show's characters. You have been warned.
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I was going to say she was kind of like Batman with the super contingency ( if allies turn evil/ become a danger for any reason) plans. He has one for every member of the justice league.
Oh, brilliant! BRILLIANT!
I don't know what else to say!
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Thank you so much for this story! While everyone else is making Fluttershy the victim of magical hypnotic bats, you're being actually true to the episode where they're just animals and really have nothing to do with what happened.
And making Discord the responsible party, as part of a scheme by Fluttershy? GENIUS!!!!
Yeah, I'm a chiropterophile. I don't like what people think of bats and I dread some of the art and fics that are going to be showing up now, even if they're just in fun. Thank you for this one! Foxglove approves!
Think you meant been instead of beam.
Anywho besides a few more mistakes I enjoyed the story. For some reason Fluttershy pulling a Batman for having a contingency plan for everything is creative and appealing. Having a friend like Discord who not only has the magic but also enjoys subtle and webbed worked plans. People forget that while he enjoys a direct show, he is also a cunning schemer with something going on that is not so obvious to notice. He always have two sides to his actions.
KABOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM
Wsheeeeeeeeeeuuwumph!
You hear that? That was the sound of my mind exploding and then imploding back in on itself. You have truly presented a brilliant (and believable) theory about Fluttershy. After all, you don't plan a murder out loud. It's aaaaaalways the quiet ones.
Thank you. Thank you for this artwork.
I have to agree with you in that Fluttershy can be like the Doctor sometimes; she did manage to talk a full grown dragon into leaving, after all. I am a fan of that, as well, now, cause you worked it so well here. Yes, there are a few mistakes here and there but I don't get bothered by those. Thank you for a brilliant and clever story.
Okay, this is just brilliant on so many levels.
I really love the story idea and execution, but there's a bunch of grammar and punctuation mistakes I came across here. Would you like them pointed out so you can avoid them in the future?
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Flutters you are so evily clever you know that.
I just have one nitpick. Discord said 'beam' instead of 'been', and I immediately scrolled down to inform you.
ALSO. Not very long after, Discord also said 'prefect' instead of 'perfect'. And in the AUTHOR'S NOTE, you said 'entire' instead of 'entry'.
...You DO know that disabling auto-correct on iPads is a thing, right? You just go into the settings.
Oooooh...
Fluttershy, you so EVIL! 
Oh well, at least Flutters recognizes that just about everyone's a threat and has a Chaos Master to do her dirty work.
Clever idea. Likes!
But....hmmm....those contingency plans....isn't that sort of how like Bruce Wayne was actually the one who caused all that trouble when Cadmus targeted the Justice League using the information they stole from the Batcomputer, which led to him almost dying when diverting the kryptonite missile that was on its way to kill Doomsday & Superman? I point this out, since Batman told Supes he took a bullet for him--but in essence, a bullet which Batman, himself, had fired. Such thing could always backfire on Flutters
The story isn't actually bad, but for a comedy, it really wasn't very funny. Unless you find the whole Flutterchess idea intrinsically funny, there's nothing actually comical in this, except for the hypotheticals in the ending.
Interesting idea. I kinda felt the idea that Twilight's spell somehow transferred the vampire fruit bat's hunger for fruit and made into a Bat-pony hybrid was forced and didn't make any sense.
This was oddly fun
Wait... can Fluttershy break the Fourth Wall now?
This... Is......
B R I L L I A N T !
This needs a Sequel.