The fillyish pegasus with a waistcoat.
Hearths' Warming is drawing near, and something Pinkie says provokes Fluttershy to try and stop the magical Hearths' Warmer from delivering her big, heavy ton of presents. Well, not an actual ton, just loads and loads. After all, surely kind little old Fluttershy doesn't deserve all that many!
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This was a cute little story and I enjoyed it.
The only thing I can really say is that the chapters are a little on the short side and could have just been posted as one big chapter, but thats just me nuancing things. It was still a great story.
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For your first fix, I like how this is going so far, Flutters worrying about making the sack too heavy, trying to be naughty by moving Angel from his spot on the couch and then sitting in it, and by scaring Rainbow Dash with a meek roar. The way Fluttershy acts in here is pretty good.
And trying to do something nice by being naughty. Ain't that a strange little twist.
Huh, I am not usually into having people do nice things for me. I don't usually like to be given stuff.
Well, I really liked this story. It isn't usually the kind of story I favorite, but this is one exception.
Oh dear, looks like someone forgot to close their italics!
3693454 Thank you for saying so, Dear Heart.
Very cute, and just the kind of ending I appreciate. Thanks