That was hot, adorable and funny all at the same time! Bravo!!! *applause*

I also love that it was written in a realistic way with regards to first time sex. (Well, about as realistic as it can get when the characters are a unicorn and a chimera.)

He thought that if I experimented on seeds with my power, I might be able to make plants become completely different plants, and then their seeds might actually be the new kind of plant, because that's where new plants come from. Random transformation in their seed. Chaos.

Yay! Nature Discord!

You continue you amaze me, Alara. Great story.

That was beautiful ... both realistic and sweet, and a bit sad given that we know how very wrong things will go. There were lots of nice little touches -- such as Discord having three nipples and the potential uses of his tail-tufts. You kept them both very much in character. Really, really good.

There is a lot to love here, from the chaos of genetic mutation to triplex nipples to the question of whether a unicorn mare can maintain her focus long enough to bring herself to climax. It has the same depth of thought, detail, and character you always provide, used to great effect, both in the present moment and through dramatic irony, given what's to come. Thank you for this.

Aaaaaaw, that ending made my chest hurt

But still, this is brilliant. Awkward, clumsy, teenage sex is some of the best to read, except for the boy being scared to death of hurting her and panicking when he does (I can relate to that). And while I thought his multitasking was great, him melting and babbling because of her was the best, and I really felt as though it fit his personality well. Two thumbs way up

And the whole part with the thinking tree was just a joy to read!

Very lovely, you capture the awkwardness of teenage life perfectly.

Knowing how discord's relationship is with Celestia in the future, that promise is absolutely heartbreaking. Good story though, I enjoyed reading it. The pacing was nice and there was almost no dirty slut-talk in the dialogue, just some very accurate and believable explanation of what was going on which is actually really refreshing. Nice story!