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norwegian-brony


I am a Norwegian as i hope you all understand from my username and my OC name is Roaring lightning

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You wake up in a prison cell and you have no idea how you came there, in fact you don't remember much only your name and some other basic things. There is one thing you notice quick and that is you do not belong in this world because the inhabitants of this world are animals that can talk.
Is this a dream ?

(First person view story and it is my first one of this kind, and tags will be added as story progress and follow in my blog for updates)

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 20 )

3665775 To tell the truth it have noting with the story to do

You could work a little on the grammar, but the idea of the story is good :)

3666468 thanks for the heads up .. much appreciated

triangle? roof jumping? hmmm...

3679850 glad to hear it, as am i. keep it up:raritywink:

3679852 Thanks but just so this is out of this world ... its not a crossover

3679864 no worries, i got that. it was just interesting

Awesome chapter and story!
AsdfghghfhdhdhfhsgfgagdgGdgadgahdhdghhfhshdhagdfgaag so many love to this story.

3712943 thanks i will try to make it even better :moustache:

For a first... I got to admit... It is good, REALLY good.:derpytongue2:

Awww this cliffhaanger was 20 negative percent cooler than most cliffhangers.
Cant wait for more chapters now!

3737552

... wait you saying it was a good cliff hangar or it was aa bad cliff hangar ?

3738505 It was way too good to be existing on this physical plane of existence.

I bet this story will be really interesting and cool once I have a better picture of whats going on. Right now I only see puzzle pieces.

Really a bleavh rip off?

3918262
kinda .. I will use more original content from now on like the creation of the ''soul'' and story ... look many have done this a lot before me. I will go with original content ... there will be some subtle references here and there but it will mostly be original content.

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