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NarwhalUnicorn


j'ai ete desole, mais je suis deteste Mon Petit Poney.

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Ever wondered why Minuette was always constantly on time? Or why she was capable of automatically solving complex mathematical equations in her head? Or why she was always brushing her teeth? Or why her only friends were Twinkleshine and Lyra? Or why Twinkleshine didn't have her own tag? Or why I set this story in Canterlot? Or why I wrote this at 2 AM on Christmas Day? Or when I'm going to stop asking these questions? Good, because I don't know either.

Minuette, your average unicorn, is actually not that average. Someponies just wish she was, though... because then they probably wouldn't be trapped inside Canterlot's time corridor with a maniacal, time-addicted unicorn...

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Comments ( 37 )

I liked the story, especially after the authors notes, lol:pinkiecrazy:

But I think if you started spacing your paragraphs and dialogue apart the story would turn out much more readable, besides that I loved everything else about it.

This is awesome, kind sir.
HAHA! I'M ALREADY ON ONE HUNDRED AND FIFTY TWO!
:twistnerd:

This is very good, especially after the constant complaints about level 134. It makes me think about how long it's been since I've given up on level 71.

Also: 2AM. Luna approves. (as do I)

Ehhh...Needs more insanity.:pinkiehappy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:
But I like it!:moustache:

Is it strange that I was kinda wishing that Lesson Zero Twilight would show up and make things worse?

This is a cute story. The mare's OCD reminds me of my occasional OCD-moments. (Thankfully, those impulses are on a tight leash nowadays.)
(Or maybe I'm just getting lazier.):pinkiehappy: This gets an upvote from me.

I liked this a lot. Added to the Because Discord, The Pizza of Life, and This Was Actually Funny folders of Celestia's Library

tinyurl.com/llaz5ct

3752157 Ohmygosh, thank you!

3835202 Aww... why are you sad? :fluttershysad:

If you don't mind me asking...

3835217 Perhaps I could help you? :pinkiesad2:

Whoa that's a lot of groups! No wonder it showed up in my feed. How did it end up in so many so fast?

3935569 I join a lot of groups... :moustache:

This pony should never, ever, ever, ever, meet Twilight; that would end poorly.

3936571
Frankly, her meeting even mostly-sane Twilight wouldn't end well,

3972135 :rainbowlaugh:
Remember: Christmas Day, 2AM, drunk off aj.

This is the result.

3972411 My writing after alcohol is terrible :facehoof:

3972483 :pinkiecrazy: Mine is non compos mentis.

3972495 I don't speak dead languages.

3972501 Tu as une raison valable... :applejackunsure:

3972514 latin I'm guessing...

3972526 Non, je parle francais.

3972543 Me gusta los tacos.

four years of high school spanish for ya.

if you happen to speak with will, or are currently, tell him I wrote him a song on skype that i want him to check out

3972570 Ne ne parle pas anglais.

3972639 J'ai écrit une chanson.

3972652 J'ai écrit une langue.

That was good. I loved Colgate going crazy, then just losing all her crazy just as fast... Also I know you called her Minuette, but she will always be Colgate to me. Now more so because of you... and Alliteration... Crazy Cannibal Colgate... sorry I'm just too easily amused. You may now receive your four hundred points.

OK, I honestly had no, and I mean no Idea what to say to this story. I read through it 3 times trying to figure out what I just read. Well, my thoughts are in the PCaRG review, so I hope you enjoy. Yes, it's short... but to this story... what else did you expect?

PCaRG review on said story.

There is one word to describe this, HILARIOUS! I loved it!

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