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Discord gets released from his Stone Prison after Celestia and Luna decide he might deserve another chance - taking away his powers and under the strict eye of the Princesses, it would seem Discord couldn't be more harmless.

He does cause a lot of chaos though, to the faithful student of Celestia, as she had eagerly took over the task of watching over Discord as well by giving him place under her own roof, hoping to learn more about the Draconequus' species, his powers and his motives, but surprisingly learning much more about himself as a person. Which puts her in many awkward, embarrasing and pretty hilarious situations most of the time.

An adventure of a silly one sided (???) love and a look into the heart of Twilight Sparkle.

First Published
14th Mar 2012
Last Modified
18th Jul 2012

Discolight? DISCOLIIIGHT! :raritystarry:

Tracking.

Well, let's see where this takes us!

Color me intrigued :trixieshiftright: tracking!

>>321111

I find the lack of Discolight on FIMfiction disturbing. :twilightangry2: :rainbowlaugh:

I WANT MORE NOW

Edit: WRONG STORY, but I still want more

>>321307

The second chapter is actually quite close to finish, but it is so late here, I have to go and get some sleep. :rainbowlaugh: I leave you with a promise of a next chapter tomorrow! :twilightsmile:

EDIT: HAHAHAHA, you made my morning, lol! xD Thanks anyway, haha :P

It's pretty good so far~! I'll keep an eye on it.

heheh Hellements of Armory... stay out of my shed.

But seriously other than the multitude of spelling and gramatical errors good fic.

I saw it was DiscoLight and immediately tracked it. Then I read it and it only makes me wish I could track it again. Can't wait for tomorrow.

Dron't U Gust hait speeling and Gramaritacal errers?

Fix some of the grammar errors. I can auto-correct some of them as I read, but others I had to stop and reread sentences.

Still, tracking anyways. And personally, I wouldn't have removed all his powers, just most of them.

You have a lot of weird errors scattered about, I think this may have needed another edit or two. The premise is interesting so I'll track it, but you seem to need to add some polish to your work.

Ooooh this should be good. I've always been a fan of the Twilight-Discord pairing but you really don't see very many if any stories with that pairing. I'm looking forward to seeing how she fall's for Discord and how all of equestria will react to it. Somehow i don't think her parents her teacher and some of her friends will approve. I can see Rarity trying to set up Twilight with a somepony when she finds out. Hey i don't suppose you know about any other stories with this pairing.

>>321726

Yes I do, a lot of people have been complaining about those, so I will definitely proofread it... again. :ajbemused: I am really bad at that, haha. Thanks for the warning. :twilightsmile:

>>321999

Thanks for the warning, I will definitely get to it soon. :twilightsheepish:

Finally, a dedicated Discolight fic.  Tracking automatically, man.

You could do with some more proofreading, though.  Definitely caught some mistakes in there.  No worries, though :).

>>323499

Haha thanks, the next chapter should be up in the next hour or so ( I think ).

Aww, shucks, would it be too much of me to ask you which mistakes were those? At least one or two, I hate being grammatically incorrect. :twilightblush:

>>323505

Good lord, in the next hour?  Like Xmas, this is.

I've got about... *counts on fingers*... five exams to study for right now, so I haven't got the time for a good old-fashioned listing.  But when I grab a study break, I'll go through and write 'em up, send you a PM, ya?

:yay:

>>323523

Wow, I too am having exams soon! And yet, here I am, writing fanfiction. :twilightblush: I do understand your educational obligations, so leave and don't come back 'till you learn your stuff! :derpytongue2:

Oh that would be wonderful, thank you. Hear ya later! :twilightsmile:

Sweet Jesus I want more! :flutterrage:

also my first first. yay! :yay:

>>323926

Holy snap, Flutterage! Run for your life! :raritydespair:

Thank you~! :twilightsmile: I'm planning on making a chapter a day (if I have the time, of course) so expect a new chap tomorrow! :pinkiehappy:

unless your trying to make Celestia sound stresed i call OOC Celestia. ("I totally did say that; did I not, Luna?") <-- totally? to me all of it sound OOC but realy "totally"?

choas chess does sound fun have to give it a try :pinkiehappy:

good chapters so far as well can not wait to read moooooooorrrrrrrreeeeeeee :flutterrage: :twilightsmile:

Not entirely grammatically correct, I'm afraid (very entertaining though!). You missed some commas throughout the chapter, and at one point you typed "have up" instead of "gave up," which confused me for a bit.

