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    One day, as Lyra and Bon Bon played together in the wintery snow, a tragic accident takes place, forcing Lyra into the unknown. Now, neck-deep in this unsettling situation, the mare must make a choice. One that will permanently change her life.

    [Cover image by jcharlesmachiavelli]

    First Published
    16th Mar 2012
    Last Modified
    16th Mar 2012

    Comments ( 10 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 61w, 1d ago · · ·
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    This is a very good story. Great writing sytle. Sentance fluency is through the roof. All in all a very good piece. But thats only looking at the writing. The story in itself earns another credit. I like your style. Have a like.

    #2 · Chapter 2 · 61w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Oh my goodness a smart pony. You deserve many internets.

    Here, just pretend every card is an internet point.

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 61w, 1d ago · · ·
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    So a stupid little parody like "Council of Celestias" gets featured, but this doesn't? What the hell FIMFiction?

    #4 · Chapter 2 · 61w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Shouldn't you add the Human tag?

    #5 · Chapter 2 · 61w, 12h ago · · ·
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    >>329264 Oops! Thanks for the reminder. :twilightsmile:

    And for the record, I enjoyed your story. Don't be hard on yourself (either that or my sarcasm detector is off :fluttershbad:)

    #6 · Chapter 2 · 61w, 9h ago · · ·
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    I'm almost sad that's all you wrote. This is an interesting new direction with things. Brings up some pretty brutal questions.

    A great story overall though. Thanks for sharing with us.

    #7 · Chapter 1 · 59w, 5d ago · · ·
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    This is a great story. Clever title too =]

    #8 · Chapter 1 · 57w, 4d ago · · ·
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    dear god this is moving..

    #9 · Chapter 1 · 56w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Holy crap. So good.

    #10 · Chapter 1 · 43w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Poor Lyra :fluttercry:

    Very, very good! And epic picture :twilightsmile:

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