M/M, if you don't like it, then you probably shouldn't read.
A butterscotch Unicorn stallion who goes by Midnight Wisp, helps an odd looking Changeling, even if it may come at his own safety.
I hope you guys enjoy, this is my first story, please do critique. if it does decent then ill keep going.
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Hmm, Pony x Changeling is fairly common (not that I'm complaining), but M/M Pony x Changeling?
Please, do continue.
Twilight knows at this point already? Im not sure how you planned it but if you try to establish a relationship between a changeling and a pony i can tell you its not working.
otherwise its nice to read, and unlike a lot of other first story i dont have to make painful expressions while reading. basically, i will stay here. Follow your every step. And comment EVERYTHING.
3620540 i'm trying to keep the story interesting, and hopefully i will convince you about their relationship.
i'll be trying to pump out another chapter every day or so. Currently i am not feeling to good, but i am working on the next chapter.
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Very interesting, but a word of advice.
Don't rush yourself. Personally, I prefer a well written story over a rushed one that gets updated everyday.
Quality over quantity
Also, this being the internet, you really shouldn't promise to update everyday, because nopony likes it when OP doesn't deliver. Trust me, it's frustrating when you get pressured into writing a story by a certain time, which is why I never have any pattern as to when I update. Just less stress.
3622751 that is very true. I just like to stay consistent, although i probably shouldn't have said anything about how much i may update it, as you said, i should take my time and not stress out. I just have school and i guess i felt like i needed to make it a short story. College be a harsh mistress.
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Indeed, college can be quite a bitch. You should write several chapters when you have time, and save them for when you need to update, but can't write much. That way, everypony is happy
3623411 that actually sounds amazing, i think i over thought all of this, lol. thanks man.
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Yeah, It's much more fun to be able to write what you want without being pushed for time, and saving stories to post later really works. Glad I could help.
not bad for a first story I will follow. also it seems a bit rushed because it seems they just met and already like each other but since I don't write you can ignore what I said if you want.
Ah, fuck, I was gonna come out with exactly that story. Great minds think alike, I assume...
3642224 Ha, I've actually been reading Colt cuddlers: Friends to lovers, keep up the good work man, I feel like this story was pretty mediocre, but I'll get better.
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Keep it up, DIY. You got potential.
3650007 Thanks man, I plan on writing something for Christmas, so hopefully it'll turn out better.
3650068 PM me your Skype if you have one. Let's work together.
My Skype: thesithis
3651608 Alright, but be warned, my room can get loud sometimes, but during the day it's usually quiet lol.
Nice story, but feels really rushed and lacks details. There's no transition from acquaintances to lovers in relationship of Vie and Midnight and it looks really strange, as well as Twilight's sudden tolerance to changelings and her lack of interest in changelings as species and Equestria enemies.
3680490 yeah, it was a pretty poor quality story, but quite a few people did enjoy it, so I'm very happy and grateful for that. I will be working on a story and I'll be taking my sweet time with it. I was gonna do a Christmas story, but there was to much going on.