As a filly, Ditzy never knew why she was teased, but as she grew older she realized she different from everypony else, and still doesn't exactly know how to deal with it. Join us as we tell a tale of a simple grey mailmare turning something that was thought to be ugly and a disgrace into something beautiful.
I actually like where this is going! You have earned a like and a favorite
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This paragraph was just too long, so I broke it up for you!
The story, though sort of short and no real direction as of yet, had a gentle sweetness to it. I can't wait to see more!
3697004 Thank you! Sorry about the long paragraph, this was really my first time typing and my stupid roommate wouldn't let use the computer for a week...
3698902 You're welcome! It's just more pleasing to the eye when all of the paragraphs are about the same length. This is a great start to the story. This is the only thing you should change so far. I'd like to see where this goes!
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3701265 thanks! :)
3706260 Ditzy is like best pony o I await moar
Well nopony's perfect(more a comment on Ditzy than anything else and how ponies need to be more forgiving of her than they are). A little error in word order near the end(You say "eye lazy" and I think you meant "lazy eye"... maybe, I guess you might have done that intentionally... so if that's the case I apologize.) still whatever error or lack there of is more than forgivable when such a short chapter and a synopsis get me hooked enough to want to read more.