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Sadie


Don't hate the approver, love the adorable RariFace and squishy cheeks.

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Sex change?

Intriguing

Oh my G-O-S-H :O

Comment posted by TheAmazingPeanuts deleted Mar 18th, 2014

Mommy spike interesting cant wait to see what happens

Spike was burnt to a crisp (So he's dead :fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::applecry::applecry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry:) But now he's reincarnated, but not as just a purple and green dragon like before.......

....Wait for it....

....He, or should I now be saying SHE, has come back to life/the land of the living as a DRAGONESS, and not just a dragoness, but apparently a very fertile, very PREGNANT dragoness.:pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp: Which kinda implies that the dragon that basically killed him before she came back to like also basically raped her and left her pregnant.

And, not surprisingly, Spike's (my mistake, Spines') is in an emotional wreck, poor girl. This is definitely not the proper time for Twilight to go all nerd/bookworm trying to find out what and why this happened---now is the time for her to sit down and comfort her new sister and mother-to-be.

And as an affont to the next chapter, Rarity does need to go easy on Spines. It's not every day that somepony wakes up and realizes that she's a female. So no gossip, no putting people down, no nothing. Often times, Miss Marshmellow tends to do things that makes things that are already testy a bit worse. Think about where she's coming from.

That's a lot of fucks for a baby dragon at the start there.

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I've heard far worse come out of five year olds, so who can say? :rainbowwild:

Wait..... murder, sex-change, and impregnation? Dang that other dragon really throw Spike under the shit train. Also is this anthro or something because why does Spike, um Spines, care about being naked?

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He's partly humanized, which would have been established in a later chapter, and I forgot to tag the story with.

4097646 Most five-year-olds pick it up from their environment, be it parents or unrestricted access to 'mature' media. Twilight doesn't seem the type to swear openly around a youngling, and she probably wouldn't allow him access to material like that.

Also, meanwhile in Bizarro Equestria...

it didn’t quite look as tame as it had been ever since they fixed the Tree of Harmony.

This word does not mean what you think it does.:raritywink: You're looking for wild or perhaps feral. Either that, or the wording in the entire sentence is just off, and you are implying that though the forest has been more tame since the Tree of Harmony event, it is looking more wild again. Either way, something here doesn't sit right.

I'll fav to keep track of this, because it's definitely relevant to my interests.

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Physically a baby. He's been around for about 15 years so far, in the company of Twilight Sparkle. He's probably smarter, more mature and better educated than 90% of Ponyville.

Also, I really hope theres an explanation linking immolation, sex changes and impregnation. And possibly spontaneous aging. Did he piss off Nozdromu or something?

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Yeah, part of the problem is that I've had to change my original plan of releasing the first three chapters at once, which has some of the answers to what's happened and why he's acting differently. I released this chapter now because of just how long it was taking to get the next two done, hence some mistakes and other plot problems.

I'll be doing my best to address them in the meantime, thanks for being patient.

Wait... So no scales? And now a woman?

Damn that freaks me out, losing the one thing I care about would fucking kill me (... Basically myself, but it's not because I'm an egotistical idiot... I'm just limited edition). I don't think I could be a woman... Seems to hard to me.

Wonder how this is going to fit into the Mature/Sex category considering spike is already pregnant. :rainbowhuh:

so as spike grows since she still a long lived dragon in a way will more dragon trait appear? would she be considered a exotic dragoness?

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Well, there isn't really actual sex, there's just a lot of references and examinations and discussions relating to all of that. The tag system is a little generalized. :rainbowhuh:

Holy shit. Why is it that the thing that creeped me out the most is her (at least partial) blindness?

Well...that's interesting. Now to see how many 'Spike is a Girl/Spike becomes a Girl' haters will show up. Need to take down that 'Human' tag too.

4098568 I think it's quite clear that Spike isn't a five year old in this fic. So far his/her behavior is on par of that of a teenager...So around thirteen years pony age. And Spike might very well have unfettered access to mature media. Spike does live in a library, after all.

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It's up there temporarily until the story allows for a proper analysis of what Spike is, to help avoid confusion with the readers in the meantime. :twilightsmile:

4099353 Ah...M'kay. Now all I got to do is sit back and watch the haters rustle their jimmies. Because it's really their fault if they're uncomfortable with stories like this.

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Yeah, I knew that I was going to get some hate from certain Spike fans going in, and next chapter is probably going to upset the Sparity fans too. But that's not the point of the story by any means, so I have that much decency.

4099383 I like to make watching for dislikes into a game. That way I know how badly certain people read trolls have their dick on backwards. There are a lot worse things than this story out there. Case n' point: My stories. They suck the warty ass-tits of *insert random deity you don't like here*.

Maybe there'll be some decent romance later, considering you already have a pretty good start. Romance is hard to do, but I can see a small potential for it here.

4097376 not just that... pregnant too...

ooo this will be good don't rush please~! want the best so im willy to wait for my chapter!

Well this story is rather strange... faving.

4099196 I never said Spike was. Note the context to which I responded. :raritywink:

I'm confused. Is Spike an older female version of himself, Is he half human, half lizard, half dragon or... AUGH! MY HEAD HURTS!!!

4100419 I know, I was adding on to your argument.

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Yeah, I haven't read the chapter yet, but from the description alone, I feel like this story is convoluted enough to warrant a "Random" tag.

Well, idk, I mean it's interestin :applejackunsure: but, for rite now (n' maybe onward) I feel bad for :moustache: (or whatever ponies call him as a girl :rainbowhuh:) now that he has become a pregnant dragon/human hybrid :fluttershysad:. Which is thx to that flankhole dragon roastin him :twilightangry2:; altho it probally wouldn't hav done that maybe if :moustache: didn't throw his gummy shoes in t first place :duck:. Anyways hope things turn out better later on :pinkiesad2:

The sudden swearing seems out of place.

Please update this soon, you've got a gem here :pinkiehappy:

Rally the canons! Swap the poop deck! I have a good feeling this will be something !

I'm actually very much interested to see where this will go in terms of a multi-chapter story. You've already won me over with the emotion and the captivating dialogue (save for the profanity, but I'm not complaining).

My Kudos to you. Not alot of stories out there right now like this that actually grab my attention.

I'm curios about this. I, favouriting for a later read

I'm normally not one for fics where sex is spoken of, but since that hasn't happened here aside from spike saying *dick* I will continue to read this.

Those short/ long descriptions caught my eye. Will read later today. Sounds promising.

I'm not one for clops but I am going to keep an eye on this

Why there is a human tag in this story?

I cut out most of the swearing, hopefully it sounds better now. I guess. :applejackunsure:

This story now has 12^2 likes. :twilightsheepish:
And then I'm sure someone's gonna go ruin it...

Beside the pregnancy and bare skin patches, does Spike look any different?

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I'd say the boobs and hair would be the other differences, and longer/pointier spines. I'll be doing a full description eventually.

PLEASE continue this, I'm begging you, continue this work of glory!

When will there be another chapter I need more!:pinkiecrazy:

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