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A couple on the run, two pursuers with mysterious motives, a C-130 Hercules, an apple farmer, the Elements of Harmony, and a chilling storyline that will leave you on the edge of your seat. Sit down, because this might take a little while.

Note: Reading Detour (the first in the series) isn't 100% nessecary. The only thing that might seem confusing is why there's a C-130 and two automobiles. Other than that, you won't be left out of the loop when you read this story. Thanks!

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 51 )

Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm........ did the description say A c130 or ac130. I can't tell on a phone lolz

Hhmm, a tradegy?

Sounds tempting....

3611425 Lawl true but to unrealistic.

GUN READY *THUD*
*RELOADING*
Sir heat signature bearing down 04102 due north-west.
*gunner* I see him.
*GUN READY* *THUD*
Now if this was in equestria I'd pay to see that beast lay down da law.

3611467
GUN READY *POOOOOOFFFFF* lol

New chapter tomorrow night! I'm really looking forward to where this story is going to go. Hope all of you guys are too.

Nice way to start the sequel good job writing has improved a ton! Love this story

Ohhh so excited! :pinkiegasp: I haven't been so excited since that one time where i was like *GHASP* but come on, who can top that.

3620389 U said Tomorrow night... but.... 3 days.... *sniffle*

3638949 tonight. I'm almost done with it. There's a reason I couldn't finish the chapter sooner. Two words: finals week. Lol

When's the next update and also good job on this fanfic

3639920 the next update will be sometime later in the week. I'm not exactly sure when.

Yes finial's week..... MOST of us understand but some of us dont.... ;P LMAO jk, good luck w/school.... and mmmm pizza

Great chapter, cant wait for the next one!!!

Oh, this is turning out to be good. One question though. How did Applejack know Binary by his first name? The two introduced themselves with fake names and IDs and a calling card. Unless Binary's fake ID or calling card had his first name on there (which would be stupid on his part) there was no way for Applejack to know. :derpyderp2:Other than that this story is coming along nicely. Do continue.

3710462 Well damn. Thank you for pointing that out. It's edited now though. Thanks for reading!

UGGG, I love and hate cliff hangers :pinkiehappy:
Keep u[ the great work!!!!

Its just the worst when hydraulics go out... on ANYTHING....especially when its the door to the "Awesome fallout shelter you just gota see" -friend.

A bead of sweat made it's way down Jake's forehead as he grasped the yoke with both hands to keep the plane stable.

both hands

I think you meant hooves XD

3764238 It's people like you whom I thank for your good saves. Lol thanks

Well damn.:applejackconfused: Hope they can help the two runners and get the old crate up in the air again.

Ooooooooh sheeiiiiiiiiiit!

Finally got around to reading this after I finished Detour, and might I say, I like where this is going!

You get a like and fave from me, and I can't wait to see what happens next!

nenenennenenenenenenenneaaaaahhhH!!! WHOOSH FWOOSH BANG RAT-TAT-TAT!


(Sound from WWII ^^^^^)

3611467 the 120mm would be the party cannon the 40mm would be a Pikie Pie launcher and the 20mm would be a magic laser minigun :rainbowderp:
that would just be scary as hell.

3960254 how about a concrete filled balloon launcher?

3960254 I can guarantee that if you stick around reading this fic you won't be disappointed in what I have planned...

Just finised a mazin ArmA III op, and see my fav story updated, can this day get better¿

Welp... AC-130 Conversion time?

4015697 Lets turn the plane into a sled! :pinkiecrazy:

Fuzz busters unite tonight we take ms.puff, fluffle

UGGGGGGGGG, This ending is killing me. Can't wait for the next chapter, Good work Buddy:pinkiehappy:

Goodbye fallen comrads...:fluttercry:

That ending with all the spaces made the chapters look longer ya troll.

Klause can't be dead... There's no way! Just no way he can be... Dead...

Oh god, he's really dead!

*pulls out his baton of smiting*

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And they all died... The End! Welp... The story's over, better go back to do other things...

5623872 yeah. College kinda started and I've become so busy this whole thing kinda dropped off the face of the earth for me. I apologize for that.

There are very few things I have a desire for. If I were to be given one ability - anything I wished for - it would be to have any unfinished fic or story be completed in it's entirety - including sequels of the sort. :raritydespair:

'Tis a shame. Some of the best stories are forever Incomplete. Millions of words, forever floating around within a void of potential.

9032392
Amen, kid.

Couldn’t have worded it better myself.

Well...guess this story's done for eh? Sad; very sad.

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