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steel soul


Gonna work on that Kingdom Hearts fic at some point

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A boy and a girl from a differnt world find themsleves thrown into a struggle they never thought they would find themselves in.

With the comeing darkness edgeing closer and closer can the two help thier new friends out or are they part of the problem?

(Oh yeah! Expect Spoilers to Tales of Xillia!!)

PS:Remaking the story so Expect changes where I need it!

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Ooh this looks good!

He raised a hand to touch his face but found something flat press against him instead. He raised an eyebrow and gave his hand a long hard look. To his utter amazement he found that he no longer had hands, and upon further inspection, he no longer had feet either. In their place however were a four hooves. He let his eyes wonder to the rest of his body finding that not only did he not have hand but he seemed to no longer be human.

:applejackunsure: *leaves page*

Applejack face meet Teepo. :rainbowlaugh:

I don't know if Jude wouldn't panic in finding out that he wasn't human anymore. Then again, it seem that he remembered he was supposed to be the others. And I guess that understanding the situation would be priority for him after all. I wonder though, will we see the others too? I could totally see Applejack not liking Alvin depending on when in the story of Tales that happen. Oh, and Mila meeting the Princesses. She is the Lord of Spirits after all :raritywink:

3707055
Sorry if I disappointed you.

Anime? I don't need this gay shit.

3708876
Really? At least fucking look up what Tales of Xillia is you judgemental prick. If you had done that you would have realised that while anime styled it is a game. You have looked at an art style and said no, that is quite frankly disgusting. If you have nothing constructive to say, Shut. The. Fuck. Up.

The Tales games are widely renowned and one of the most widely played JRPGs outside of Japan, Tales of Xillia 2 comes out in 2014 I believe.

Steel Soul. A heads up. Don't listen to pricks like this. I for one am actually going to READ this before I pass judgement.

3710894
Thanks :twilightsmile:
I just go with the flow anyway. Its sad yes but I just take it with a grain of salt.

3710899
No problem. I just got done reading chapter one. I'm not usually one to say it but....

Please sir can I have some moar?:twilightblush:

Love it. Love the concept. Love the style. have a great big thumbs up from me

3710986
Not mad so much as disappointed while on three hours sleep over three days.

3710986
You are entitled to your own opinion...
Rather you read my story or not.:twilightsmile:

Eh... About Teepo... While he is mostly acting on Elize unconscious thoughts, he had developed a personality before... you know what. Personally, I like to think that he was already alive in a matter of speaking :raritywink: Still, poor Ponyville. Teepo + Pinkie? That's the friendagedon.

Interesting start to one of the Top 5 'Tales of' games in my opinion. Also agreeing with 3744412 yeah that's going to end well or traumatize him and Elize.
But also in my opinion I couldn't stand Teepo (loved Elize) but Teepo was just barely tolerable cause of his back story making sense.

I already find it cute and in a couple parts, funny. I'll read chapter two tomorrow.

He nuzzled into her gently, before settling down beside the hey, folding his for legs under his chest.

I picture things as I read so I have a better understanding of the story. This is but one of the D'awww moments I had in this chapter.

“Hey! Wakey wakey lazy bones!”

Jude opened his eyes lazily before closing them once again, he hadn’t felt this tired for a long time and he was not about to let someone wake him for anything. “Uhg…Just…a few more minutes Leia…” He said groggily. He waved a hoof away, trying to bat his aggressor away.

“Ah would but your kinda sleeping in MA barn there partner.”

This is just funny imagining this, its even funnier if you imagine how they felt in the situation. Oh, Applejack, you have the best timing. XD

um any progress on new chapters?

i hate for this to be cancelled :fluttershysad:

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