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"Chief? Can you hear me?"
The Chief's eyes fluttered open as he found himself floating in a debris filled hallway. He drifted towards a nearby wall and extended his arm out towards the wall, before gently pushing off of it, allowing the Spartan to slowly drift down the corridor. "I thought I'd lost you too." Cortana said, relief obvious in her voice. The Chief examined a gaping hole in the frigate's hull for a split second before turning on his helmet mounted flashlights, which slowly flickered to life. As he did so, he heard a faint ping of metal behind him. Swinging his head around, he spotted an MA5C before quickly grabbing it. Satisfied there was no major damage, he took the assault rifle and clipped to a magnetic holster built into the back of his armor, before drifting to the end of the hallway.
"What happened?" the Chief asked.
"I'm not sure." Cortana began. "When Halo fired, it shook itself to pieces. Did a number on The Ark. The Portal couldn't sustain itself. We made it through just as it collapsed."
The Chief reached the end of the hallway, which opened up into the endless void of space. The ships debris was still red-hot from the sudden Slipspace slowdown.
"But you did it. Truth and the Covenant. The Flood..." Cortana continued as the Spartan drifted into a room with a row of cryotube. He plugged her into a nearby holotank, which Cortana's blue form appear on. "It's finished."
"It's finished." the Chief repeated, in his usual calm demeanor. He then switched off his helmet mounted flashlights and placed his assault rifle in one of rackets on the wall nearby.
"I'll drop a beacon. It will be awhile before anyone finds us." Cortana stated as the Chief climbed into a cryotube. "Years even." The door began to close. "I'll miss you." she said somberly.
"Wake me, when you need me." said the Chief as the cryotube sealed with a lengthy hiss. Cortana nodded, smiling, as the Master Chief was frozen.
"Mayday mayday mayday," Cortana began, "this is UNSC FFG-201 Forward Unto Dawn, requesting immediate EVAC, survivors aboard. Prioritization code Victor 05-3-Sierra 0117.”
Cortana hovered gingerly on her holotank, The focus and dedication she gave to him, what she would be willing to do for him, would make her seem like his guardian angel. There, sadly for the Smart AI, wasn't much to around the remnants of the frigate Cortana and her company were stranded on.Watching over The Chief and tinkering with his Mark VI MJOLNIR Powered Assault Armor, were two of the only three things she could do. The only other, significantly less fulfilling and tedious task, was repeating the same message that she had repeated millions, no, billions, possibly trillions of times over the past twelve years.
And of course, the lack of activities the AI could perform on the desolate frigate left her with a lot of time to think.
And at her age, thinking could prove deadly for an AI like Cortana. Cortana was honestly shocked she was still functioning at the ripe ole age of fifteen years, well beyond the standard seven year life that has been set for smart AIs like herself.
Cortana then realized that she had been sitting there in a trance-like state, watching over the Spartan like some sort of stalker.
'You almost are, in a way,' a voice inside of her said.
The AI ignored this voice, as she learned long ago that arguing with this part of her only sped up her path to rampancy.
In an attempt to escape that haunting voice in her 'head', Cortana once again began to say the only thing she had really said in the past couple years. "“Mayday mayday mayday, this is UNSC FFG-201 Forward Unto Dawn, requesting immediate EVAC, survivors aboard. Prioritization code Victor 05-3-Sierra 0117.”
She went on like this for hours, repeating the same message over and over again, like some sort of cadence that the Marine recruits would chant during their physical training sessions. It was also... therapeutic, in some ways. It gave Cortana something to do, which in turn distracted her from thinking and slowing down her rapid decline towards the final stages of rampancy and her inevitable demise.
As she continued to recite her plead for help, a shrill alarm started sounding off on a nearby control panel. After a seconds delay, the AI accessed the control panel and took a moment to examine the data it was displaying.
The control panel indicated that one of the Dawn's few remaining short ranged sensors picked up a large, unidentified object nearby. After a few moments, Cortana accessed an external camera attached to the hull of the ship, which was still surprisingly working after twelve years of floating in space. The AI spotted a large Forerunner object in the distance, with what looked like similar to a slipspace rupture floating in the middle of it.
The Dawn's hull suddenly shuddered and creaked as the frigate began to slowly change it's course, sending it straight towards the portal. Alarms started to screech as the portal's pull started to cause damage to the frail remnants of the Dawn. Explosions erupted throughout the ship, causing chunks of the hull to violently rip away.
