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Klabautermann 41329

Joined February 2012
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    Klabautermann's Stories (4)

    • Learning ABCs - Adorable, Bothersome, Chaotic
      Twilight unwillingly starts seeing something more that just chaos in a certain Draconequus.

      110,954 words · 8,562 views · 976 likes · 18 dislikes
    • Once upon a time...
      Ponified fairy tales.
      7,787 words · 566 views · 27 likes · 1 dislikes
    • Alice Pony Sacrifice
      The girls find themselves trapped in a Dark Dream of a world. Can they all find their way out alive?
      4,961 words · 706 views · 21 likes · 2 dislikes
    • Cutie Mark Crusade
      An unusual pony moves to Ponyville in an effort to learn find he already should, only to find more.
      13,036 words · 320 views · 13 likes · 1 dislikes
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    First of all, the thanks.

    Thanks to my editor, the Skittles and the readers Brony Fife, Paper Crease, Ma tt and to any other readers I might have missed for help on my awful, awful grammar and tenses and what not. Curse you English language!

    Thanks to my very best friend, CloudedGuardian for putting up with me and my constant excitement about my fanfic. You're awesome.

    Last but not at all the least, thanks to every single one of you who reached the author's notes after finishing this story. You have no idea how much it means to me.

    Thank you all for following, liking, commenting, favorites but ABOVE ALL, for reading. To think there's such a big number of people enjoying my silly shipping story is just... overwhelming, really.

    I have nothing to offer you as thanks but my written gratitude and that lame, anatomically wrong sketch of a scene from the last chapter.

    I will probably edit this bit after the last chapter is read, in case any of your remain confused or have questions or whatnot, so yeah. See you then, maybe.

    EDIT1: A number of you had been demanding a sequel. *heart melts* While I have no fully formed idea, I can assure you that there will definitely be a one shot; and if I think of it, a 'sequel' that will be rarely updated, of mostly fluffy slice-of-life genre.

    EDIT2: FINE, FINE. YOU'LL HAVE YOUR SEQUEL. STOP ASKING. XD I love you all so much.

    Enjoy and once again,

    thank you.


    Comments ( 95 )

    #1 · 44w, 13h ago · · ·
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    I love you

    #2 · 44w, 13h ago · · ·
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    is  there going to be a squeal????? :twilightoops:

    #3 · 44w, 13h ago · · ·
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    >>931178

    A sqeual, no.

    But I'll use my deduction skills to conclude you meant "sequel" and say... maybe. :rainbowwild: :raritywink:

    #4 · 44w, 13h ago · · ·
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    >>931190 OH you!

    :trollestia:

    #5 · 44w, 13h ago · · ·
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    Good show, good show. I highly enjoyed this silly shipping story all the way to the end. A sequel would be nice but not totally necessary, I think you ended it on a high note. :twilightsmile:

    ...That being said, if you did concoct a sequel, you would most likely receive many squees of joy, even if it was just one-shot. :yay:

    #6 · 44w, 13h ago · · ·
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    #7 · 44w, 13h ago · · ·
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    I swear to god, I will not be able to forgive you if you just leave it like here! Sequal pwease! :fluttercry:

    #8 · 44w, 12h ago · · ·
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    >>931253 This! Totally this!

    #9 · 44w, 12h ago · · ·
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    A sequel would be highly enjoyable...But at this point anything written by you would be enjoyable.

    I'm totally watching you from now on. It was one of the VERY few "Discord's redemption" story that I not only liked but was genuinely, objectively GOOD.

    It was adorable, brilliant, chaotic...Damn.

    (I can't believe I just did that xD):facehoof:

    #10 · 44w, 12h ago · · ·
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    >>931340

    Your niece is?? :rainbowderp: For her, I'd spawn a gazillion sequels!

