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How the Changeling stole Hearth's Warming

Alteratia decides that she can stop Hearth's Warming and steal the ponies spirit by stealing their gifts.

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Tachyon Xenophile

Tachyon Xenophile #1 · Dec 21st, 2013 · · ·

DawnRose

DawnRose #2 · Dec 21st, 2013 · · ·

I loved this story. the writing is great. but there were just a few erorrs. like this one for example:

Just before ~~down~~ she finished her task and left on her chariot as quick as a flash.

down sould be dawn.

~DawnRose~

MacIsBest859

MacIsBest859 #3 · Dec 21st, 2013 · · ·

3662503
And fixed, thanks for catching that!

DawnRose

DawnRose #4 · Dec 21st, 2013 · · ·

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No prob.

Comment posted by DawnRose deleted Dec 21st, 2013

Bowow

Bowow #6 · Dec 21st, 2013 · · ·

Alteratia has definitely gone off the deep end in this one, Obsidian.

Tatsurou

Tatsurou #7 · Dec 22nd, 2013 · · ·

This was weird but cute...even if it didn't really fit the "When They Were Young" theme since none of the youngins were involved.

MacIsBest859

MacIsBest859 #8 · Dec 22nd, 2013 · · ·

B>>3662808 Yeah, I just got the urge to write this morning and couldn't come up with a decent way to work the little ones in. I originally thought about Chyrisse playing Obsidian"s part, but he fit the "Voice of reason" role better.

Tatsurou