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WHO AM I?!?

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This story is a sequel to Stallions of Harmony - Longest Night


After discovering power of friendship and saving Equestria from everlasting night, Prince Blueblood, the bearer of Element of Magic, became a new stallion. But before he can truly become Ponyville's newest resident, he has to do something he rarely did before:

Apologize.

It can't be that hard... right?

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 29 )

Found a typo:

"J-just one..." small pause. His eye caught a glimple of Shining Armor "t-two! I mean two!"

I love it. Pretty short, but I enjoyed reading about Blue apologizing to Pinkie. Glad he's making a good amount of effort to make up for what happened. :twilightsmile:

Annual Pie Day sounds great. Now I'm imagining Blue petitioning to Celestia to make it an official holiday.

"Annual Pie Day"

Ponyville may not survive.

Ending line was fine. :twilightsmile:
Even if you haven't read the first story, (which I'd recommend, as it is a fine read and you'll get some of that precious context for what happens here) this is adorable! :pinkiesmile:
Also, I smell a running gag in terms of pink party planner identification by posh pony princes and perhaps some others. :eeyup:

3614222>>3614289 Glimples must be destroyed!:twilightangry2:

This demands shipping Pinkie and Blue for the sake of more hilarious scenes between them... And romance, yes, don't forget about that. But still, this is a good sequel, even for one aspect, but truly, this group of EoH need more adventures together.

Yeah! Blueblood is friends with the ponies of Ponyville. What adventure will he have next? What cool exploits will the Manly Mane Six get into?

That was fun. You set up a nice running gag with Pinkie and Blue Blood.
Thanks for continuing.
Good luck and have a nice day. :twilightsmile:

Is there Pinkie x Blueblood in the future? Also, are we going to see more of the CMC?

3618302 Maybe. Yes.But first, I need to actually start writing the stories about others. They need a serious injection of plot, fast!

Funny and cute little story, I liked it. ^^
Hope to see more from you in the future!

Yay, apologies and Pie :pinkiehappy:. I'm sure Soarin would love all the variety of pies at the party, both pastry and Mare types :rainbowlaugh:

3640216 That is, if he can handle THE Pie. Can anypony handle THE Pie?:pinkiecrazy:

3640220 Probably not, but I'm sure Soarin will try his hardest.
Soarin: "Challenge Accepted
She'll probably end up being the one his moves don't work on and it will break his brain LOL :pinkiehappy:

"nr 1 party pony".
It should be "no. 1 party pony".

I like how you are doing a slice of life approach, then (hoping) that you'll go into an adventure arc. Sorta feels like the show, except with more history of the characters involved (again hoping for this approach)
One thing that annoyed me was the interruption of thought with (blagh) I honestly think they could of been handled better

3761214 I don't quite understand what you mean. What (blagh) do you mean?

I ship it.

what happened between rarity and blueblood can you at least tell me in a private message or something

4966974 Tempting... but pass. You'll find out in the future.

A short, but enjoyable read. Just a quick note about this line:

No problemo, anything for my friends, and costumers.

You have the 'o' and the 'u' switched around. You make it sound like Blueblood and Shining run a costume shop, instead of a library.

without any further sexual harassment or romantic developments.

BUCK!:ajbemused: So close. This ship will sail one day. {Why are people getting me so interested in strange ships?...Eh, I love 'em.:raritystarry:}
Great story. I found it rather cute, especially the apology between Pinkie and Blueblood.

This should have been called "Pink VS Blue".:pinkiehappy:

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