    I guess this seals the deal. :rainbowlaugh: I'll definitely have to write at LEAST a one shot or something. xD I'll see how I stand with time. :derpytongue2:

    #11 · 44w, 12h ago · · ·
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    >>931371

    Write a sequel, or I'm coming for you. :pinkiecrazy:

    #12 · 44w, 11h ago · · ·
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    >>931190 You are th best writer I've met in a very long time. *snaps fingers* You passed the test, and you can be our friend. :pinkiehappy:

    #13 · 44w, 11h ago · · ·
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    >>931190 a Squee was already given, and I will happily wait for that "maybe sequel"

    amazing story

    #14 · 44w, 11h ago · · ·
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    This has been an amazing ride from beginning to end.......oh fuck I'm getting emotional:fluttercry:

    Sequel....

    #15 · 44w, 11h ago · · ·
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    26 chapters.

    Hundreds of paragraphs

    Thousands of words.

    And they don't kiss until the end.

    You must really have enjoyed watching us beg for that moment, you terrible, wonderful, sadistic, amazing lout.

    I request, nay, demand an unequivocally fluffy slice-of-life sequel full of so much cute, you could weaponize it and conquer entire continents with.

    #16 · 44w, 10h ago · · ·
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    I'm soo sad now its over all good things come to an end i know but this ended too soon for me it was sooo wonderful and fantastic i know i will be reading this again. great job on everything i loved this story its going down as one of my all time favorites and that's saying something.

    i really REALLY hope theirs a sequel where Discord and Twilight finally end up

    i mean how else are going to get some little Discords and Twilights running around? hehe

    not mention Rarity would love to hear the gossip X3

    so heres hoping for the next part if not it was a great ride that i will be riding again very soon

    #17 · 44w, 9h ago · · ·
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    So much win :yay:

    I loved this since the first chapter till the end

    #18 · 44w, 8h ago · · ·
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    good story :trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright:

    #19 · 44w, 8h ago · · ·
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    Amazing story bro loved it:pinkiehappy:

    #20 · 44w, 6h ago · · ·
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    holy shiet, i just pooped my pants

    and shed manly tears

    #22 · 44w, 5h ago · · ·
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    woahwoahwoahwoah what what what what what

    Why's my name up there?

    You must have gotten the wrong name.

    Surely, you've gotten the wrong name.

    #23 · 44w, 4h ago · · ·
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    >>932500

    I surely haven't, dear Sir! :pinkiehappy: I mean seriously, you proofread and edited three or so chapters of mine! I can't forget such help so easily! :pinkiesmile:

    #24 · 44w, 4h ago · · ·
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    >>932531

    Three chapters?

    I'm still pretty sure that I didn't do anything...

    I blame this appreciation upon my older brother, whom admits he hates ponies for no reason and admits that he should probably give the show a chance who does not know that there are websites for fanfiction other than fanfiction.net.

    #25 · 44w, 3h ago · · ·
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    Well, the hope of a sequel is better than a black horizon. This truly was a fantastic ship. It began as a story of rehabilitation, developed into a taste of inception, worked so beautifully with the detail in personalities involved, and spent so long fleshing out the relationship that, when the long anticipated kiss finally arrived... it was the most beautiful thing of all.

    It didn't rush, it took it's dear sweet time. That kind of pacing is rare these days. Congratulations, you have written a masterpiece.

    #26 · 44w, 2h ago · · ·
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    >>931253

    Shit, girl, Twi you're gonna have some really weird foals.

    #27 · 43w, 6d ago · · ·
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    :yay: You're amazing. That's all I could say.

    #28 · 43w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>933007

    Oh Heck yeah, someone finally noticed that! :yay:

    While not planning on treating him as a "test subject" (that DOES sounds quite disturbing), she did approach the whole thing with quite an attitude, as in "it'll be exactly as I planned it and he'll behave exactly as I expect" - maybe kind of like a pet. xD It is hard to say with my limited English vocabulary.

    As for the studying, it's more like, "pull the information out of him". xD Based on what he might, and might not say.

    #29 · 43w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>931658

    Yes, this must happen!!!:yay::yay::yay:

    #30 · 43w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>932940 Well said... well said indeed.

