What happens when the Act's been dropped? No more judgment, no more rules, no more time? The world's a strange place, full of ponies, and other races. But what's it like when you know it won't be for long?
this story absolutely deserves to be at the feagured page. It is an extremely unique storyline with different variating viewpoints alongside a deeper philosophical meaning.
8256162 Thanks. I wrote all 5 chapters across the course of about 3 weeks. With no proofing or planning. I do hope to either finish the story or at least continue a few more chapters but I want to be confident that I will improve it, instead of ruining the feeling that people enjoyed about it.
You clever and devious writer. If I didn't know better I'd have said artist. Wondrously crafted, but a bit too much. Even through the chaos the end has already been spoiled. I'm onto you. Good job trying though. Try and prove me wrong though. I will alert you if you have in the next chapter or in a response.
If I'm not mistaken this is the first chapter with dialogue. Certainly presents a very interesting world haha, will be interesting to see part 2.
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I is mute
And She is deaf (hopefully not death)
No names are used for a reason
A fifth chapter has not helped my understanding of this story. At all. This last chapter seemed like a different story
this story absolutely deserves to be at the feagured page.
It is an extremely unique storyline with different variating viewpoints alongside a deeper philosophical meaning.
8256162
Thanks. I wrote all 5 chapters across the course of about 3 weeks. With no proofing or planning. I do hope to either finish the story or at least continue a few more chapters but I want to be confident that I will improve it, instead of ruining the feeling that people enjoyed about it.
You clever and devious writer. If I didn't know better I'd have said artist. Wondrously crafted, but a bit too much. Even through the chaos the end has already been spoiled. I'm onto you. Good job trying though. Try and prove me wrong though. I will alert you if you have in the next chapter or in a response.