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The reason I write is because I want to read a story written for myself. One day, I want to read one of my own stories and say to myself "That is the best story I have ever read."

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Well it's not actually a sequel. Here is a collection of short stories and histories detailing the life of Alternia, a changeling queen impersonating the life of Princess Celestia. These are the stories of the ruler under her mask.

Reading the main story: Princess Celestia: The Changeling Queen is a requirement if you don't want to be spoiled or confused. I will try to provide background information when I can.

For readers of the main story, there are basically no spoilers if you've read past chapter 8. Enjoy!

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Comments ( 252 )

Hm, you know you can do actual authors notes right? Because that's a thing you can do.

So Philomena can write? And Alternia doesn't re-read her scrolls? Or are we abandoning the "diary" framework in the first chapter?

3588373 The diary framework is more of metaphor per se than an actual diary.

3588383 Um.. okay. Eh, I don't really care. This story's too awesome to nitpick.

This. It's going to be good.

Reading the main sotry:

Read the main story:

Any errors in the description really drives away new readers and I'm enjoying the main story enough to want this one to get a fair shake.:moustache:

3590819 Sorry published this rather late :P

Silly changeling, I should let her know that she need not disguise herself in front of me.

:rainbowhuh:

:trixieshiftright:

Hmmmmmmm... Something is afoot (ahoof?) here... *Begins looking into Philomena's past*

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Sorry published this rather late :P

"Chapter 13 is in progress, will be out sooner or later before Season 4 starts for sure."

Understatement much? :derpytongue2: You uploaded chapter 13 nearly a month ago.

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:rainbowlaugh:

But seriously, you did mean 13 there, right? I shouldn't get my hopes up for a Chapter 14 within the next few weeks?

3594653 Yes I did mean 13 :P. Sorry, but exams are a pain.

Man, Witch Queen of Angmar? Such costume would really suit Alternia but never in 2.5 million years could I imagine Celestia wearing something like that. All in all excellent chapter.:yay:

This seems like something you should start AFTER you finish your main story, since this will just take time away from it, leaving people who would want the main story to just continue already waiting longer and longer.

3616572 Main story still a priority. :P

My 300th fav'ed story, a side story of a great story exploring Celestia as a character... with a twist of course. A pretty good choice for 300 if you ask me.

Please continue~ I loved this brief glimpse into Alternia's mind during a more stable situation. :twilightsmile:

Celestia in a Witch King armour... That's something to see.

She cleansed the darkness within you.

Because the other five ponies present were merely there to witness Twilight's awesome. :applejackunsure:

3658324 I should reword it but I wanted to explain how Luna knew to trust twilight

So, I guess Alternia won't be using that costume again, huh?:rainbowlaugh:

Seriously though, great chapter. Looks kinda unpolished (typo-wise), but it's okay.

God this might be better than the real story or whatever.

3840780 Cue spit-take

3796366 Remember, she is a changeling...

3666277 Thanks

3841880 Really that surprised you? The act of acting she has to do and the way the little stories we don't hear about before she is found out show more about Alternia than what she says and does when she found. At least I think so.

3841895 in that way the side stories are better... I just expected that my normally pre-read main fic that has far more planning and editing would naturally be better. I need to write more of these side stories...

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Sure, but everypony knows now that the Wraith is "Celestia". Kinda invalidates the costume if she wants to have some innocent fun next year.

I've been watching too much BBC. The moment I read "Le Strade" the "Sherlock" theme played on a harpsichord popped into my head.

Did you miss me?

Very nice. I want to see more of the Changeling behind the mask.

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Gender-Swapped Lord of Rings Halloween Costumes?:pinkiegasp:
Ladies and-a gentle men, I think I know what I'm reading next!:twilightsmile:

I like these side short stories. They're fun and it's nice to see your beautiful characterization in slightly less serious toned material. Alternia is still my favorite version of Celestia I've read in a while.

Despite myself, I shivered uncomfortably her dark blue stare.

You're missing a word somewhere in there.

I can't wait to see more of these, and more of the main story.:twilightsmile:

Question for Alternia: Do you have the same mane color and appearance as your sisters? I don't remember if you mentioned that in the main story.

Just re-read, your first Witch King reference... You forgot the last 'e' making it the 'Witch Queen of Angmar'... which is a little too on the money for a reference.:moustache:

Why did I read this? Now I'm even more excited for the next part of the main story!

Do you still have any interest in continuing this?

Slices of life about raising Blueblood and Cadance, about Twilight, about bonding time with Luna, about the points that brought about her realization that she had come to care for her ponies for their own sakes and not merely as a duty forced upon her... there are certainly a wealth of options still available.

Aww! This chapter, I like it! Another!

Could have sworn I read this before. Apparently not. Lots of fun. I felt special about catching all the references up until they were listed off at the end.

This is the voice I pictured. Don't know if this is what you meant by a "high, eerie ras[p]".

Her wings expanded and warped until they turned into massive bat wings. The phoenix’s graceful head was replaced by a maw of teeth.

Naz'gul?
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Oh, yup, Naz'gul.

We'll that was certainly a tad dramatic

6214808 Oh I am interested. I just need to you know, write the seaquel XD

6244150 Got it.
Wait...

seaquel

Misspelling or hint?

Do not come between a Naz’gul and her candy!
:rainbowlaugh:

I can't hold back my snickering on this chapter!:rainbowkiss::rainbowlaugh:
Especially when 'Celestia' changed back into Celestia! Well you know what I mean.
Pure Comedy!!!!:rainbowlaugh::scootangel:

Fun little story, Luna really shouldn't be all that upset once "Celestia" tell her she just wanted to have some fun herself. I think Luna was only miffed because she wasn't invited along and was instead sent off to Ponyville.

Looking forward to more side stories. And of course the main story.

Sent you a PM about some grammatical and spelling suggestions.

"Just as planned!"

hehehehehe
Reminded me of another master plotter we all know from the warp.
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The more I read stories set in it, the more I am in love with this universe. Can't wait for more side stories.

Cya
Raziel-chan

:facehoof: Bucking Thomas the Tank Engine and Corduroy!

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