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JeremyStorm
I'm a dude, he's a dude, she's a dude, we're all dudes; HEY!
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nice, i like it, you should do another chapter
That was fantastic. I demand a sequel!!
Nice one-shot, you should place this in the SpikeBelle group...
http://www.fimfiction.net/group/198085/spikebelle
YAYYYYYYYYYYYYY
Can we all please have some more?????
I like this!
Short, very sweet, just descriptive enough for what it is—romantic clop instead of erotic. I like it!
I see a lot of potential, but you need to work on your descriptive scenes and character reactions during such close moments
3623309 I agree, maybe something to do in the future? Please?
and let the rest join up to! 
This was quite erotic. Good job with this.
3623976 i saw you on another story with the same comment...
Not bad, not bad at all. I wish it could be a bit more descriptive at parts, but it was nice.
i nearly puked
This really needs another chapter.
Thoroughly enjoyed it though I didn't try to "clop" to it.
Nice, short, and sweet, i like it
I think this deserves a sequel
I can relate to this
I lovely nice little clopfic, though it could have been more descriptive at at some points, so the reader gety a better image as to how they sit next to each other. But all in all: well done, romantic instead of just erotic, I like it
Maybe write a sequel
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You spelled "masturbate" wrong.
Sequel! Sequel!
New ship! We got new ship!
Real comment:
Very well written! The image played in my head all the way to the end. You sir, deserve a medal!
So we got applebloom and diamond, sweetie belle and spike, now we need a clopfic on scootaloo and ?
This was a really good story but I'm still wondering if It was as big as sweetie belle
3625791
*readies wine bottle*
I christen this Ship the Spikebelle May she sail through our hearts and minds
*throws the wine bottle at the dinky boat*
*misses completely*
well f**k
They are such a cute couple.
I like this but am a bit curious: How old is Sweetie Belle here?
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She is... however old you imagine her to be. I left it intentionally vague.
3627156 More than 0, and less than a million?
YES! Sweetie Belle ans Spike is always my favorite ship! Well, done, mate, well done.
Nice,
but i feel as if the story could have been better
^^
This pleases me
3627060
t! Abandon ship! Abandon ship!
Here, let me help you.
*Ties a barrel of champagne and pushes it to the ship*
*CRACK*
*Ship got a big ass hole on it*
S
3628564 ah yes, but that's what scuba gear is for my friend. When the ship sinks people go under gather the wreckage and sell it. Thus causing a whole new shipping craze.
I'm okay with a sequel...
3627156 Then I imagine her to be atleast near the end of her teens. JUST to make it less creepy.
3625791
Though I don't agree with your decision to award the medal, I do agree with everyone's right to have the a_fucking_medal.png.
3625738
HArd to spell with one hand, I'm sure we all know
3631641 this is true
Ok, the author head it, THIS NEEDS A SEQUAL, like now, right now.
right now.....
This story is too inconsistent with them being humans or ponies.
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Mainly because they're neither. Note the 'anthro' tag.
3632119
Why a sequel? Why not another chapter? Isn't that basically what a sequel is anyway?
I agree it could do with continuation though.
3632714
Because we, as the intrigued readers, want to see what happens later on.
Because there's a visible Complete status on the bottom left of the story box. That and the author thought he probably wrote enough here.
No. That is a common misconception to those not fully educated in the literal works. A continuation is something that continues some preceding thing by being of the same kind or having a similar content. A sequel is a literary work, movie, etc., that is complete in itself but continues the narrative of a preceding work.
A new chapter would be a continuation.
A new story based off of the same context as another that has been labled to have taken place before it is a sequel.
I like this one. It's not heavy on the clop, the sex isn't long and drawn out, it's... kinda realistic. They're wet, stuck in a cave, naked, turned on, and it's convenient. It's a simple formula without seeming too much like a "how to get them to bone" setup that's deprived of story for clop fuel.
3632714
There needs to be this long story, with them occasionally coming to the cave, and then it has one of the mane 6 finding out, and then they join in, and all that shniz.
Nah, I don't really care what happens. I'm just happy this little bit exists.
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Hoo, boy, and I thought I could be thorough in forums.
Yes, there's a "Complete" mark at the bottom. That said, what's wrong with having chapters that are wholly complete on their own?
I'll admit, I didn't spend much of my education getting thoroughly engrossed in the fine definition differences (spent more time in math and logic personally), but I truly do not see the difference, mostly because this is a one-shot story. To me, it just makes sense (and saves time) to extend it into a full story IF it were to be continued. I've seen a few authors do it before.
A sequel on this short story would end up being a continuation; sure, it's complete on its own, but the story would most likely end up expanding on this. The one time I'd seen a story similar to this given a sequel that actually followed sequel format (new story from old context), it...wasn't very good writing. There wasn't enough of the old context to make much worth reading.
Final nitpick; I believe you meant to say "taken place after is a sequel." Usually, if it takes place before, it's nicknamed "prequel"
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It's good enough to stand alone, and if the author doesn't extend the story, I won't complain. I was just (ineptly) trying to get across that an actual sequel to this would need more to stand on.
3633603
Admittedly, nothing really. But that statement was told off as a joke. You know, a construct of hilarity.
Yes. Yes it would because that is what a sequel is.
A sequel of this story could stand alone without the premise of this story because it would have reference(s) of its prequel counterpart. A continuation would have more dependence of the current story because it is continuing the current story.
On a technical level:
Continuation=part of a current work that is still being told, a.k.a., a "chapter."
Sequel= new story based off of old context of a previous work
Well, since everyone has a much different mindset and the writing style amongst individual minds is diverse, this is relavent here because...?
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You're a bit selective in how you respond.
Anyway, I was under the impression that a sequel was not an expansion of the old story, but rather a new story within the old story's context. Correct me if I'm wrong (not that I'd have to ask you to).
I'm not saying it's impossible either; just impractical from my perspective.
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Selective? Quite so. I have a tendency to nitpick, just like you.
At this point it doesn't really matter what we prefer to call it. Nowadays, the term "sequel" has just simply become a more adoptive word used in literacy works. Both words "continuation" and "sequel" are so closely related yet different by tnere own demeanor. Much like wolves and dogs.
Would love to see more of this.