Cortana knew immediately that she needed John more than ever. She activated the Spartan's thawing sequence. The unfreezing process would be quick, which was typically painful and very dangerous for the average human, but there was no doubt in the AI's mind that Spartan-117 could handle it.
"Wake up Chief! I need you!" the Chief heard Cortana shouting as he began to stir. "Please!? Wake up John!" the Spartan shook himself awake as his senses and memories came flying back. The cryotubes door burst open as the Spartan forced his way out, his helmet mounted lights flickering to life as he propelled himself over to holotank where the AI was standing.
"John..." she began to say in a weak voice.
"I'm here!" the Spartan exclaimed as a large explosion caused a nearby door to fly open. He quickly stowed Cortana's chip in his helmet and pushed off the holotank to speed down the hallway. The inertia carried him forward until his armor's thrusters powered up, allowing for better navigation through the badly damaged ship. The Chief ducked and weaved his way through the large amount of debris floating through the Dawn, he noticed a M363 Remote Projectile Detonator floating among the debris. The Spartan shot his arm out and grabbed it, firing it at a large piece of twisted metal in his way. Suddenly, he stopped his movement by grabbing onto a protruding girder and magnetized his boots to the floor, narrowly stopping himself from launching into the void of space. He threw the sticky detonator aside and grew concerned with what he saw. Beyond him was a portal, and they were heading right for it.
"Chief, you may want to hold onto something." Cortana said as the Chief ran back the way he came and into an elevator. After checking to see that it was still operational, the Chief put Cortana's chip into the elevator's holotank.
"Get me to the motor pool!" the Chief ordered.
"On it." the elevator quickly descended and within seconds, the door opened to reveal the motor pool. The Chief retrieved Cortana from the holotank and exited the elevator. He looked around, soon finding what he was looking for. He jumped into a nearby warthog and strapped himself into it.
"Chief, what are you planning?" Cortana asked.
"What does it look like I'm doing?"
"It looks like you are planning to go on a Sunday drive in space." the Chief could imagine the smile on her 'face'.
"Just trust me on this."
"I don't have much of a choice, Chief." Cortana replied dryly. The whole frigate shuddered as it entered the portal. After about ten minutes the Frigate exited, revealing a large terran planet, large enough to be gravitationally pulling the Dawn towards it.
"What the hell?" the Chief said as he examined the planet.
"I don't know where it came from, but we're heading right for it. Brace yourself!" Cortana exclaimed as the Forward Unto Dawn started descending into the planets atmosphere.
Twilight Sparkle sat in her observatory, scanning the stars above with the telescope Princess Celestia had given her for her birthday. She was gazing at the Little Dipper as something streaked across the sky, catching the purple unicorns attention. "Wow..." she muttered under her breath, before turning away from the telescope. "Spike!"
Spike quickly ran up the stairs and made his way over to Twilight. "What is it, Twilight?" he asked, slightly out of breath.
"Come and take a look at this." Twilight motioned Spike towards the telescope. He looked through it and let out a small gasp.
"A shooting star!" he exclaimed enthusiastically.
"I know, isn't it wonderful?" Twilight said, admiring it through her window. After a few moments of observing the object, Twilight noticed something strange about the object's trajectory. "Spike, is it just me, or is it heading right for us?"
Spike examined it closer. "It seems like it is, huh?" The object suddenly grew much bigger as it passed overhead, a long trail of smoke streaming behind it.. Both of them ducked for cover as they heard it crash, its impact causing the library to shake violently. They ran outside and looked over the horizon, noticing whatever it was crashed on the edge of the Everfree forest.
"Come on Spike, let's go investigate this." Twilight said eagerly.
"I don't know about this Twilight..." Spike muttered.
Twilight rolled her eyes and smirked at Spike. "Come on Spike, what's the worst that could happen?"
"You know, I'm getting sick of waking you up." Cortana joked as the Chief awoke. Apparently, he was knocked unconscious in the impact. "Looks like your luck hasn't run out yet, Chief." He unstrapped himself and put Cortana into a nearby holotank.
"Is the beacon still online?" the Chief asked.
"Yes, it got a little damaged on entry, but it is working just fine."
"Where are we?"
After a seconds delay, Cortana replied. "I'm not sure. This planet doesn't show up on any star maps. However, I do know this planet is on the edge of the Milky Way Galaxy."
