During a phone call from a mare Shining Armor was seeing on the side, he gets some news that could change his life for good...
Or not.
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Dat ending.
A return to form, if I do say so myself
Glad to see your back buddy. This was great, keep it up
4490909 Thanks! I knew I'd return someday.
I saw the author and I knew it had to be good.
Also, 23 weeks whoooaaa.
4491392 And just in time to see me taking a hiatus from writing... wat
I called it, but still doesn't make it any less funny.
4491557 yeah... It took that long for me to remember to write a description...
Abso-friggen-lutely amazing.
lik dis if u cri evertim
Got the email.
Got excited.
Got happy.
GOT MORE?
4491568 Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat?! Why have all my favorite writers gone on hiatus! (or already are...)
Well, there's no reason to write literature anymore. The greatest line of prose has now been written.
4493173 Holy crap I forgot about that line! Thank you, good sir. I live to make people laugh at stupid things like that
Ah, incest. Capable of turning even the darkest stories into lighthearted comedies with nigh but a mention.
I look so hard for 'Twilight and Shining make a foal' stories. I see this and then.. DENIED.
4493450
Incest is wincest?
4493977 Oh God... I can see the sequel ideas already if they DID have a foal....
I knew how this was going to go early on. But It was still a fun ride. Great ending.
4492959 Sorry bro, just fell in a slump, I shall return though
Well, I feel like a horrible person for laughing my ass off at that last line.
A terrible, terrible person.
4495041 Hey, at least you didn't write it!
3675421 WHAT A TWIST!
Me: Oh shit...
Me:
How the hell....? You clever, clever girl! Shining, you are so lucky....
4498396 To be honest those aren't my cup to tea either. I'm used to writing fics with totally ridiculous concepts and (Even more so) random ends. This seemed like a good area to see if I till had my old spark. Sorry if you did not enjoy it much. Hopefully I can do better in the future.
What
To clarify did the caller just say she was twilight or was she really twilight
Wait what. Shining had Talk to........ OHHHH. Now i get it
Twilight 
Now, that was an adorable disaster of an interaction!
Fun enough to ignore the fact that there are no phones in G4.
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What is this, YouTube?
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If the caller lied it wouldn't count as "Comedy", would it?