I want to share a little story... (May post bio later...)
After meeting a group of mares on a rather...unexpected predicament, he is left unfazed of such the thought and situation he's longed for so long. However, despite the rough road ahead that they will embark on, is it really possible for six mares to change this greatly and have him realize his importance by just being who they really are?
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oh... this will be an interesting story...
Followed from FanFiction :) Nice to see the story here.
hmmmmmmm... don't the rules say that you can't post another story as a rewrite of a previous story?
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I wouldn't call it a rewrite if you get too in detail with terms.
3686200 but it is a rewrite though... if you think about it
So, what is this story gonna be? A rewrite, or an entirely new story? If this is a rewrite of the other, I don't know if I'll bother reading, since I've finished the current chapters on the other one. If it's entirely new, then I'll stick around.
This will be good
This certainly has many changes than the previous story. I consider this to have a interesting story line as well.
Also, I'd like to say that I will be here till the end
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It's difficult to explain. I don't know an exact term for it. But you should probably stay and read this one. There are things that happen differently, and new plot points. It is recommended you read this before at least the third episode in Season 4, otherwise you might be confused. I still need to put up what I have here, but yeah, it's not the exact same. It has entirely new things in and planned.
3689318 well. Time to read some Nostalgia
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Alright. Now that I know things will be different, I'll stick around
Hypersonic:
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fuck the police!!!
also good story
I am REALLY liking this story so far! I suppose that may partialy be because Alex is pretty relatable to me...
Anyway, I'm also liking the apparent intimacy with Fluttershy, keep it up.
hmmm not as bad as i thought it'd be
Who made cover
I'm really liking the story so far although I have to admit I like the other story better at this point still so guess I'll be sticking around
So far this is a very good rewrite!
I know it is basically a remake, but you could try to switch the relationships, around. Don't get me wrong, I find this much better than the orrigional, it is just, that the Fluttershy relationship seems to be getting old. It makes the first story unique. You should change it up a little bit so the origional, is not in the shadow of this one. If you wish to continue with the Fluttershy relationship, I will still read your story. It is your story after all, and I should not force my ideas upon you. Other than that, awesome story.
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Thanks for the suggestion, but I'm afraid I won't be doing that. This is more of a "Director's Cut". It's supposed to take over the first part of the series, but with detail and ideas I didn't have at the time the original was made.
4013307 Alright, and great fix. You have inspired me to attempt a fanfiction similar to this, but I can't seem to write it on paper.
4013307 Sooo, it's basically the same story but with better detail? And you're not going to change anything?
THEN WHAT'S THE POINT OF MAKING ANOTHER ONE?! Seriously, you spend 2 years writing the original just to ditch them and create another one that's basically the same? No offense but, what's the point?
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Not exactly. The "originals" were written when the story was no where as developed as it is now. Though not as nostalgic, these make me more content in originality. I was thinking about replacing the old ones, but the majority wanted them to stay. Either way, I've always envisioned this series to be cut out in parts, almost as if there were separate novels to make up for the series, so Awakening was the start of that. In the current story, I would already be on the fourth part.
I'm confused is this just the same as A New Hero just different story line and such I'm confused did I tell you I'm confused
I'm still very confused but eh I'll still read it
4015286 Would you kindly let me know when its up?
Is this a Kingdom Hearts reference?
You missed spell along.
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Probably Autocorrect.
I have not read either story completely, but I might read this one, but I have a question.
Is this story less "cringe" than the other, cause I couldn't bring myself past chapter 1 of the original.
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Bet yer that guy. Or is it me?
Every time he introduces himself to Nightmare Moon I slap my face in embarrassment and then read the chapter from the beginning so that I can get past that moment without hitting myself, it never works, so now I'm in an endless loop.
Guys one question is Alex an unicorn pegasai or earth pony I am a bit confused mind help a friend out
Lots of detail, Not needed, but not a bad thing. It gives it a bit more depth. Loving the new stuff here.
9/10 on awesome-sause.
Chiraptophobic- not a phobia,but close to the spelling of the phobia of bats.
wait no, nevermind... its another word for the same thing..... derp
Also
Is it a bad that whenever someone yells to get everyone to shut up I can only think of them yelling.....
HOLD IT!
Like in Ace Attorney?
It just makes me feel like I have a problem.
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earth pony
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Yep same thing XD
Wait... Flutters, you HAVE INTERNET?!
D'awww.
Can pls update the story