"How's the ship?"
"You can look around and see for yourself. It's trashed."
"How are we on weaponry?" The Chief wasn't about to take any chances. This is a new world; it could be housing hostile life forms. Hell, it could be a Covenant Loyalist stronghold.
"I'll have the elevator take you to the armory. It seems to still be working. Meet you there." And with that, Cortana's form disappeared. The Chief unstrapped himself from the warthog and made his way into the nearby elevator. The doors closed behind him as the elevator began it's ascension towards the armory. Upon exiting the elevator, the Chief found most of the weaponry that the armory held scattered on the floor, but many appeared functional. He grabbed four grenades, a sniper rifle, and an assault rifle. Cortana's blue form materialized as the Spartan clipped the sniper rifle to his armors magnetic holster built into his back . "And exactly what are you planning to do?"
"This is an unknown planet, right? Then I should probably figure out if this is a safe area to hold out. Is there any life in the area?"
"My scans show what may be a possible settlement not far from here. Be aware, several life forms are coming from it, I'm not sure if they are friendly or hostile. Be careful, Chief."
"Always." the Chief answered, slapping a magazine into his assault rifle.
Comments ( 67 )
I can't wait to see the chief kick some dragon ass with is bare hands!! lol kidding
>>13306 Chief? Dragon? Bare hands? The Chief is brave, but he is not stupid. But I'm sure he will kick some dragon ass with the appropriate firepower. Though, he might do hand-to-hand with a manticore.
I really appreciate all the positive criticism. I am already working on Chapter Two, and it will be out tomorrow.
Do like
Especially since you seem to be going with the character's personalities.
I looking forward to more.
Please continue with this.....
or I will send ninja grunts after you.
You don't want that.![]()
I haven't played a Halo game in years, but I always liked the dynamic between MC and the Arbiter? I take it that this is just MC and Cortana in Equestria?
>>13356 In the end of Halo 3, the Arbiter and Master Chief were in the same Frigate, the U.N.S.C. Forward Onto Dawn. They were escaping the collapsing Halo ring, but the portal collapsed and cut the Frigate in half. One half reached Earth, which was holding the Arbiter. The Chief, however, was in the other half of the Dawn. So yeah, no Arbiter, yet, anyways. And that isn't a hint to my plans to the plot, but I might include him in it. ![]()
Two things.
One: A battle rifle is only as useful as you are accurate and far.
The other thing: Try for chapters of 2500+ Words, and if you can't then chapters with 1500+
This allows for quick, decent length chapters. There needs to be much detail and dialogue given how it seems the story is going, but you also need to make sure the chief speaks mostly when spoken to, when needed, or when he really really wants to let his thoughts out, for it seems like that's when he talks.
Okay, there's a pretty glaring error in the synopsis.
You have the story happening in 2664, "Twelve Years," after the destruction of the Ark and the end of Halo 3. However, the Ark was destroyed in 2552. You have it happening in 2652, nearly a hundred years later.
>>13372 One. I found the battle rifle is great against foes with no shoes in close quarters. So a BR vs a bunch of grunts = BR wins. Two. Yeah, I normally do chapters around that length, but these are beginning chapters, not really much action yet. That will change rather quickly. As for the dialogue, it's that way on purpose. It's not going to be like that in Chapter Two and beyond, though.
Remember ninja grunts You can't shoot what you can't see Marksman.
Now look behind you....See nothing.....That just proves my point ninja grunts
Sleep tight.![]()
This should be interesting hopefully chief doesn't jump the gun when the pony's show up ![]()
Based on the first chapter, it looks good.
Will the chief have equipment such as a bubble shield?
Oh and also, just how much ordnance is in tact?
YOU BASTARD!! I WAS THINKING OF DOING THIS SAME THING!!!
Haha kidding. Well, I was serious about thinking of this same idea, but apparently someone got to it first. Oh, well, there's probably going to be something along the lines of this in Halo: Fall of Equestria (spoiler alert).
Anywho, it looks like this is off to an excellent start. I can only imagine how the Chief - a killing machine bred for war - will fare on a planet of friendship and magic. ![]()
Now that I think about, I don't need ninja grunts.
Update this story or I will glass your entire planet!![]()
Who needs a switchblade when you got a chainsaw.![]()
>>13549 Yeah, you also gave me the idea.