    #31 · 43w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I would be very pleased if you only fed our emotions fluffy one-shots depicting Twilight/Discord asking the other out on a date for the coming weekend. Discord comes back, happines, either one asks the other on a date for next weekend, week with fretting on both sides, (perhaps Discord asking random ponies he meets what he should do for Twilight on the date, in fact do that, that would be awesome, cute and funny), then their first date, second and so on.

    #32 · 43w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>936135

    We're thinking very similarly; something cute like that is pretty much what I had in mind for a "sequel" since all of the fanics fan over here want more of the fluff. One can't simply have too much fluff, that's for sure. :rainbowlaugh:

    #33 · 43w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>936269

    Well, I certainly wouldn't mind helping out with any fluff ideas. For exmaples of my work, see Element of Generosity and The Life of a Dragon.

    #34 · 43w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Twas an excellent story, and with the promise of a potential sequel, though has pleased us.

    We shall probably go and read some of your other stories now.:pinkiehappy:

    #35 · 43w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I have yet to read the last couple of chapters because I've been busy with other stuff, but I took my time to read this note to ensure that it was actually the ending since the last chapter was as short as it was. I have cried and smiled during this story, I have laughed and giggled so silly that my friends would think that I was crazy. This story has been a joy to read, an awkward shipping, yet done oh so right. My biggest gratitudes to you.

    And last of all, a thank you. You have taken your time to write this and it has been the source of so much joy for many readers. You have done an amazing job and added a spoonful of happiness with each chapter to many many people. You're a hero in yourself, a source of you. Thank you.

    #36 · 43w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>936687

    Well... wow, I... I must say, your comment actually teared me up. JUST A BIT. :twilightblush:

    Thank you for your gratitude and for reading. I'm immensely happy that there are people that felt so much for my story, as silly as it is. :twilightsmile:

    #37 · 43w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Another great story reaches its end. Good job!

    #38 · 43w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>941433

    For me, word person means more like, personality, not a human being.

    #39 · 43w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I love you man, no homo....

    Who am I kidding all the homo! :pinkiehappy:

    #40 · 43w, 4d ago · · ·
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    man, i can believe the two long fics that i was reading ended almost at the same time, i can't belive that is over...

    #41 · 43w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>935105

    Limited vocab my ass. If it wasn't for the minor blemishes in grammar, I'd give you a... a shiny.

    #42 · 43w, 3d ago · · ·
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    I loved the story and I loved working with you. I hope to see more of you around the site. Keep doing your writing thing and I think we'll all be happy here.:ajsmug:

    #43 · 43w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>936269

    We LOVE fluff! :twilightblush::derpytongue2::twilightsheepish::pinkiehappy:

    #44 · 43w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Hey, I just read you, and this is crazy. This story's awesome. So sequel, maybe? :heart:

    #45 · 43w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>962706

    Ah, yes, someone finally addressed that song. I can't count how many times I listened to that wonderful track, so I couldn't help myself to throw it in not once, but twice. That song is probably one of the best examples of free music I have ever heard. :pinkiehappy:

    #46 · 43w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Thank you. I wish I could elaborate on that further but there are just to many nice things to say about this one story. I spent the better part of two days silently reading it in my spare time from chapter one to the end, completely unable to stop. So... Thank you.

    #47 · 42w, 6d ago · · ·
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    There are no words to describe how fantastic this fic is.

    Or rather, was.

    #48 · 42w, 6d ago · · ·
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    :heart:

    has a heart cuz i luved your story

    :pinkiehappy:

    #49 · 42w, 4d ago · · ·
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    My reaction to the possibility of a sequel was kinda like that pinkie rocket.. Hold on a sec, I'mma find it.

    Complete with the fistpumps. (Hoofpumps? Whatever. X3)

    You write a good story! That's all I can say.

    #50 · 42w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I must say this has been one wild fic you wrote. It had me laughing and tearing up at regular intervals and I can't remember the last time I felt so at home with the characters. You did a damn good job on this and I thank you for writing it.

    #51 · 42w, 1d ago · · ·
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    i actually love this fanfic so much that i am reading for a second time! i never read things twice, this is actually one of my favourite stories like ever, plus points for making it mlp but even if it wasn't mlp it is still amazingly wonderful fantastic! Please make a sequel or i may cry and make sure they don't break up or i will cry more ( if you couldn't tell im a girl, so don't worry no man tears :D ) please! this is just such a wonderful book!

