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#1 · Chapter 2 · 37w, 12h ago · 1 · ·

This story is perplexing but fun at the same time. Vinyl's making the End sound very fun but the final few paragraphs kinda threw a curve ball at me.

P.S. Listen to

'Games People Play' by Grafix & Fred V

While reading this.

#2 · Chapter 3 · 36w, 4d ago · · ·

>>3587559

Well thank you! Sorry it's been a few days, but yeah, the world's a weird place.

Also, who said anything about vinyl? (aside from the character tags) Not everyone is who they say they are.

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#7 · Chapter 4 · 36w, 3d ago · 1 · ·

reincarnations?

#8 · Chapter 4 · 36w, 3d ago · 1 · ·

So wait, I'm confused, what happened to Vinyl and Octavia? This chapter was straight outta left field... But I like it.

#9 · Chapter 4 · 36w, 1d ago · · ·

>>3607232 Pretty sure this is telling the tale of two souls, through time, that find each other and live out a few major events over and over. White and Grey, Mute and Deaf, Ruby and Amethyst.

#10 · Chapter 4 · 35w, 5d ago · · ·

For those of you following, I'm sorry for this bit of silence, finals hit me hard, hopefully will have the next chapter up by friday.

#11 · Chapter 4 · 35w, 3d ago · · ·

Four chapters in... and I am very confused... :rainbowhuh:

#12 · Chapter 4 · 35w, 3d ago · · ·

>>3644098

Five chapters in... I'm not much better off

#13 · Chapter 5 · 34w, 2d ago · · ·

If I'm not mistaken this is the first chapter with dialogue. Certainly presents a very interesting world haha, will be interesting to see part 2.

#14 · Chapter 2 · 33w, 4d ago · · ·

I'm askin this because I just wana make sure

Vinyl is mute and Octavia is death?

I don't know for sure but I just wanted to know

#15 · Chapter 5 · 33w, 4d ago · 1 · ·

>>3708114

I is mute

And She is deaf (hopefully not death)

No names are used for a reason

#16 · Chapter 5 · 31w, 3d ago · · ·

A fifth chapter has not helped my understanding of this story. At all. This last chapter seemed like a different story :rainbowhuh:

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