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The One With The Crystal


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In an attempt to learn more about the species known as changelings, a group of scientist experiment on a changeling captive. Though the only problem is that the changeling is only four years of age. The procedures didn't go without any consequences though. Now the young changeling is free to go on with his life, but something about him isn't quite right.
Join this changeling as he makes the most adventurous journey of his life.

Chapters (15)
Comments ( 30 )

i'm not sure there is a way to make any better!! lol:twilightsmile:

This can be very very good, and it didn't start with the action either which isgood

You had my curiosity, but now you have my attention, so post more chapters.

Damn..…....need update

and now i'm upp to date good chapter keep it up :rainbowlaugh:

I like suger rush!

Thank you for the Yu-Gi-Oh! Reference.

Lolz fear the Derpy and her muffins

Well... That escalated quickly.

Pyxis…
"Abandon all hope ye who dare to enter."
For you have opened the gates to ****.

THE GRAMMAR AND SPELLING!!! IT HURTS EVERYTIME I SEE THE ERRORS!!!! A brake is used to stop cars, bikes etc and a BREAK is used as a moment of relaxation from work or something like that!

Please work on your grammar and spelling dude, it's sometimes painful to read this story despite it being really cool...

5255947
I knew I would run into a grammar nazi sooner or later, but I have to admit I really suck at checking for grammatical errors and spelling. So thank you for pointing it out and reading my story. Even if it has some kinks to work out.

5258745 Huh, I didn't expect such a nice reply! I expected you to go off you nut at me like people in my class do when I point out what they did wrong! I LIKE YOU

OW! Okay one get of me. Two stop yelling

OW! Okay one, get off me. Two, stop yelling.

I guess you going to have to wait until a personality that does know whats going on to tell you.

I guess you are just going to have to wait until a personality that does know what's going on can tell you.

Its that good? What is it about

It's that good? What is it about?

It was the way the all were.

It was the way they all were.

5260710 Bah; instead of complaining, post your corrections in the comments.

But their your friends

That's the SECOND. FUCKING. TIME.

and once again their evicted

THIRD. FUCKING. GOD-BE-DAMNED. TIME.

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