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MyLittleDashie753


Rainbow Dash is the best pony.

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The Gryphons, Zebras, and the Ponies are in a war for the fate of Equestria, which nation will win, and which will fall.

Not affiliated with the Battlefield game series, little bit of Flutterdash (nothing TOO erotic), and some gore.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 33 )

I don't think you understand war.

3705730 I don't follow how I don't understand war. It doesn't really have to be realistic anyway, it takes place in a world of colorful magical ponies with Griffons and pegasi. If you're hoping on realism, you might be disappointed.

3706647 Except I'm not expecting realism. I'm expecting common goddam sense.

Let's break this down, shall we?

Technology:Looking at the example of the Equestria' 19th century steam/coal puffers. Does that look like a country that has M1-Abrams tanks (which is what you suggest they have via pinkie) and 20th century Automatic Assault rifle. And speaking of automatic shit, if they have magic that can theoretically be fired from anywhere and hit anything with a theoretical blast range of AN ENTIRE TOWN, why would you need assault rifle?

Guess what Assault rifles were meant to do? If you said "neutralize multiple enemies" then you're right.. and have probably cheated.

Reasons for war:

When the war came, she enlisted, realizing the (accused) atrocities pony-kind has committed

All seven types of no.

it takes place in a world of colorful magical ponie

Yes. And you just linked them to atrocities. Un-ex-fucking-plained atrocities. I'm not even going to explain the bureaucracy, political motivation, funding, and just about everything else that goes along with a World War, which is what you're hinting towards.

3706796 Okay, so im not that good with war. But it's my story, so don't get so fucking pissed at my decisions about it. If you don't like it, then don't read it.

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you both are over analyzing it.
BTW Great story! poor :fluttershbad: tho

3707014 If you're gonna do war in ponelandia then do it right.

3707014 Thanks I've started the 2nd chapter but not sure when it will get finished

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You should listen to your profile pic...

3718698 BUUUUUUUUUUUUURRRRRRRRRRNNNNNNNNNNNNN :rainbowwild: :rainbowlaugh:

3718698 That's funny. I don't see you with +100 followers! (Let's go there).


3718805 No please, continue writing your craptastic fic. I'm sure all of 2 people love it.

3718698 Please, no, continue. I fucking relish these fights.

3718698

HIT ME!

FIGHT ME!

....Give me a hug.

3719057 Dude, alot of my friends like this story and that's your opinion. You may fuck off now.

3719227

Lol kewl story bro, but your friends ain't this fandom. True writing prowess comes from impressing people that aren't your friends. Like me. And lemme tell you; I am not impressed.

3719360 Yeah, but you're not the ONLY person who read this story dipshit, you don't decide whether or not the story is good. You may not be impressed, but BronyBoy101 is, and im sure he isn't the only other person who read this story that's not my personal friend. I don't give a fuck if you're impressed or not, so who the fuck cares. Please for the love of christ just fucking leave, you keep bringing it back up, when I'm ready to be done with it. After this, if you get anymore notifications relating to this story, delete them and move the fuck on, you asshole prick.

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I came to read the story, simply cuz i thought Iggs was being a faggot to an author again. After seeing this rather childish response to some idiot, I've no more want to read it. I am sure I'm not the only one, btw.

kthxbai

3719379 Nooope, sorry.

He's right.

It's shit.

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3706796

Thank you, Iggy! Now I don't have to explain everything wrong with this fic.

3719489 Could you elaborate on what's shit about it. I know it could be better, I just don't know necessarily how it could be better.

3719921

It was explained by Mr Ignorable. La Barata said he agreed.

It's shit for the reasons mentioned by Ignorable.

very good Fanfic I kinda like it

3721324 Finally some good feedback. Thanks man.

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Your welcome i followed you on your user page

HOLY! SHIT! Poor :scootangel: is dead! Poor :unsuresweetie::applecry:. I haven't cried this much since the last book of the maze runner series! I love it!

3722288 LOL thanks man. By the way, The Maze Runner books were great. Didn't read the prequel though.

3722288 I agree this story is great I hope to see an update soon!:pinkiehappy:
(Also poor :scootangel:)

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4131817 Lookit you! Reviving an already dead and gone flamewar! Aren't you just the little trooper :heart:

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4131811 Are you seriously that desperate for attention that you're bitching at 4 month old comments?

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