    #52 · 42w, 1h ago · · ·
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    :yay: Sequel!

    #54 · 41w, 1d ago · · ·
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    YES!

    Sequel ^^

    I hope in the Sequel will be more actual Romantic content.

    To the story isn't too much to say besides the fact that it is awesome of course.

    Also, when the first chapter was just released i really didn't think it would turn out this great.

    And as always: Keep up the good work :)

    #55 · 40w, 5h ago · · ·
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    That was great, I'm glad I finally got around to finishing this. :rainbowdetermined2:

    #56 · 39w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1115539

    I never said they won.

    #57 · 39w, 2d ago · · ·
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    This story was adorable. I generally dislike badguy redemption stories, but this was just so perfectly in character, for both Discord and Twilight, that I couldn't help but love it.

    Also, Discord is an epic character, and he got way too little screen time IMO :moustache:

    #58 · 39w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1124226

    Does your dislike include Dr. Drakken from Kim Possible at the end?

    Rereading this because it was so amazinuloustastic. (Amazing, Fabulous and Fantastic pronounced a-may-zin-you-lus-tas-tic)

    #59 · 39w, 19h ago · · ·
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    >>1133221 Wait, Dr. Drakken is a villain? :rainbowlaugh:

    #60 · 39w, 14h ago · · ·
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    >>1134439

    I never said he was any good at it:pinkiehappy:; heck Ron AKA Zorpox the Conquerer was probably the most badass villian in the whole series. I loved when in Stop Team Go he got hit with the attitudinator again and started kicking everyones butts at once. Fight starts at 17:45 ish.

    #61 · 38w, 6d ago · · ·
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    So much win.

    And I think you wrote Discord rather well. That's a feat all in itself :twilightsmile:

    #62 · 37w, 6d ago · · ·
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    This was a really nice and well written story and I will probably read the sequel of this story.

    Even though I must admit that I was a little bit disappointed about the romantic part of this story.

    But nonetheless a great story keep it going.

    #63 · 37w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I didn't like the shipping but I liked this story very much.

    #64 · 37w, 20h ago · · ·
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    it took me 2 days and only 4 hours of sleep to read this fic from start to finish....

    #65 · 37w, 20h ago · · ·
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    also whens the sequal coming out?:trollestia:

    #66 · 36w, 4d ago · · ·
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    how far away is the sequel? are you writing it now? If so, what chapter are you up to? have you started at all? If not, when will you start?  Is someone editing now? (please answer :) )

    #67 · 36w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>1238785

    Well aren't you impatient. xD

    The sequel is a bit far away, since it's the exam time. Also, I have a job to work at. Also, many other real life things. :| I probably won't be posting anything new this month, but I'll probably post in October.

    I did start it, but don't have much time to actually write more of it (reasons above) and even less time to edit it myself - my old editor is for some reason not answering my mail, so I'll have to find someone else. :D Hopefully that answers  your questions. :twilightsmile:

    #68 · 34w, 2d ago · · ·
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    The world needs more disco light! I told my husband I shipped them and he was speechless for 5 minutes  :rainbowderp:(over YIM) i don't care if people think its weird. I just think tei would be a better foil(?) for discord...

    I wish I was an artist. Now I wanna draw discord an twilight dancing under a disco ball :twilightsheepish:

    #69 · 34w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Im looking for another story i just can't remember the name i just remember its about twilight and discord and that this

    is the story image if anyone knows what storys name is plz tell me.

    P.s. Loved this story so much the first time i read it Klabautermann.

    p.s.s its about twilight geting discords powers when they are trying to imprison him in stone agan.

    #70 · 33w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>1343132

    Patience, child. October is the month of numerous updates, if life doesn't interfere too much. ^^

    #71 · 31w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1419192

    It is a veggie-parchment.

    #72 · 30w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I loved your story.

