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Silly shipping with a slice of slapdash snugglery.

Rainbow Dash decides to delve into the depths of expression through emphatic embraces with her friends, because hugging is magic. If it just so happens that Applejack seems to be the superior snuggler, well, who is Dash to turn down a challenge?

The actual story contains a lot less obnoxious assonance than the title, but c'mon, doesn't it just roll right off the tongue?

Written for the delightfully dapper DbzOrDie and long, long overdue. Better late than never, right? Uh, right?

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 116 )

Why are you not constantly writing pony, since your stories are always the funniest things I've ever read until the next one?

This must be updated. You've got 24 hours. Get to writing. :rainbowlaugh:

I love it.:rainbowkiss:
I want moarz :raritycry:

That alliteration is an abomination of associated adjectives with allocated assonance and I won't allow it to admonish the arbitrarily apprehensive atmosphere.
And now I will read.

Okay I read
And now i want more

Cuddling ponies are, indeed best ponies. Really love the flow of this, and it doesn't hurt that I love Appledash. Keep up the fantastic work!

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Hey, thanks! I'm glad I managed to hit the mark, because after rereading something a zillion times the humor kinda loses its edge, and then I'm all "is this actually funny, or should people be throwing tomatoes at me?"

24 hours, eh? Challenge accepted! No, wait, that other thing - declined. :derpytongue2: But I'll definitely try to update this thing ASAP. Its a lot of fun to work on, and I've got lots of time to do it now, ostensibly. Glad you're enjoying it so far. :twilightsmile:

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Glad ya like it! Moar shall be delivered sometime. Sometime exists approximately soon-ish. Probably. :derpytongue2:

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That - that was beautiful. I submit to your superior sound-expressing senses and attribute you with the most astonishing and admirable ability :moustache:

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Glad you're enjoying it! And thanks for mentioning the flow. I always wonder if my ramblings end up being cohesive enough, so its nice to see that everything makes sense when its outside of my brain. :derpytongue2:

Applejack could elaborate on how "Twilight's sake" was not a proper replacement for "Luna's Moony Backside" or "Celestia's Sunny Snicker-doodle."

Rainbow Dash seems to have become a less swear-y Littlepip.

Okay, this may sound rather rude, but I mean no offense by it. It's just something that slightly bothers me, so I'll just get it out of the way before anything else.

Technically, the title isn't using alliteration, but rather, assonance.
Alliteration is when the same letter is at the beginning of the majority of the words, like if I said, "So Sea Swirl is selling seashells soon? That's so stupendously super."
Assonance is when the sound being repeated is within the word, and is predominantly a vowel sound. Like if I were to say, "Despite Twilight's plight, she had frightening might."
So you see, the story's title is, in fact, assonance, not alliteration. The chapter title's alliteration though.

Okay, turning off the grammar nitpicker in my brain now.

This story, so far, is somewhat adorable, with wonderful humor. Now, while I say somewhat adorable, I fully expect it to reach the levels of cute associated with certain individual ponies such as Fluttershy or Sweetie Belle. Why? Because it's an AppleDash story about Rainbow Dash going on a quest for snuggles. She even calls them snuggles. And Rainbow Dash is possibly one of the single most adorable ponies there is when it comes to her interaction with objects of her affection. And as for the humor, I now fully expect it to become a running joke for Rainbow Dash to use Twilight's name in vain in increasingly creative and colorful ways. Really, that bit was brilliant.
To summarize, this story is wonderful, fantastic, terrific, and all those other good things. Keep up the great work!

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I knew people were going to catch me for that alliteration/assonance thing! I even debated mentally about changing it, too, but then decided against it. I just used alliteration as a (totally incorrect) blanket term for all the similar sounds I use throughout the story/chapter titles and story description, because I'm immature and think it sounds better than assonance (snnkt, ass) and hoped no one would notice. Thank you for calling me on it, though - grammatical accuracy should trump my childish brain. :derpytongue2:

I'm really glad you're enjoying the story so far, and hope I can deliver the levels of fun and adorable-ness the beginning promises. Thank you muchly for all of the support - Rainbow will indeed get creative with Twilight's name, much to a certain alicorn's chagrin. :facehoof:

FINALLY! AppleDash is getting some of the 'spot light' around here!:pinkiehappy:
~GalaxyDust:heart:

>The way it shut behind her rung
rang

Comment posted by Zeyon The Green deleted Dec 21st, 2013

That was so cute! :D I can't wait to read more. I mean, I can wait, and I will, but you know what I meant. You've got yourself a favorite from me! ^_^

So adorable. :rainbowkiss:

Paperwork would have to wait – she had science to do.

themcp.webs.com/RD_tries_Science.jpg

Yay, big words. I like big words. :twilightsmile:
Looking forward to more. :pinkiehappy:

never turn an aj/rd fic away especially as its cute...please continue...:pinkiesmile:

A hugs, cuddling, and snuggling story. Not enough of these.

Who/where did you find that cover picture? I love that art style.

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Creative swears that aren't really swears are always the most fun. :derpytongue2:

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Glad ya like it! :pinkiehappy: Appledash is pretty fabulous.

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Nice catch! The rung/rang thing always gets me.

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That's amazing. :rainbowlaugh:

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That, though. :derpytongue2:


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Aren't they just? Its hard to ever have enough hugs or ponies, so why not combine 'em? :rainbowkiss:


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Thanks a bunch, and glad you're enjoying it! I shall try to keep the adorable at maximum capacities.

