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The Literary Lord


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In the aftermath of the Blackest Night and facing the Rise Of The Third Army, the Entities of the Emotional Spectrum powering the various corps fear for their existence. As a precaution, they put a piece of their essence into special rings and cast them into another dimension; the world of Equestria.
However, the Black has also found Equestria and begins another Black Lantern invasion. As the prime rings find their new hosts, they must fight against an onslaught of undead terrors...and perhaps even each other.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 14 )

And here it all begins! But I'm sure nothing bad will happen in Equestria, the land of songs and lollipops, because of the insanely powerful and single-minded entities, right? :pinkiecrazy:

This is great! I love what you and BrutalityInc did with this. Though I also have some fondness for my own small contribution there at the start with Dashie, Scoot, and Hurricane.

I'm looking forward to the reception this gets here on FIMfic.

Good luck with this. They're not exactly creating this story linearly for you.

You can post what I wrote as a next chapter ya know.

I love the detailed work out into differentiating the various cultures of the caribou, the sea ponies, and the Diamond Dogs. The latter especially feel very canine in their actions. And good on making Rufus an engineer, it'll be interesting to see how his ring's constructs manifest as compared to Applejack's or those of other members of his new 'war pack'.

And the poor Sea Ponies. I hope some of them got away from the zombified Black Lantern High Tide.

For Geoff Johns's pen, this is a very good chapter in the line of those tie-ins from the original event, I want to see where this goes.

OK, that last scene is freaky! A Black Lantern blasting into Ditzy's home and her dead husband no less! Nice to see a Time Turner who is a fan of the Doctor Whooves series instead of being the Doc or being a regular pony with time skills.. Interesting twist.

A Blue Lantern Ditzy Doo? AWESOME! An extra Lantern for Pinkie's corps!

Blue AND Red Lantern Breezies? Nice to see incorporation of Season 4 elements, I dread what they might do with the Changelings, Discord, Sombra and Tirek. Sombra makes a perfect Yellow Lantern since he terrifies the Crystal ponies, or did, whatever.

So, that happened. Some Changelings are involved in all this, nice. And whoa, an Ursa MAJOR is part of the Star Sapphires? I'm scared now, I'm guessing it's the mother of the Ursa Minor from Boast Busters. An Ursa Minor is a big enough threat, but a MAJOR?! That thing could hold the Minor in it's giant claw! It could crush Ponyville easily if it tried!

How come Chapter 2 and 3 is on deviant art right now and it isn't on here? The prologue and chapter 1 are the only chapters that are from the original story. The rest are just a bunch of side stories. Care to explain why?

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Indigo Herd Rarity, "I have a perfect solution. Isn't that right Diamond Tiara?"

IH Diamond Tiara, "Nok."

The loose ring flew only a meter in front of Applejack. She had ordered it to only go as swiftly as she herself was flying and today she was not in a hurry. After creating this ring with a quarter power charge, she had fully recharged her own ring and flown east like she said she would. Only after she was outside of Ponyville had she instructed this ring to begin looking for a wielder. Bon Bon’s words had struck a nerve and she had made her first decision as Corps Leader: The Green Lantern Corps would not recruit from Ponyville any longer unless there was no choice. Applejack had told Rarity and Twilight her policy decision via Rarity’s Indigo ring. Rarity and Twilight agreed with her thinking. The inducting of neighbors and associates in the various lantern corps tasted wrong to the fair dealing farm mare, it smacked of favoritism and she would not have that, not on her watch!

wait, WHAT!:twilightoops:
WHEN DID THAT HAPPENED!!!:flutterrage:
WHY DID YOU SKIP ONE OF THE MOST IMPORTENT PARTS OF ANY ADVENUTRE STORY!!!!!!:twilightangry2:

( = Abigail Jacqueline V of Equestria = )
( = You had the ability to overcome great fear = )
( = Welcome to the Green Lantern Corps = )

You change her name? Why?

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