    After reading so much dark and mature stories recently, indulging into one that is funny, cute and heart-warming is... refreshing :pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

    #73 · 30w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>321238 you got that right!

    #74 · 28w, 1d ago · · ·
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    *Reads Decription*

    BOOM!

    That just happened.

    #75 · 28w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>321238

    yeah there such a good couple i loce this story and it love how it is lng so i have loads to read :twilightsmile:

    #76 · 27w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1579257

    Oh goodness, you left so many lovely comments! :pinkiehappy: Thank you very much for enjoying this story on such a high level, hahaah, I am very glad to see someone else enjoyed my favorite work so far. I might start posting a sequel soon, as soon as I get my life in order. :derpytongue2:

    #77 · 27w, 2d ago · · ·
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    APROVED! APROVED! APROVED! WHEN THE END OF THE WORLD COMES, HIS HOLYNESS 'GAK OF HASBRO' SHALL SPARE YOU THE WRATH OF HEAVEN! One of the best stories I've read on here in a while :pinkiehappy: Congrats :heart:

    #78 · 27w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1607107

    I hope you enjoy the sequel too, then ^^

    #79 · 25w, 17h ago · · ·
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    Discord, I`m howling at the moon, and sleeping in the middle of a summer afternoon...

    *hums the beat*  

    This story is so cool that I couldn`t just leave you without my thumb up.

    Will read a sequel as well. Nice style, dude, nice.

    #80 · 25w, 5h ago · · ·
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    Dude I loved this fic and Im pretty sure I ran out of insulin a few chapters back and the only thing OI had to fight it was sheer force of will. So now Im going to have a heart attack and die :yay:

    #81 · 24w, 6d ago · · ·
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    1001th comment on the entire story, I hope.

    Why, IDK.

    (The power of Badger trolls you :trollestia:)

    #82 · 24w, 5d ago · · ·
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    >>1708169

    Wow, 1000th comment?! :pinkiegasp: You should get some kinda reward, hahah :raritywink:

    #83 · 20w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>1875356

    discord lyrics

    i can't sit idly no i cant move at all.

    that is what i got out of that

    #84 · 17w, 2d ago · 1 · ·
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    >>1993027

    I started reading this one over a week ago. I have read up to #7 so far and it definitely looks like it will be among the best Discord fics I have read to date once I  will be done reading it.

    #85 · 17w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Didn't this JUST come out as an episode? :pinkiegasp:

    #86 · 17w, 2d ago · · ·
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    OH GOD ITS OVER!!! NOOOOOOOO!!!!!! sequel you say? mmmmmmyyyyeeeeeesssssssss....

    #87 · 17w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1999238

    I'm fairly sure episode went a bit differently than this. xD

    >>2000660

    Well, seeing as English isn't my first language I can see how soe of these things may be true. xD As for everything else, my writing is still on its long way to reach the point of perfection. :scootangel:

    Oh, and thank you SO much for saying that about y portrayal of Discord, writing him is an especially lot of fun. :yay:

    #88 · 17w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>2004176 U beat them to the idea, they just didn't want to go through the copyright stuff :pinkiehappy:

    #89 · 17w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>2005008

    Bahahah xD If that's what you think, then you should read Cryssy-Miu's fanfic. It is FRIGHTENINGLY more similar to the actual episode. :P

    #90 · 17w, 5h ago · · ·
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    >>2005016

    *takes off sunglasses*

    Mother of Luna

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    #92 · 16w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>2003349

    Sorry, this is just a pet peeve of mine :fluttershysad: Tombstone remixed the song. It was originally made by Eurobeat Brony. Tombstone's probably more well known, so he gets credit for it, but it's just a remix.

    /rant done. Moving on to reading the story.

    #93 · 5w, 7h ago · · ·
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    >>2426797

    I wonder how did you feel posting that.

    #94 · 3w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>2505547 Ow.:pinkiesick: It hit my knee...

    :facehoof:

    #95 · 4d, 42m ago · · ·
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    WELP... THAT WAS.... :raritycry:

    why did it have to END ;A;.

    It was so beautiful and oh God my feels are exploding

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