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Alas, her friends just aren't prepared. It'll be interesting, hopefully. :rainbowdetermined2:


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I like big words and I cannot lie, you other writers can't deny, that when a sentence walks past with an itty bitty clause and a big word in your face, you get sprung...

Sorry, couldn't resist. :twilightsheepish:


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Thanks! :rainbowkiss::ajsmug: - they're adorable, aren't they? I just have to stick 'em in a room together and the cute writes itself.


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I know, right? Fluffy, rainbow ponies need a hefty daily intake of snuggles to function. I'm pretty sure its a fact. Glad you're liking it so far. :twilightsmile:


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I just typed in Appledash hug into Google images, and it was one of the first few that popped up. Its delightful, isn't it?

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Yes, very! That and the fluffy pony style are very visually appealing. :twilightsmile:

please dont talk this the wrong way but WHAT IS WITH YOU AND THE RHYMING TITLES ARE YOU ZECORAS LONG LOST COUSIN OR SOMETHING ...* ahem * sorry ... got a bit carried away there :twilightblush:

Oh my.

Right then. You have my fave on this one.

~Skeeter The Lurker

I liked this a lot. I will read more when more comes out, you have my word. I just love Appledash

Aw. Now this seems cute! Fluffy, non-tragic, and just filled with romance to the brim. I shall favorite and reed. :ajsmug: :heart::rainbowdetermined2:

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I know, right? Fluffy, rainbow ponies need a hefty daily intake of snuggles to function. I'm pretty sure its a fact. Glad you're liking it so far. :twilightsmile:

Like the headcannon. I really like stories about cuddling and similar forms of physical affection. Now, I generally prefer platonic rather than romantic ones, but that is a slight preference. This is all because I am very much into platonic hugs, cuddling, and snuggling IRL. Sadly, I don't know many other people who are the same way that I am comfortable with and they comfortable with me :fluttercry:

"Luna's Moony Backside" and "Celestia's Sunny Snicker-doodle" are now in my pony swear vocabulary.

amazing.

As I said with the Appledash story "Trial run", Appledash is best ship. I can prove this with lego blocks. I'm giving this snuggly tale an upvote, watch and a fave . Keep on writing, please.

You sooo just earned a follower!:rainbowlaugh:

I only got around to this now... and wish I hadn't waited. THE APPLEDASH OVERLORD COMMANDS YOU TO CONTINUE! :flutterrage:

:rainbowkiss:

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I secretly am. Don't tell anyone, though.

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Thank you muchly! I will do my utmost to continue earning it.

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I know, right? I was flicking through it looking for new stuff, and then, bam! I was all, "this looks really familiar, hey wait a minute..." :derpytongue2:

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Glad ya like it so far! Appledash is my favourite, too.

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Thank you, and I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. Happy fluff is always fun to write, so I'm glad people like reading about it, too. :twilightsmile:

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Hugs are great, in stories or in real life. I know at my school they bring in therapy dogs for people to go snuggle and pet when they're stressed, and it works wonders. Plus, dogs are always happy to snuggle, even if there aren't any huggy people around. :pinkiehappy:

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I'm not sure where those came from, to be honest. One minute I was wondering what to write, the next those were on the page in front of me. The human mind is a strange thing. :derpytongue2: Glad ya like 'em - hopefully there'll be more silly names to come.

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Lego blocks? There is no other evidence so concrete or irrefutable, surely. :derpytongue2: Thank you for all the support - and no worries, the Appledash shall continue!

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Yay! Thanks for the follow, and glad I could make you laugh, or at least express laughter through a pony video. :derpytongue2: Hopefully the next bit is as entertaining.

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Overlord? Pfft, I have a union, you can't make me do squat. :derpytongue2:

let my friend here tell you how many likes this deserver * vegeta* ITS OVER 9000

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The overlord needs to calm himself, or people like me will stop requesting things like this :ajsmug:

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Bad translation. The real original was over 8000, but for some reason, the miss-translation stuck.

Oh well. I still get what you mean. And Vegeta's scouter is still broken.

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Hey, I'm just accepting the name people gave me! I didn't come up with this!

And all I want is more of this story :pinkiehappy:

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I will defy you to the bitter end. The only overlord here, are our holy patrons: Applejack and Rainbow Dash.

Also known as the Snugglegods

Aww. ! This is really sweet. Will be awaiting more! :D :twilightsmile::heart:

Love it! Cant wait for rhe next chapter!

How could I have possibly missed this one until now? D:

This is already fantastic and I eagerly await the next chapter. Rainbow Dash and snuggles are just too good together.

Rainbow? A bit of advice. Taking the easy path to avoid difficult confrontations never works out best in the end.

rainbow dash is making logic!
DO.NOT. WANT.
:raritydespair:
gah! brain need... candy

3659150 The first chapter's title, however, is a fine example of alliteration.

And I agree that the snuggle quotient must rise.

SHL

This is awesome, no doubt! You earned my thumbs up and my favorite, for the moment. We'll see if you earn more in the future :pinkiehappy:










Wait... Rainbow Dash is gonna do science?





Everypony. Run. NOW.

Yay another fic! I loved the last one, cant wait for more!:rainbowkiss:

Just wondering.. Will there be another chapter? I just didnt know if this was a 'one chapter' type of thing or not. Cant wait for more! (if its coming) :pinkiehappy:

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There'll be a bunch more chapters! Well, at least four more - I'm not sure that actually qualifies as a bunch. I'm nearly done the next one, so it shouldn't be too long till its up and ready to read. :twilightsmile:

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