Also, that version of chess sounds terribly confusing. :derpyderp1:

>>324198

Actually, I was trying to make her sound more like "Trollestia". :rainbowlaugh: Because this is supposed to be comedy-ish, Celestia is rarely ever as elegant and whatnot in here as she is in cartoon. I'm making her a bit silly and childish - I also personally do imagine Celestia like a quite regular pon- I mean Alicorn in front of peopl--I mean ponies whom she is well familiar with. :twilightsheepish:

Hope it didn't ruin it for ya, though. :pinkiegasp:

Would it be to much to ask for a slightly more detailed instruction for that chees game? like the order the changes go and if its the piece that got moved or all pieces? Would be hilarious to play.

>>324769

Wow, that would be complicated to write; but interesting too. I might make a one-shot about it once I get more time to though, you gave me a pretty sweet idea! ;) :twilightsmile:

>>324328 not at all just gives me an OOC feel. so how about the chees rules? i would love to get those.

Edit: guess i got the last part out 24 seconds to late.

Heh, I find this to be amusing. I love the idea of chess where all the pieces roles switch each turn. The only way to make it more horribly complicated and Chaotic would be to do that to 3D Chess. Now THAT would be a mess.

I am looking forward to the next chapter :twilightsmile:

I am going to try this new chess.:moustache:

>>325032

That's what I was thinking off, too. I'm totally trying it tomorrow. xD

I LIKE where this is going. I have to admit I wasn't a fan when this story began, but by the end of the second chapter, I was pleasantly surprised by the direction the story was going in. Discord is a nice mix between evil and merely chaotic, and although the mane six weren't GREAT, there wasn't anything in the story that annoyed me too much about them that was beyond forgiveness.

It seems like the story is just starting to get into it, so I think I'll hold back my further thoughts and predictions until it gets a little further in.

Until then~

XD That was hilarious! and very well written. :pinkiehappy:

Am I the only one who thinks this song should be the DiscoLight shipper anthem? :twilightblush:

>>326367

Oh God. That is so... SO perfect. :rainbowderp:

I salute you, I never heard this song before. :twilightsmile:

>>326381

Even a better idea! I'm off to start learning using Windows Movie Maker! :twilightblush::facehoof:

>>325032 Would you mind telling me how you do when you play it? if you havent played it, mind telling me how you see the rules for Discords adition to the rules?

>> Niklashg I haven't played it yet, but as I read the discription, I believe that the roles of the prices rotate so the left side rook will actually be a knight and the left side knight will be a bishop. Then, for each round of turns the peices swap again, this time the rook is a bishop and the knight is a queen or king , depending on the color. If a piece is taken, it still takes place on the rotation,but you can't use it. So if the rook is taken, the next turn the taken rook is a knight and the pawn that is next will be the new rook for a turn, and so forth. Hope I helped.:moustache:

>>326965

>>326905

Actually, I was just playing this with my brother - while it is fun, it IS extremely complicated. But that IS what makes it fun. :twilightsmile:

The most plausible solution if you want to play it SERIOUSLY, is to numerize the figures, because a piece will always substite the piece it was originally next to - and once you scatter the pieces across the board, it is hard to keep track unless you have them numerised. Of course, if you in the end only want to pretty much just fool around (much like Twilight and Discord), numerising isn't needed. :D Instead, you can switch roles not by the original order of the pieces, but by their current position, which is also a fancy way of playing - a bit easier that is.

As for the roles of the pieces; once, for example, your opponent takes your ACTUAL PIECE that represents the Queen, that role automatically disappears from the board, but if he takes, for example your PAWN with the ROLE of the Queen, the pawn role is the one that disappears. (of that one pawn only, naturally)

The changing roles rotation is clockwise, by the way. xD

Hope I helped! :twilightblush:

♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪

Awesome song is awesome so's the chapter.

this just keeps getting better and better keep it up :twilightsmile:

You bastard got me singing the whole damn song after it popped up there!

Vertigo! Vertigo Everywhere! Sounds fun:pinkiehappy:

Awesomeness! ^-^ phenominal chapter, keep it up!

One question. (great chapter by the way) how did twilight stand on the cloud? discord got no powers so it was not him and she dident do anything before going down.

>>328018

Meh, I didn't really feel the need to explain that she used magic to get on the cloud. I could edit it in easily, though. :twilightsheepish:

This, my good pony, is some incredibly awseome shit.

I am loving every word of it. :rainbowlaugh:

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