>>13561 She will either shit herself, or snap his neck like that bear.
>>13478
Oh well, I really love your story. I'm glad you like this one too.
I honestly didn't expect to get this much of a positive reaction when I made this story. Hell, I was expecting a bunch of haters and trolls. Chapter Two is out.
MAGAZINE! NOT CLIP!!!!!!!!! ![]()
Sorry, I am very well versed and trained in guns. and that bugs be slightly.
Like when people say "Silencer" when it is a Supressor ![]()
If only this were the way Halo 4 actually turned out. I would give all my money for that.
Seems like you have a solid basis for the story here, but you jump between speaking in past and present tense. Generally speaking stories are told in the past tense, writing in the present tense sounds awkward. You might want to edit that first bit.
"He noticed a anti-vehicular pistol and grabs it, firing it at a piece of debris in his way. He stops his movement by grabbing onto a protruding girder and magnetizes his boots to the floor. He throws aside the pistol and stares off into space. Beyond him is a portal, and they were heading right for it."
The bold bits are past tense, and the underlined bits are present. You should probably switch it all the past tense.
Seems like you have a solid basis for the story here, but you jump between speaking in past and present tense. Generally speaking stories are told in the past tense, writing in the present tense sounds awkward. You might want to edit that first bit.
"He noticed a anti-vehicular pistol and grabs it, firing it at a piece of debris in his way. He stops his movement by grabbing onto a protruding girder and magnetizes his boots to the floor. He throws aside the pistol and stares off into space. Beyond him is a portal, and they were heading right for it."
The bold bits are past tense, and the underlined bits are present. You should probably switch it all the past tense.
A few other notes, You misspelled chief the first time you used it. Also your term Terran planet, do mean to say Terran as is of Terra, as in a child of earth? Or do you mean a non-gas giant planet capable of supporting life? Is Terran a Halo term for rocky planets? Also why is it capitalized.
Oooo!
Even if it's not canon it's good to know the chief survived the fall. I cannot wait to see where you took this story. *Reads on*
Good story so far, but Cortana's lifespan is 7 years? Something like that I forget the actual amount of years but it's less than 12. So 12 years later and she is still alive? Sorry, as I said good story so far and I shall read more!
Dj, it's Lild, I just wanted to know, do we need to include the ponies in every single story for FIMfiction to accept it?
Just starting this, but I have to comment, UNSC shit is tough. Forward unto Dawn gets cut in half, dropped out of Slipspace, sucked through another random portal after 12 years, and then enters a planets atmosphere and crashes. Through all this it maintains enough power to run a Grade A shipboard AI and a working elevator. And here I thought the Halacyon class was a pain in the ass to kill.
You sir, are skilled. I like how you used the ending of Halo 3 and the Halo 4 trailer for your beginning.
My brain went into overdrive at the "sunday drive in space" quote and produced this mental image:
Caboose from Red vs Blue driving a warthog through space while singing about peanut butter with the multiplayer announcer saying "sunday driver" in the background.![]()
Hooray!!! this is the first halo/mlp crossover i have read with master chief in it!
Hehe, watch out ponies. One of the greatest badass in the multiuniverse has just arrived. :D
But wait a minute. Giant, burning piece of metal fly above Ponyville and only Twi and Spike seen and hear this?!
I thought it would be logical for arbiter to search chief (in halo 3 ending he didn't want to believe chief to be dead) but no one uses this idea (at least I haven't seen anyone use it) I think it would be a great way to add arbiter to the story. Ps anyone is welcome to use that idea but want that he/she sends me a message so i don't feel like a scumbag after reading it. (okay I'm expecting too much from my idea, no one will ever use it and now I'm going to find a nice dark corner and think what fool i am.)
Twilight rolled her eyes and smirked at Spike. "Come on Spike, what's the worst that could happen?"
Famous last words...
>>1519981 I was doing some experiments to see if it would show up if I used the chapters with the thousands of views on it, so I can keep my high views."
Sadly, it did not work, so I'm just going to be making new chapters for each new chapter I write, instead of the old ones.
But, the next chapter has been completed, and is now being ran through my team of pre-readers as we speak. It should be up by tomorrow.
I am sure you and any fan of Halo and this series will appreciate what I've done with the remastered version of the second chapter.
Just being truthful. May need to read more.
I could not stop laughing at the correlation between the story and the Halo 4 trailer.![]()







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